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Topic: A Beauty In Vanity FanFiction
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Smurfette
Smurfalicious
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posted 03-25-2012 11:28 PM
My first Fanfic:
Feel free to comment
"Cup of tea?" Asked Smurfette.
"Sure," He said with a smile. "Don't I look pretty in the morning?" Vanity Smurf believed he was the most perfect and Beautiful Smurf in Smurf Village!
"Sure Vanity," Said Smurfette with an unsure smile. "But what about me?"
"Meh." He said. But he was hiding a secret... he had an insecurity that only one smurf new about. And that smurf was Hundredth! He was not only insecure, but he thought Smurfette was the most beautiful smurf in the village, but she would never love him. Would she? He stared at her, wishing she was his.
"Vanity!" Said Smurfette.
"Oh Sorry, I was to busy staring at my amazing reflection."
"Sassette is coming over to play, are you staying?" Said Smurfette.
"Um, she may have dirt on her... I think I'd better head off."
"But I just made you a cup of tea?" Replied a confused Smurfette.
"Put it in the fridge, and you can save it for next time."
Smurfette came back with "Okay!"
Vanity Left, and Smurfette politely smiled to him out the window while she tipped the tea down the sink.
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-26-2012 01:17 PM
Bravo
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Seether karma and effect
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 03-26-2012 01:27 PM
very good! i have been wondering when someone might write about the two of them :-)
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-26-2012 01:41 PM
hmm i like it
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Smurfette
Smurfalicious
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posted 03-26-2012 11:04 PM
Oh, thank you very much everyone!
Chapter two
Smurfette knocked on Vanity's door -she was in shock, as was the whole of smurf village- but only to find he wasn't home.
Papa Smurf was crying hysterically over the lost smurfs "My poor little smurfs!" He cried.
Smurfette ran over and put her arm around him. "Vanity isn't home, neither is Clumsy." she weeped. But she was trying to stay strong for Papa.
"The Garden lasted the earthquake, but when the Tsunami hit...my crops were gone." Farmer said, staring at the empty patch where his vegetables and flowers were. "All I managed to save was Smurfettes favorite flower." He whimpered, holding out a pink flower.
"My house...it's been destroyed!" Cried a familiar voice. "Oh, is everysmurf okay? What about Smurfette where is she?"
"Vanity!" Yelled Smurfette. She ran and gave him a hug. "I was so worried, where were you?"
"Looking for Clumsy." He said dissapointedly. "...And we were also looking for Hefty, Poet, Handy, Brainy and Tailor. Painter, Greedy and I were searching. No such luck."
Smurfette couldn't hold back her tears any longer. Suddenly there was a horrible shaking from underneath them. Vanity had had enough, and Smurfette just wanted to be away from all this. 'Crumble, Crash!' They held hands and just stared into the distance and watched the giant wave come crashing towards them.
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-30-2012 03:43 PM
Bravo good show good show
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Seether karma and effect
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-30-2012 04:07 PM
Hooplaray!!!!!!!
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 03-30-2012 06:05 PM
you didn't waste any time getting to the excitement! i sure hope everyone is okay. love this so far! ;-)
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Smurfette
Smurfalicious
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posted 03-30-2012 07:08 PM
Thanks...
Chapter 3
The waves came crashing towards them. They squeezed even tighter. The rest of the village was running around mad. The shaking was causing Smurfette to tumble. Vanity stood right on his feet. Papa used his magic time crystals. "We're smurfing outta here before that thing hits us."
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"PAPA!" Smurfette cried. She was all alone on this red surface...where was everysmurf else? "Vanity? Clumsy? Oh, someone please help me!" She screamed. "What's going on?" The red platform was beginning to move. "Help...someone, I'm in trouble!" The moving stopped. "Oh. My. Smurf!" Said Smurfette. "I was so scared." But what she didn't know was that was the tip of the iceberg. Smurfette couldn't see what was coming up behind her...an unexpected turn for the worse.
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