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Topic: Smurf fan fic:The First Smurf from the Planet smurf.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 10-14-2011 07:33 AM
A fan fic that's in my head for long time and i think it's time to write it!
It have a taste of sci-fi movie to it!
My name is Barami Snaeha i'm a smurf fan and i think
how cool it would be that the smurfs were really here in my house i know it'll never happen but
when you have an imagination it never hurts anybody.
Narrator:In the world of the advancement of science
and technology we know it will not happen but then
again there's another dimension of this world that
it will happen and it somehow happen to this guy.
June 25 20xx 6:20 AM
Barami:Well another boring day begins a shower,dress up a rice congee to rush hour i always wondering
can life be this boring?
Well i just have to be optimistic a bit,hey look
at the date i think this is a special day!
I'm a cartoonist,professional golfer what a combo...
This time of year i have my part time job at
a studio in Brussels,Belgium.
for like a month for money and then a 9 months in
the golf courses...plenty of cash!
Narrator:He got a kind of job that many people
can only dream of to be but later that day something incredismurf is about to happen.
Barami:I'm home.
Dad:how's it going at the studio?
Barami:as usual.
Dad:As usual...great.
It's cold outside eh?
Barami:it's warm outside maybe your homesick makes
you cold? Don't worry dad next week and you'll
be back in Thailand.
Dad:okay...
Barami:i'm at my room if you want me call me ok?
11:25 PM
What happen?
Where's my dad?!
Narrator:Of all the sudden the big vortex sucks
him to some forest.
Barami:Where am i a forest?
(Voice in distant approching)
Someone's coming!
(lalalalalala...)
lalalalalala?
Who's that sound so much like someone...
Gotcha!
???:argh,let me go you unsmurfly smurf!
Barami:Smurf? you come with me!
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It just a dream?
Oh sure it is you silly it's just dream!
What a silly dream ugh,at least it must be a good
dream with smurf...
what time is it? (11:55 PM)
(Sleeps)
???:Okay,we're in be quiet everysmurf!
(cracks)
Barami:what? holy smurfs! it's smurfs!
Papa:Run!
Wait! please don't run away from me!
Please i'm smurfing you!!
Papa:huh? oh so you're one of us,my little smurfs
he's one of us.
well this is too good to be true papa!
but why did you call me "one of us?"
To be continued...
Well all of the ideas is coming in real time it's
i didn't prepare it just pops up in my mind and
i have to write right away so the next part is
coming soon! ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
I wanted my fan fic story to have some twist to it
though.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 10-17-2011 09:27 AM
So did you dream you became a Smurf? Very smurfy story beginning, Brainy S.! ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 10-19-2011 06:15 AM
Well i don't expect to see you here squeaky!
I just thinking about to leave this one unfinished.
But because of you i'll continues the story!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Vic George The ND Guy
Super Smurf
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posted 10-19-2011 06:34 AM
Sneaky bonus: the day that the story starts on is Peyo's birthday. And as one would probably guess, it's Studio Peyo.
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VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA
"Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 10-19-2011 08:07 AM
I just can't seem to put the beginning of the story
with some random date with no meaning.
The next part is coming after when the flooding in
Thailand is in a much controlled situation.
For this time my family still in the very cautious
condition closely monitoring the flooding if it
coming to my house how bad can it be.
But they predict that amphoe mueang nonthaburi
area may have the flooding around 50cm-1 m in depth but we'll see.
But my house had been elevated by 50 cm above
the road so i hope it will help.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Smurfy1For2
Blue Believer
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posted 10-21-2011 01:38 AM
GREAT WORK Brainy Smurf Snaeha!! I like the way you write!
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Wizard Smurf
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posted 10-21-2011 02:39 PM
Well...When is Peyo's Birthday?
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Vic George The ND Guy
Super Smurf
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posted 10-21-2011 03:01 PM
June 25.
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VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA
"Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 10-28-2011 05:34 AM
Thanks smurfy i thought it looked a bit messy
for my style.
Well i'm back but the bad news is the flooding
is still getting worse and now heading to
Bangkok and surrounding areas.
My home still unaffected but for safety and not
underestimated the billions cubic meters of water
tomorrow i have to go to chiang mai and my family
will watch the situation from there and I'll absolutely not have an internet connection at my
house in chiang mai.
The floods will need to leave bangkok so that i can stop worry about it and go back to write my
fan fic so till' that time comes...Have a smurfy time at bluebuddies!
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"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-15-2011 09:07 AM
I'm back and now i'm ready to continue the story!
I actually got the ending last week it smurfy.
But the chapter 2 is still pending...in my head
it's been awhile so tomorrow or the day after
chapter 2 will be on this page.
Stay Tuned!
It's going to be a smurfy ride!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-16-2011 09:50 PM
Here's the Chapter 2!
Papa:You're the chosen one,big fella.
You shares the same heart as ours.
Barami:Hold on a sec you mean i'm the chosen one?
(Mumbling) Sounded a much like Harry Potter uh...
Harry who?
It's nothing. OK i'm the chosen one then?
You're going to come with us.
Coming with you oh yeah!
But why can we just talk here in my room?
Well your huge world is very dangerous in every corner so it's best for you to come with us i don't think i can live here.
OK but how the heck i can get back to your village?
Tonight the blue moon rises and the pathway to
our world is open but i have to say this the first
time in history for it to do.
OK let's go!
Narrator:Here goes the first human to the village
it's going to be a good one!
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Somewhere in europe middle ages.
Holy smurfs it's the smurf village!
Well here's our village it's very small so watch your steps!
It's beyond!
But...uh papa did to ever introduced village to humans before I heard names "Johan & Peewit"
ring any bells?
Papa:No you're the first to our village.
Oh...i just remember it somehow...
I'll introducing many of the smurfs that you might
need.
Here's Hefty
Hefty:A big tough human huh well i like you pal!
here's Handy
Handy:I can build a cabin for you.
Well thank you it just what i need here.
Here's chef and baker
Chef & Baker: "Do you like cheese i love cheese!"
How do you know that?
And here's clumsy...
Hi mister nice to meet you i can be your best friend... (Hitting chef smurf)
Watch out!
Chef:there goes my fondue!
Maybe another time clumsy...
Papa:There's also other smurfs like jokey,greedy
harmony.poet,painter,lazy,grouchy,smurfette and more but we'll see them later this evening.
so you want me to stay well that's great but how
about family?!
Papa:Don't worry i put a spell there so the
whole world is paused until you come back.
That's great!
Now you can stay with us so get some rest we
have something to talk to you tonight.
Which time papa?
Around 3 smurfs at night.
Uh...3 smurfs?? ![[Confused]](confused.gif)
My watch is not functioning so how can i know which time?
Papa:Let's just say you wait until night fall and
wait for the bell that rings 3 times that's the time.
OK...
in the afternoon...
Barami:Brainy...where are you?
Brainy:Who are you?!
To be continue...
Well i'm smurfed out time to takes things off
a bit this weekend the chapter 3 will begin!
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"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Smurfy1For2
Blue Believer
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posted 11-17-2011 01:08 AM
Smurfy job Brainy Smurf Snaeha! Keep up the good work!!
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-19-2011 05:29 AM
Chapter 3
Barami:I'm coming with papa smurf.
Brainy:Oh...so you're here to...
I'm just walking around and let's just say you're
the first smurf that comes into my mind.
Well i'm brainy,brainy smurf nice to meet you.
Sure you are brainy.
With that glasses of you're very attractive.
Well thank you but many smurfs don't like me but...
We'll talk about that later ok brainy?
OK...but you're special barami i think you and me
have something in common.
Like what?
Like the way you think the you talks we're the same!
Well that's why you're brainy you're brilliant.
Thank you i never get the compliment from human
before.
I think i'll smurf you my own book.
"Quotations of brainy smurf"
I really want you to read it.
OK but i have to use magnifying glass to read it.
Here it is.
Hey thanks i didn't know you got human magnifying
glass?
I just tell handy to do it just in case if human
ever comes here may need it.
Oh you're so brainy!
Well uh i have to go now brainy i'll see you later.
Handy:He's coming!
Ta Da!
Wow so you're really did a house for me thanks!
But i don't know how you do this alone.
Well i got other fifty smurfs to work on your
house it's not that hard.
Is it ready to move in?
Right away furniture everything in there!
Oh thank you.
They're all so nice if it in my world that can
only dream of...(sigh)
Hey i didn't come to chef & baker house better go
there.
(Humming)
That noise...it's jokey!
Jokey:Hello big one!
Uh...yeah hello.
I have a surprise for you! (laughing)
Thank you what's inside?
(explosion)
(Cough)
Ugh...thanks...jokey very smokey greeting...
Gotcha you big smurf! (laughing)
Hehe well jokey is jokey visitor needs to get
bang for a smurf.
Chef & Baker:Here here you big smurfer!
Okay it's very nice in your house chef it always
have good smell.
Well,you're just too kind but i'm not here just
talk and let you lose your smurfpetite.
Here this is the swiss fondue that you've talking
about.
I talked about it? i can't remember...anyway
i never taste fondue before i ask my...papa before
but we never have time.
Oh,this is really good the cheese and everything!
While i stay in village can you make this to me
again chef?
Well the meat is very hard to find...
Just cheese is fine make it a soup with corn.
I'll do thanks!
See you later chef!
Chef & Baker:You forgot baker.
Whatever...
Well i met brainy,handy,jokey and chef but i'm
too tired to go to meet other.
A little nap in my new house and bed should do
the magic. (snap)
Ouch!
Oh...well at least the bed still not break...
Later that day...
To be continued...
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"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Wizard Smurf
Smurfling
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posted 11-19-2011 11:08 PM
Cool!
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-24-2011 04:52 AM
Next Chapter is quite hard though it's going to be
a more serious part of the story.
So i expecting to write it in this weekend.
Stay smurfy!
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"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 11-24-2011 11:26 AM
cant wait ![[Wild Smurf]](graemlins/Wild_Smurf.gif) ![[Smurfette]](graemlins/smurfette.gif)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 11-25-2011 03:22 PM
i love it! ;-)
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-26-2011 08:44 AM
Chapter 4
(Bell Rings three times)
(yawn)
Barami:OK,it's time i better get there.
Where is that cafeteria?
(Chattering)
Oh there it is.
(Silence)
Papa smurf where are you?
Uh hello...?
Papa:Hah!
(scream)
Oh!(panting)
Papa:Haha! surprise,Barami!
So is that your way smurfs off the visitor?!
So you know it know hehe!
Just a joke my big smurf.
That's really good papa but i've been thinking how
long am i going to stay with you?
Well let's get to the point then.
I've been watching you for awhile and there is
something strange,why did you know all the other smurfs?!
Well i just knew it i don't know.
So you're the right smurf.
Barami,can i call you brami from now on it?
Whatever Papa...
You know,Brami that i'm not just let you get to
the village for nothing?
I doubt...
Absolutely you came here for something big,bigger
than me and even you.
See Brami,the way you talk the way you think you've been a very good friend with Brainy he just
told me this evening.
He said that you are such a sweetie but same as
him misunderstood by many.
I liked him but...
Brami,let me finish.
You know alot about the smurfs don't you?
Yeah but i wonder why i knew it all that.
You know the reason?
Papa:Not actually,no...
Barami:Oh...
Papa:
I'll tell you the truth brami,there's an another
universe in your world these two worlds are like
parallel lines it will never collide and connect
together right?
OK...that's what i learnt in school...
And then the blue moon in the year of 7 smurfs or
1550 AD the blue moon earth and sun align in the
same plane makes the blue moon brighter and
it got enough power not just it make a gate that
links our world to your world but also links your
world to another world in other dimensional universe.
The parallel universe now actually have crossing bridge...
As i mentioned you before this is the first it
happen in history.
So i don't know what we're dealing with but what i
do know is that there is something big is about to
happen and i think it not a good one.
Barami:This is way beyond of what i taught to
believe in my world.
Papa:You no longer in your world anymore my smurf
Barami:(sigh) Right...
so it may sound completely insane or out of this...uh my world.
I'll help you out papa i just can't leave you here.
Thank you...
Oh i got something to tell you i already calculated the alignment the deadline is 2 months
away that is the time that the moon earth and sun
lose it perfect alignment.
When that time comes you know what will happen...
Barami:I'll die and smurfs also die along with
the entire planet.
Papa:Exactly...we can't let this happen.
Barami:Hey did i heard this before, 2012?
Nonsense I just did a research it never happen.
But this,this will happen instead even it bloody
similar to your idea.
So it may be a month away but i need to hurry to
find our objective to prevent this from happening.
While i'm working in the lab or outside the village can you keep the village in peace?
I'll do what i can papa.
That's good now i can talk to homnibus or father
time for answers about this big one.
Be careful there's a wizard name Gargamel...
Papa:I told you i never heard a wizard name
gargamel before and no humans around our village for 400 years please keep that wizard to yourself.
Sorry papa i'm just worry about you.
Papa:(sigh) Well you are a good smurf after all my
friend...A smurf at heart i might say.
Thanks again Brami our conversation is over for
today it's getting late you better get some rest.
There's alot in the life of a smurf to learn my
friend and it'll all starting tomorrow.
Goodnight,my little smurfs...
Barami:Good Night papa smurf...(sigh)
(Doors locked)
You're a good papa...I love you...
To Be continued...
Well you may wondered why barami can to cafeteria
without breaking it because papa put the spell to
all the doors in the village to act as a gulliver
tunnel so barami is actually the same size as a
smurf indoor!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 11-26-2011 10:29 AM
i love the gulliver tunnel idea
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 11-27-2011 09:38 AM
that sounds awsome ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-28-2011 03:54 AM
Next chapter is much more relaxed and fun while
Papa's off to meet homnibus and father time.
Barami have no choice but to be the papa smurf himself what will happen stay tuned!
I have to say this is going to be another hard
difficult chapter since i don't know much about
jokes especially in english but i'll do my best.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 12-07-2011 05:59 AM
Sorry if this fanfic gonna take much longer time than most of you would expected.
It something that i really proud in the story.
But as of now i'm in my last semester that means
i'll be busy almost a whole week so i can only
continue the story at weekends.
Chapter 5 coming this weekend!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 12-10-2011 06:27 AM
Chapter 5
Papa:(sigh) Maybe i was going too hard on him
He never get a good friend...I hope you understand...
Meanwhile at Barami's house...
Oh great i have stay here for a month and i didn't
got any clothes with me!
I need to do something!
Tailor! Tailor Smurf! Open up!
Tailor:What are you...whoa you're that human!
What do you want at this late?
Barami:I don't have any clothes with me so can
you wash it for me?
Your clothes wearing now? At this size no way
it'll take hours to get it done.
So what am i going to do now tailor!?
Well i'll tell papa smurf about this he can make
this clothes clean,Tomorrow morning ok?
OK...wait!
So if papa can put a spell to keep my clothes
clean why you can't use that?
Tailor:Unfortunately,that spell only work with
much larger size like the one you're wearing
Every magic spells are not perfect you know.
Barami:That's great!
Tailor:You wish...
Thanks anyway tailor i'll better go back or i'll
never get a good sleep.
Tailor:You talk like you're lazy smurf.
This is the time to get lazy don't you think
time to sleep?
Tailor:Whatever...good night Barami.
Next day...
Papa:OK that's about it and now your clothes will
cleaning itself every 12 hours.
Smurfs! I have something to tell you that i will
not be in the village for a day so with our new
friend Barami will be in charge here while i'm off
to homnibus and father's time place to gather
some information about...
Smurfs:What is it papa?
Papa:I'll tell you later when i come back.
So good luck my little smurfs and be nice to mr.
Barami!
Smurfs:Yes,papa smurf!
Barami:OK smurfs as we all know papa's off and
that's it today is a holiday!
YAY!
Smurf:Let's play smurf ball!
Hefty:I'll get some jogging!
Handy:I'll have a date with smurfette!
Chef&Baker:I'll make a fondue for you!
Barami:thanks!
Grouchy:Me,i hate fondue. but i'll join a smurf ball team!
Vanity:I'll just follow my mirror.
Barami:Uh what?!
Brainy:I'll just follow my friend!
Brainy! So you want to meet me?!
I just need someone to hang out so come here!
Brainy:Thanks!
To be continued...shortly in Chapter 5/2
I just need some rest that's all just a finished a
round of golf so stay tuned!
If there's nothing tomorrow the chapter 5/2 will
be arrive shortly tomorrow!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 12-28-2011 01:30 AM
Sorry for any delays...
I'm back for my fanfic i'll never ever let this one
unfinished.
This weekend it' s the chapter 5/2!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 01-20-2012 07:01 AM
Chapter 5/2 Will finally release tomorrow!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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