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Topic: My Fanfiction Story Update!
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Squeaker
Smurf
Member # 632
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posted 02-08-2005 12:30 AM
Very Smurfy pictures, Raven Child!
"who on earth doesn't like white with pink flowers?" I imagine Grouchy Smurf would hate that kind of thing.
-------------------- I came! I saw! I smurfed!
Posts: 27 | From: Smurf Village | Registered: Nov 2004
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swarlock
Smurf
Member # 746
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posted 03-14-2005 09:35 PM
I'm enjoying this story.
-------------------- Every day in every way I am smurfy!
Posts: 192 | From: Kissimmee, Florida | Registered: Jan 2005
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Raven Child
Moderator
Member # 795
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posted 03-30-2005 08:15 AM
Since I have been watching these re-runs of the Smurfs it has given me an in idea for an interesting twist to my story.
I have reviced the story "The Smurfette Village" slightly. In chapter 1 I've added a Prologue. In the part is a written 'theory' of the history of the Smurfs and Smurfettes. There will be of course more to the story as I go on in this saga.
Also, many of the chapters got switched, as well as an added chapter. Chapter 7 is now entitled "Coping". That is yet another chapter on how the other smurfs in the villages are coping with their loss.
I have even fixed up any minor errors of grammer and spelling in the other chapters. Some even have added scenes.
Here is the linke if you are interested in checking the new improved story out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1898649/1/
I look forward in hearing what you all think. Enjoy. ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
-------------------- "The Raven Child" http://www.theravenchild.com/
Egroup: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/fanficsandfanart/
Smurf Egroup: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/the_smurf_village/
Posts: 1110 | From: Canada | Registered: Jan 2005
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<hewlet89>
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posted 06-22-2005 08:40 PM
quote: Originally posted by Raven Child: Chapter 13 and 14 have been uploaded on both fanfiction.net and my website.
fanfiction.net link to ch. 13: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2241251/13/ (please feel free to post a review at the end of the chapter. I'd love to hear any comments you may have.)
My direct website link to the story: http://www.theravenchild.com/returntothesmurfettevillage/ (I've added my guest book link on the bottom of this page if you wish to post any comments you may have about the story or the entire site in general.)
You may also want to check out the latest picture I posted based on the last scene in ch. 14. Just scroll down to the bottom of the page to see it: http://www.theravenchild.com/returntothesmurfettevillageart/
Hope you all are enjoying the story so far. The next few chapters will be focused on the rest of the smurfs and smurfettes, and their antics back in the Smurf Village. Keep your eyes peeled for my updates.
Take Care, and stay smurfy. Raven Child.
You write good stories
From: House of the Unknown Smurf
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