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Topic: Smurf fan fic:The First Smurf from the Planet smurf.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 01-20-2012 08:18 AM
ooooo Barami was left in charge! i can't wait to see how this goes ;-)
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 01-21-2012 07:09 AM
Chapter 5/2 Brainiess Talk.
Brainy:OK,let's get this straight Barami,I just
wanted to know how old are you?
Barami:I'm 22 years old why's that?
How in the smurfs papa give you the permission to
be charge when he's away!?
You're too young for that!
I know brainy but it's papa's order and me just like you never ever disobey his order.
Brainy:oh,right i'm sorry if i being too mean to
you...
Barami:(sigh) You know brainy in my world no one
is going to politely apologize someone like this
anymore that's why i came here to make friends.true blue friends.
In my world friendship was just an illusion for personal gain.
I've faced it all also a good one too.
Brainy:I'm really sorry about that...can you tell me more about your
world?
Barami:It's never meant to be a harsh masquerade world you know.
There was a time that people gathering together helping working as one
big family just like you smurfs.
have you ever see the gold coins in the human village nearby?
Brainy:I saw a bag full of it before.
Barami:Ok,that's what we called money you guys don't know how to use it right?
Brainy:I want to know tell me!
Barami:I'm not telling you it's an evil thing it can turn a friend to
be a worst enemy!
Brainy:what a scary thing!
Barami:Let's just say money is corruptible so anyone who have too
much of it will do anything just to get more of it.
It's was all an illusion that this thing created so i'm here in the
smurfs village no money involved everysmurf can live without it.
But in my world that rule doesn't apply.
Brainy:What can we do about that?
Barami:No you can't but since i'm here i'm free from that.
Brainy:is that your glasses?
Barami:Yeah it's mine.
Brainy:Can i see it?
Barami:ok just give it back soon.
I can't see a thing help!
Brainy! (panting)
What is this dreaded glasses i can't see a thing!
It's not for your eyes it's for astigmatism eye!
Huh?
Never mind,it just doesn't fits your brain,brainy.
So i don't think yours will fit my brain too so let's put it that way.
We both need glasses we may be different but we'll never be able to
see what's lies ahead of us.
Brainy:That's true and that's a great quote perfect to add in my
books of quotations!
Hehe,that's a really is a good one you can add that haha!
OK enough with serious things,Brainy can you...
Chef&Baker:Barami,Here's your fondue soup!
Coming!
Never mind brainy i'll see you soon!
Brainy:Bye!
To be continued...
There's a mid-term exam coming up in this week so i have to make this
end a bit short but it's only a one day exam so i think i can resume
on this story in next weekend.
Thank you for your patience!
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 02-22-2012 07:08 AM
Before I continue the story here's a plot of the story.
Due to my unusual writing style turns off so many people who don't
uses their imagination.
The First Smurf From The Planet Smurf by Barami Snaeha.
October 2011-ongoing.
Plot:
A big smurf fan who's claimed to be the chosen one came to
smurf village and It soon turned out to his dreams come true
but smurfs have some truth hiding from him papa smurf later
talked directly to him the whole truth why.
Papa gave him his biggest assignment yet to save both smurfs' world
and his world...
papa leaves the village and leaves barami as temporary man in charge of.
Comment for the continuation of the story.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 02-22-2012 07:23 AM
i love it so far! your description of our world is right on, although i will say that i know of a few people who are true blue friends just as smurfs are ;-)
i can't wait to read more! please do continue!
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 02-22-2012 07:51 AM
It's going to be awhile I'm now using PS3 to
browse internet recently so it's going to be
very slow but when my dad comes home i'll continue on his laptop right away.
I'll start writing tomorrow on PS3.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 02-22-2012 09:44 AM
i remember having to do that a couple of years ago... browse via ps3 that is...
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posted 02-25-2012 08:50 AM
Chapter 6 A cheesy meal.
Barami comes to Chef&Baker house to be a food critic
for his latest creation "Fondue Smurfy Soup"
Chef&Baker:Here it is your fondue soup looks yummy
huh?
Barami:Anything cheesy I always enjoy eating in
every second!
This is just smurflicious!
Baker&Chef:I hear it all the time...
What?
I need some improvement barami I really need to
push this new dish into my breakfast menu.
Just give me some review.
Barami:If you say so...hmm...I think it a bit too
salty for your little blue tongues to handle
maybe some of you might like it greedy for example.
Chef&Baker:Well we have red tongue by the way but
good try.
Talking about greedy that smurf can eat just about
anything that come out of my kitchen.
Barami:Yeah...I'm thinking about trying to soften
it down try using milk it can tone down that
salty taste.
OK I'll try it.
"20 minutes later"
Chef&Baker:Here it is i took me awhile milk sure
is soften it down and the smell is no longer
cheesy too now it smells like a boiled cheesecake!
Barami:What a weird name to describe how it smell
like...
Chef&Baker:No offense,I actually don't have much
in the menu to come up with this smell you know.
Anyway it's your time to taste and review it.
Barami:Sweet that's only way i can describe it!
Chef&Baker:sweet?! oh smurf...
Barami:Don't you worry this is actually pretty
tasty I can feel that i got some power to deal
with the work but never too much!
You don't have to change the recipe chef you use
this milky fondue soup and i'm pretty sure
everysmurf will call for another cup!
Chef&Baker:Thanks!
Barami:I have to take a shower so thanks again chef...
Barami later realize that he doesn't appear to have any towel.
Fortunately tailor smurf just come by and give him a towel.
Barami:Don't look in here! go away!
Tailor:Eww that's not a very smurfy scene.
What's that hanging in front of you,barami your tail!?
Barami:uh hehe it's my...tail don't you ever dare to touch it
or i'm gonna turn to purple gnappy!
Tailor:Yikes that is scary here i'll give you a towel protect your "tail" barami.
Barami:TURN AROUND!!
Tailor:What's wrong with you?
What's so important about it?
20 seconds later...
Barami:Let just say it's a very "valuable" for me do i have to bite
your tail to feel that!?
Tailor:Huh?no way! I understand just try not to get too obsessed with your "tail" then...see you later...
Barami:Don't tell this to other smurfs!
Promise me!
Tailor:but it just a tail...OK i promise.
Barami:(sigh) I think i'm going to take a bath in my house then...
Narrator:You not gonna see that happen everyday so when you see your fellow smurf show up during your privacy time try not to smurf them..."
Make me want to go back to kindergarten days again...
Recording director:Oh you perv...
What's wrong with that when you're just little kid!?
Never mind...focusing on your script man this story is already months late!
Narrator:OK...uh...you know what gordon i think i lost it.
Recording Director:OK well cut it boys.
You can take a break kane.
We will back in session in 15 minutes.
To Be Continued...
Well i have to say i tried to break fourth wall here so It's alot
of fun!
This is just the beginning of this kind of "breaking the fourth wall"
Actually it always intended to make this fanfic to broke alot
of fourth wall don't want my story to be that linear.
There's also a bathroom joke too I tried my best not to go over PG
rated.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 02-25-2012 09:24 AM
that was... wow! i loved it! :-D
you have me craving something cheesey to eat now, for one thing.
for another, that tail scene was EPIC! :3
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 02-25-2012 04:41 PM
I'm glad you liked it!
I thought that tail scene was a bit too vulgar
It doesn't so that really surprised me.
My next chapter is where the story takes shape.
but I will also "smurf" it up back and forth
not to make it too linear.
Stay tuned!
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 02-25-2012 07:35 PM
vulgar or not, the tail scene was very highly amusing :-) smurfs being introduced to the human anatomy :-D i love it!
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 03-14-2012 06:42 AM
I'm thinking about release my chapter 7 today but
I'm very exhausted especially with my eyes.
So I'll call it a day,take my glasses off and take a rest
I'll be sure to release it in this weekend.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 08:36 AM
i hope you will get plenty of rest! i look forward so to reading the seventh chapter of your story! ;-) i will be eagerlyawaiting it!
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posted 03-14-2012 11:17 AM
Great job! your a good writer Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 03-17-2012 06:37 AM
Chapter 7 Lucky Number 7
later that day papa smurf finally come back and later
tell his plans to both Barami and all of the smurfs in the village. (continue on Chapter 7/2)
Recording Director:OK people let's continue,Kane get it right this time!
Narrator:Here I go...
Barami:You don't have a bath tub?
Handy:For smurfs yes for your size no way!
It will take few days to get your size done.
Barami:My body sweat never waits Handy...Nevermind
I'll just go and find myself a barrel and fills a water in it.
Handy:That's a good idea but where are you going to find a barrel that big?
Barami:I'll just go to the nearby human village.
(I just realized that other objects can't be shrink by a Gulliver Tunnel Spell)
Handy:You're human so have a good luck...
10 minutes later...
Barami:Hey that's one big village,10 minutes from the forest and there's already a village?
Narrator:He then sneaking into the side of the village finding the right barrel for him and then...
Man 1:Hei, du der du tror du kommer snikende rundt sånn?
stopp!
Jeg sa stopp!
Barami:Oh no!
Man 1:Snu deg!
Prøver å stjele øl?
Barami:I didn't mean to please I just want your barrel.
Man 1:Hva er det du snakker om vrøvl?
Walk!
(Chattering in foreign language)
Barami:This is my fault I'm going to die!
Man 1:Boss, mira lo que encontré en una extraña mirando bárbaro!
Intentó robó nuestro suministro de cerveza.
Usted va a ser carnicero me puedo hacer salchichas de ti jaja!
Barami:I'm Smurf!
Man 2: Cállate Ohlen!
Man 1:Pero el jefe de...
Man 2:Maldita sea Ohlen no puede ser agradable a nuestros clientes por una vez?
Barami:What the...?
Man 1 & Man 2:(Arguing each other with strong language)
Man 2:Ja, patético!
¿Nunca se atreven a hablar con mi cliente como la otra vez o más!
Man 1:Lo sentimos jefe! (running away)
Man 2:OK so you're not my customer definitely with that clothes you're wearing.
Ohlen,my goon he never treats people around me right what a goon...
What do you want stranger?
Barami:Well uh...um...ah...y-you're?
Man 2:Call me Pitufo.
Barami:(What a weird name...) Mr.Pitufo all I want is one of your deserted barrel.
Man 2:Hey why don't you say so I have plenty of those empty barrels!
Follow me.
Here it is take your time find the one you like!
Barami:OK but the one i like,what are you...
(door slam)
Barami:What a guy...
Well Ok This is just one I was looking for perfect!
Man 2: So did you finally found your match?
Barami:Ye,Yeah I got Mr.Pitufo...Do I have to?
Man:Gold? Nonsense let's just say I'll let you out fair and square.
Barami:Thank you for everything Mr.Pitufo!
Now I can have a proper medieval bathing!
Narrator:While Barami is heaing back to the smurf village he somehow meets Papa Smurf
in Enchanted Forest.
Barami:Oh I can't believe I carry this barrel by myself (Panting)
It's getting heavier in every step!
Papa:Oh thanks that's very kind of you!
???:No matter besides,what are friends for?
Papa:Thanks again! Bye!
Barami:Papa?
Papa:Oh Brami! What are you doing out here?
Barami:Good to see you Papa,uh I was just thinking I need a barrel to take a bath so I come
out to find one.
Papa:Good That's Good while you're out here my little smurfs might as well in chaos!
Barami:Oh I'm sorry I'll hurry back to village right away!
What's that you got a wand Papa?
Papa:Yeah,I just got from one of the 7 Smurfs he just in a hurry so he can only teach me
one spell.
I have no need for a wand but this will do the trick just fine.
Barami:Uh can you help me carrying this barrel back to the village?
Papa:I can't but this wand might help...
OBJETO LEVITAR!
Barami:Wow that's great.
Papa:You think so?
Well that's good now we get back to village faster.
Wanna race with papa?
Barami:Are you sure with your 542 years old?!
Papa:It never too late to have some exercise my smurf.
Barami:OK if you're so sure let's go!
3-2-1 Smurf!
To Be Continued...
That's about it I was just have this great idea came up right before I was about to start write
and it can be too long for a single chapter so this will once again will have another part 2.
Next Chapter 7/2 Mission Briefing!
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 03-17-2012 07:31 AM
Poor Barami, having to go through all of that for a bath! i just hope bathing in a barrel isn't too difficult...
i can't wait to see who wins the race! :-D
fantastic work, as usual ;-) you always manage to leave readers craving more :-)
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posted 03-17-2012 07:46 AM
Thanks!
I hope there's more readers than just you though.
I have a blast writing this chapter too many cool
ideas just popped out while I'm writing.
Even me I'm so exciting to write chapter 7/2!
This may spoil you a bit but next chapter will feel
a bit like The Smurfquest.
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posted 03-17-2012 08:06 AM
i don't mind spoilers! they just make me even more excited! :-D
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posted 03-31-2012 05:39 AM
How's it going Nurturer?
I'll start writing Chapter 7/2 when you're ready.
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posted 03-31-2012 05:42 AM
Great work Brainy, can't wait for more!
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 03-31-2012 06:45 AM
i'm ready when you are! i'm always ready and eager for more! ;-)
things have been busy busy busy this week for me, and i have been sleeping a LOT because i've been so husted. for me that's good, because usually i have a lot of trouble sleeping because of nightmares and restlessness.
how has everything been for you? when is your festival supposed to start that you told me about? :-)
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posted 03-31-2012 07:55 AM
These past months I've been not so busy and be able to get alot of afternoon nap I'm feel a bit like Lazy!
I'm not a guy who likes to sleep that much but those
few months taught me alot!
Well that Songkran Festival starts from 13-15 of April
but some place can starts off a week before the official date.
This Festival is also acts as Thai's New Year.
Unfortunately During that festival I will not be able to connect because I have to go up north
every year for holidays and meet my close cousin I wished my house in Chiang Mai got Internet Connection...
I'll start writing tomorrow it's my time to score some ZZZ!
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posted 03-31-2012 10:30 AM
i wish that house had internet connection too. i'll miss you while you're away! i hope you have fun though :-)
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posted 04-04-2012 03:32 AM
Chapter 7/2 Mission Briefing
"Papa Smurf and Barami races each other back to the village and later tells his smurfs and
Barami of what might be their "Biggest" adventure yet!
Barami:He really fly for his age!
Papa:you see never underestimate Papi' Power!
Here we reach the village!
Barami:You maybe old and tiny but Papa you got some moves!
Papa:i'm a Winner!
Those were the days I loved to run all the time when I was a young Smurf.
Oh you sure know how to keep the village in check Brami!
Smurfs:Papa's back!
Papa:I'm really missed all of you but let just say we have something big,bigger than smurfs
waiting for us.
I'll tell you later tonight so get a good rest my little smurfs...
Today might be the last day that you can get a full sleep...
Smurfs:Yes,Papa Smurf.
Papa:You too Brami get ready for it.
Barami:I'll do!
Narrator:Later that night three bell rings and smurfs smurf up for a plan,a big one!
(Chattering)
Papa:Smurfs gather around there's something is going on here and I can't finish it without
the help all of you!
Brainy:What can we do Papa Smurf?
Papa:Let me start,Smurfs,we're all going to smurf!
Smurfs:Oh no! (Chattering in panic)
Papa:Calm down my little smurfs we are not that hopeless to smurf that's why we have
Mr.Barami in the first place.
Here's the plan:
After I have a discussion with homnibus he said that what we're encounter right now is the
"Parallel worlds" crisis in Mr. Barami world it's a very dangerous so we can't go with him so Brami it's you're on your own this time.
Barami:I afraid you would say that...
What's my objective?
Papa:You need to obtain this stone it's an extraterrestrial stone it's believed that it's our long
live stone but it's such a powerful stone that in your world it can destroy the earth and since
the multi-dimensional bridge is still open if that stone falls into the wrong hand it will instantly
wipe out smurfs race!
You need to obtain at all cost!
Barami:Where is it store Papa?
It's in the middle of the desert in the states.
They called it Area 51.
Barami:This is ridiculous I mean i'm really all out to help you guys here.
Smurfette:I'm a Gal here!
Barami:Whatever,But going into that is pure suicide someone can rip my head off miles away
before I reach the base!
I can't do this unless you give me some magic.
I need some firepower!
Papa:Well if you really need one...Handy!
Show him what you got in armory!
Barami:Since when you get into this stuff
Handy:I never wanted to but when Papa asked I have to do it.
???:Password?
Handy:Smurfabanga.
Meanwhile...
Papa:While Mr.Barami is still choosing his weapons of choice I'll give all you objectives.
We Smurfs can't get into his world but we'll need to gather all the elements we need
Earth,Water,Wind and Fire.
All of you must come with me to the Himalayas.
Brainy:Himalayas?
Smurfette:Sounds himaly!
Tracker:It's a mountain range lads.
Clumsy:Hima-what?
Grouchy:Me,I hate Himalayas......yeah...
We can find all of that in the town called "Shambala"
But it's a very dangerous place I suggest we all have to stick close together.
Brainy:But Papa Smurf we all can't go with you we need to guarding and protecting our village.
Papa:You're right Brainy so I'll choose who will stay here guarding the village Hefty,Lazy,Chef&Baker
Smurfette,Harmony,Painter,Nosy, and all of you Smurflings stay here.
Gutsy,Tracker,Brainy,Poet,Clumsy,Greedy,Handy,Grouchy and other smurfs come with me.
Smurfs,This will be a smurf of our lifetime be proud!
Smurfs who guarding the village will wake up 2 hours before us expedition smurfs team
we will go out on daybreak.
ALL FOR SMURF AND SMURF FOR ALL!
At Handy house...
Handy:Hello,Can I come in?
???:It's open.
Barami:Holy Smurf!
Handy:I need your help...I need some firepower...
???:You got it I think your fellow visitor really need alot of it I can feel it!
Handy:Thanks Hacker you always so nice to me.
Hacker:I don't have many friends it's good to make one when I have a chance though.
Barami:I,I know what you're doing but what I need is something for 21st century not this
flintlock gun or heavy cannon from 15 century...
Hacker:Buddy,I never kill someone before and I never will but I've been collecting these weapons for long time now I have no use for it but I think it will a good use to a human like you
21st century weapons you said? Please wait...
Here...this is all got all the big names you name it I have it.
Barami:Ho Ho Ho!
No offense to you but I have to say all of these were created to kill us humans and yes I never kill someone before but for the you,smurfs and the worlds in all of it's many dimensions I think
someone need to pay the price but no no no I can't do that you have some kind of a non-lethal
ammunition?
I need these guns yes but I don't to kill them at least make them pass or get some bruises.
Hacker:You're my hero my friend I collecting these weapons because I was fascinated by its design and performance but I never knew they all made to kill but just as I thought that some day a human like you would come here make these full use again.
Well enough with big talk I know I'm even more nerdy than Brainy Smurf himself but a...
I just got all of these ammo it's like a real round but there's no gunpowder and no lead it fitted
with a rubber so these rounds will not kill but stun the targets instead.
Barami:All of those with rubbers?
Hacker:Yep.
Choose your weapons.
I need Handguns and M82 Barrett.
All in rubber rounds of course I don't want to kill them.
That's it...Wow.......Is that what I think it is?
Hacker:Invisble Cloak,It still in prototype mode so watch out.
Barami:Where Did you get this?
Hacker it's from Virginia in 2030 after series of tests they finally abandoned it and somehow
I got it!
Barami:I really need one of these to sneak into area 51!
Thanks for everything! But how in the smurfs did you get all these weapons?
Hacker:I'm the only few smurf who got across the bridge.
Barami:But you said that you been doing this for years?
Are you?!
Oh you smurf!
Hacker:Ha Ha I lied but that's how I got it!
See you later!
Barami:He's nasty!
Handy:He loves to joke but it can get nasty I got used to him now.
Papa:Brami,We have to talk.
To Be Contunued...
Chapter 8 Journey coming soon!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
Member # 4050
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posted 04-04-2012 12:50 PM
Wow, that is quite smepic! I can't wait to read about Barami getting into area 51! I hope everyone will be alright ... :-)
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