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Topic: Smurf fan fic:The First Smurf from the Planet smurf.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-03-2013 05:02 AM
Due to that i'm very busy with the golf management in university but yet i'm dying to continue the story so this time i'l do my chapter in a much more compact format,much shorter chapter and i trying to be more efficient too...well without nothing left to say,let's smurfing!
Chapter 10:"An unfamiliar territory and a helping hand"
After the smurfs expedition team gone to the enchanted forest and already gone through "the bridge" Barami soon follows...
Barami:Here i come! (The bridge then transport barami to his destination so fast that he passed out) 3 hours later...
Ugh...where am I?
Hmm the flyer...(Concert JF Maljean à Bruxelles 20 avril 2016)
Oh so I've arrived! but wait i'm still in Brussels outskirts,I think...send me landed in the middle of fo...hello?
Oh I'm familiar with this street somehow...(He then grabs his smartphone...) Oh it's working again hard to believe it work in this world with the my world contract...i don't see him anyone here...(random searching) (Rue du Cerf 85 1332 GENVAL (BELGIUM)
This address...oh I see...a good studio here but it's abandoned...
(Noise nearby)
Who's there
???:I'm here,Barami!
(Barami then found his fellow smurf with glasses)
Barami:Brainy! what are you...I thought you going with papa to the Himalayas?
Brainy:I was but I got separated by the wavelength it's not long enough so I got thrown to your destination wave instead...ouch that was hurt...
Barami:Are you ok?
Brainy:I don't think so...(Barami then looked at his forehead)
Barami:Oh you're bleeding!
Just,just stay here ok...
(Barami then actually run for like 2 miles before he found the nearest supermarket) (Carrefour express)
Barami:Oh ****...a friggin' carrefour didn't see that in my country for years now...(later in the store...)
OK I need this and this...excuse me...
Custom 1:Hey what's the hurry pal?
Barami:My friend need help.
Custom 1:Where what did he looked like?
Clerk:it's 20 euro sir.
Barami:thanks but i don't need your I can handle him. Here (hands cash to clerk)
Custom 1:Is he injured?
Barami:Yes,he got a cut on his forehead.
Custom 1:Hey i can help you!
Barami:you don't understand i have to help him alone.
Custom 1:are you a homo or something or need help man...unbelievable...
Barami 1:OK fine...are you want to help? I need you to know that he's not a human.
Custom 1:Oh what? are you serious,what do you mean it's he?
Barami:He's...um...ah...he's a smurf...
Custom 1:Oh Reaaally...are you high man I think it's you that needs help...
Barami:he's not gonna last...hey let's just say he's real ok why not just go try to help him can I trust you?
Custom 1:Oh yeah,I'm an ex-paramedic but i look in your eyes i think you serious about your friend
where is he?
Barami:About 2 miles away...are you still in doubt?
Custom 1:A bit but hell lend a helping hand to a crazy guy like you sure beats doing nothing and did you say he's a smurf?
Barami:Yeah...
Custom 1:oh boy this is like my dream come true to meet a smurf!
Barami:That's great but he's going to bleed to death if you still dreaming here c'mon man!
Custom 1:Oh yes! OH YES!
Barami:What a world...
Custom 1:Here take my car,I'll drive.
Barami:It's an ambulance how do you get this?
Custom 1:I got it from junkyard make it my own...you know those were the good old days...
Barami:Forget it i'll just say it's a long story but hurry man my friend is going to die!
Custom 1:Lead me to the blue buddy,chief!
To be continued...
I also have to keep it short so I can avoid the PC from crashing! you my laptop wasn't do so well now...
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-04-2013 04:19 AM
You don't give me a smurf then I'm not gonna give you a smurf as well! ![[Mad]](mad.gif)
I have the will but my motivation to keep writing which is bluebuddies turn their back against me then next time you're going to beg me to write it again!
**** ME!! and **** my fanfic!!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Sassette
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posted 05-04-2013 07:20 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Oakley Smurf:
You don't give me a smurf then I'm not gonna give you a smurf as well!
I have the will but my motivation to keep writing which is bluebuddies turn their back against me then next time you're going to beg me to write it again!
**** ME!! and **** my fanfic!!
That's quite the message... perhaps you could have just bumped your message back up and asked what everybody thought?
Anyway, I missed your story update because there have been so many new messages. (Perhaps others did as well?) My favorite line is ..."lend a helping hand to a crazy guy like you sure beats doing nothing and did you say he's a smurf?"
Hope your mood improves back to your smurfy self again, Oakley Smurf. Here's a little smurf hug *HUGS* to set you on your way!
![[Enamored Smurf]](graemlins/Enamored_Smurf.gif)
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Have a smurfy day!
Posts: 4478 | From: Smurfingland | Registered: Jul 1999
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-04-2013 08:16 AM
Well my recent comments have all been ignored and that pissed me off I'm come here the most,I'm a regular since 2009 and people here treat me like i'm just a flyer,it just there wandering around the village and no one pay attention to it and i'm NOT a flyer!
Just say something.anything rather than just went dead silent every time i post a comment.
I loved this site every evening the first thing that i look in the internet is bluebuddies after all the downtime that you guys and gals weren't here I'm ALWAYS here keep things interesting and now I've done something to keep this site lively then all i got is nothing,not even one reply is it that hard to do? Just one friggin' word,anything...and speak up even your thoughts.
You know...thanks again sassette all i need is some motivation and that's the people here,it's driving me crazy for doing a good deed that always goes unnoticed.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-04-2013 11:54 AM
So much for my attempt for my motivation (readers)...let's just say I ignored all of them. ![[Embarrassed]](redface.gif)
I started all this and I'll finish it...alone...
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-15-2013 12:34 PM
Really I'm just want to ask you guys do anyone of you cared about my fanfic anymore?
If not then I'll just wrap it up,but it's a shame really the story starting to get intense from this point on,but then the community goes silent then I have no choice to make my fanfic go silent as well...
I'm on the bench with the story awhile after the complete lack of support just come back to say that you actually care about this smurf then...
Might have to wait till' the **** movie released as well...my work is such a waste,like writing on thin air and all i get is thin air as well.
I'm waiting for any reply...
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Smurfy1For2
Blue Believer
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posted 05-15-2013 07:06 PM
I always read your fanfic Brainy Smurf Snaeha!! ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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u wished u rocked as i
Posts: 1970 | From: Fairfield, VA | Registered: Nov 2005
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-16-2013 05:55 AM
That's what i want to see,some support!
I'll resume the story then...it will be ready before June.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
Member # 2823
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posted 07-15-2013 07:01 AM
The Status of my fanfic is now at "Ready when I'm ready"
Just to someone who still cares my work though.
Still here as always but in much lower profile because my focus is now on Perfecting my golf swing.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Sweet Smurf 2
Super Smurf
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posted 11-07-2014 10:14 PM
Uh... quick question: Papa Smurf said he never heard of a wizard named Gargamel but Smurfette appears amongst the Smurfs? How is this possible? Tell me how?
Posts: 696 | From: New Zealand | Registered: Jan 2014
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