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Topic: Smurf fan fic:The First Smurf from the Planet smurf.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-07-2012 08:08 AM
Chapter 8 Journey
A heartbreaking truth awaits Barami...Papa finally reveals that he can't go back to his world and the world he is going to sneak in is another world that he doesn't exist but there's his other form living in that world...
Barami:Do you want to speak with me?
Papa:Brami...there's something I need to tell you...
about this "world" It's not exactly your world I'm afraid...
Barami:Wha? Is this a joke right papa?
Papa:No I'm not joking for something this serious.
And that also means that I can't send you back brami I'm really sorry.
Barami:Why didn't you tell me before?!
Papa:I thought if I tell you would turn down and we will have no hope left...
I'm sorry...you're really our last hope in that world of yours we wouldn't last for a day out there.
Barami:So I can't go back...what's going to happen to my family?!
Papa:History will change you will cease to exist and your family will never have a children.
Is that going to be too hard to accept?
Barami:(sniff) Farewell...Dad...Mom...My Brother...you'll always be in my heart...(sniff) (sigh)
Oh OK........So we're even now right?
You need me and I need you but sacrifice need to be done...for the world...
Papa:That was really a tough thing you have deal with I made you the one without family.
Barami:I know...but I always believe that people you love,they never really going away there always "Here"
Papa:Welcome to the family Barami!
You deserved it!
You get it out of your chest right?
Barami:Yeah...So is there anything else to tell me? I'm listening...Dad...
Papa:During the mission you may encounter you.
Barami:What!?
Papa:In another dimension of course he will look exactly just like you but then again he is not the part of this mission you can explains all of him if you want...
Barami:Oh well I got smurfed...It's going one hell of a trip I'm sure.
Is that all?
Papa:One last thing,that is your world in another parallel universe so be careful you actually not
exist in that world so try not get into trouble I can't help you from here.
That is all Brami we have a long hard trip tomorrow so get some rest I'll call when it's time...
Back to Barami's house...
Barami:It's Tomorrow...ALL FOR SMURF AND SMURF FOR ALL!
I'll just hit my bunk then...
Ouch!
Brainy?! What are you doing in my house you also in the expedition team right so why don't you
go back to your house catch some rest?
Brainy:Sorry Barami I just listened your conversation with papa you're really brave!
Barami:How can I ignore you guys need help you're all my best friend and family.
Brainy:nice speech! I really like you know what ?
I think since I'm here and it's getting late why don't you share me a bed?
Barami:Alright my little old me why didn't say so I just need some friend to keep me strong
and tomorrow you may be the last friend that I talk to...
OK enough with that OK you see that mattress I'll let you borrow it but It's quite big so be careful
Brainy:Heh Heh It's good to have you Barami I really do you and I we're the same you know what according to my research there's no...
Barami:I really appreciate your work and research but my eyes and ears is sleeping now can we just call it a day brainy?
Brainy:Whatever for you my friend...
Barami:I'll blow out the candle are you ready?
Brainy:Wait let me take off my glasses first...OK blow it.
Barami:Good Night,Brainy.
Brainy:zzz
Barami:He really is lazy smurf rival!
(whispering) I'm right behind you Brainy.
To Be Continued...
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 05-07-2012 08:53 AM
poor Barami for having to say goodbye to his family even though he gained another family i sure hope he'll be alright
i love it it's so sad yet sweet too and exciting as usual :-D
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 05-07-2012 11:23 AM
I agree Nurturer. ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-16-2012 09:04 AM
Character Introductions:
Barami Snaeha Age:22
A compassionate friendly guy from Thailand he currently working for a Belgian studio for comics magazine Spirou.
Recently moved to Belgium to work there with his retired father.
Also a professional golfer.
Often being a misunderstood person he had only a handful of friends due to his nature.
He wearing glasses with zero fashion in mind.
He somehow knows the existence of the little blue creatures and claimed to be a big fan
of Smurfs but don't get a clue where he got all that knowledge.
(Spoiler Alert)
Barami Snaeha (other world) Age:22
A know-it-all guy who don't have many friends with an exception of dependable few.
From Thailand he's currently as a professional golfer plays in asian and european tour
Also an occasional voice actor.
A big fan of The Smurfs he is such a brain that when his dad start to ask him something
he knew he will go on and on till' someone say so.
He's not wearing glasses but his vision has gone worse recently.
Wearing clothes in a practical way.
He has a pure heart of justice and righteous makes him a bit too frank to his friends.
Makes his relationship with most people boring and uninteresting.
His lack of courage is also his biggest weakness.
Pitufo Age:50
An owner of Norwegian-Spanish bar in nearby human town.
His friendly attitude towards customers makes him a rich and famous man of the town
He have a weird obsession of collecting many types of wine drums.
Ohlen Age:39
Pitufo's bodyguard he recently had a bad manner against many of pitufo's customers.
A big muscular guy who's easily loses his temper.
Hacker Smurf:
A Smurf who's been secretly lives in 21st century human society for 5 years and he's also extremely sarcastic and harsh to harmony and jokey smurf.
An intelligent Smurf and very knowledgeable when it comes to human history and their electronic devices and weaponry and great at hacking computer (in a good way)
He wearing a white baseball cap with blue t-shirt and standard white smurf unitard.
Wearing a thick rectangular glasses as he is extremely short sighted.
He living in a mushroom house isolated from most houses with his workstation beneath
the house all the credit goes to miner and handy for make an underground workstation
for hacker.
Well that's about it for today's character introductions I'll make more introductions during
the continuation of fanfic.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-16-2012 09:48 AM
I LOVE it so far.
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With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 05-16-2012 09:51 AM
Cool! They look very interesting. I think my favorite character has to be Barami Snaeha (in the other world) since he is a fellow know it all. Lol! ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-16-2012 10:10 AM
You may not know this but Barami Snaeha (other world)
was based on my real name and my real personality.
Other was based on my other interest of being a cartoonist and interest in Belgium.
I'm not at the same age by the way I'm just 18.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 05-16-2012 11:34 AM
i agree with you about your favorite Jokie although i can't say that i am a know it all :-D
Brainy for what it's worth i have enjoyed all of our talks and i do not find you to be the least bit boring or uninteresting ;-)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 05-16-2012 01:21 PM
I agree Nurturer.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 06-24-2012 09:20 AM
Chapter 9 Smurfquest:Smurfing
"The quest for humanity and smurfinity begins..."
Brainy:Wake up Wake up,barami!
Barami:Coming!
(Papa Smurf voice in the distance)
"This is the day my little smurfs it's the day that will go down to the history that we will
we be first smurf to embark on the modern human world make your smurf proud!"
Brainy: finally you're here!
Barami:What's going on?
Brainy:Papa is about to wrap up his speech...
Papa:are there any questions?
Yes,hacker?
Hacker:I thought we are still in the medieval times?
Papa:Nope,we actually going with Barami but we will be drop off hundreds of smurfs from civilization so it's not that different from our time.
OK is that all we can go now.
Remember smurfs those of you who stays in the village you also have the equally important mission make sure the village is safe from all kinds of danger remember,this is our only home smurfs.
And for the expedition team,Forward to the enchanted forest!
Smurfs:Yay!
Papa:(sigh) Brami it's your duty...go get em' smurf!
Barami:I will!
Hacker:wait up! barami!
Barami:What?
Hacker:here's your transmitter so I can know where you are.
Barami:you can from here,this time?!
Hacker:let's just say I got an alien technology just for this mission.
Barami:What the?
Hacker:Just eat it and you're off.
Barami:OK...mmm,taste like chicken!
Hacker:Get going!
Barami:Man what a smurf...papa do you know where "the bridge" is?
Papa:Just follow the other smurfs you will get there.
I think you're not gonna go anywhere with that backpack.
Barami:So?
Papa:So now your first things off you need to find a shelter a safe one.
and store your backpack there.
I think you should a visit to yourself.
Barami:It's going to be tricky but ok papa.
10 minutes later...
Papa:Brami all the smurfs had gone through the bridge it's my turn then...
You're our last hope my little smurf go get em'!
Barami:สู้ตาย!!
To Be Continue...
Craving for more?
Please give me a good support ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Sassette
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posted 06-24-2012 09:37 AM
Good job! And to quote you're story, "go get em'"!!!
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 06-24-2012 10:09 AM
I need some great BB artis to helpt working on the artwork on my fanfic if you wouldn't mind...
If i have to do it all myself like squeaky I would take months,I'm not expert like her.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 06-24-2012 10:55 AM
I love it and I can't wait to read more! Something tells me this is about to get really exciting :-D
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 06-24-2012 11:00 AM
Even me feel exciting!
I still missing the easy to understand artwork like squeaky had in her fanfic like i said before.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 08-27-2012 01:18 AM
I know with this kind of writing it's very hard to make you get the picture of it so I think next time I'll try the traditional tale writing system it may not be my style but man I knew so many of you just got confused and gave up reading it but I'll try the traditional writing system then.
Chapter 10 is will be release in this week finally depending on the internet connection it's been slow for 3 weeks already.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 08-27-2012 01:21 AM
Been busying developing on my Mike Austin swing.
So that's why I'm stay away from the village for quite some time.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 08-27-2012 09:38 AM
i'll never give up reading ;-)
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Archive Smurf
Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 09-07-2012 01:53 AM
Keep up the epic work, Oakley!!
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 09-07-2012 07:29 AM
I'm sorry to tell you that my fanfic will once again not be release in this week due to my issues with my golf game I'm just can't seem to do anything right today i'm so frustrated to the point that I don't think I'm in a mood to write anything in this week and I also have a test coming up tomorrow too so sorry about that.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 09-07-2012 03:41 PM
That's okay, in fact I postpone quite a lot of things too. So I could understand you, I am looking forward to it..but take the time you need. ![[Angel Smurf]](graemlins/Angel_Smurf.gif)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 09-07-2012 07:37 PM
As eager as i am to read more of your epic story, you're more important ;-) i just hope things get better for you soon.
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 11-25-2012 07:23 AM
Well after quite a long hiatus I think I'm ready and with the end of semester coming next week I'll
be able punch out at least few more chapters before going back to busy again next year.
So today will be my first day back to fanfic!
Next:Past chapters summaries with new writing method and old.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 11-26-2012 11:13 AM
good to know you're gonna be getting a break, & that you'll be back in action at this too.
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 12-01-2012 07:34 AM
I'll just put the summaries in quotes just to shorten things up.
Chapter 1:"That one smurful day a smurf will come to this man's room to the rescue from his boring yet faithful life,and boy does he gets his wish!"
Chapter 2:"The Smurfs:the first man from the planet earth"
Chapter 3:"Cheesy Lunch at Greedy & Baker" "and I still longing for a swiss fondue..."
Chapter 4:"Late Night with Papa Smurf"
Chapter 5:"You now being Papa Smurf wasn't all that bad"
Chapter 5/2:"The sad truth about my world,Brainy understands it like a champ...sort of"
Chapter 6:"A mouth watering dish" "Never thought his tail can be that pale"
"Meanwhile at the studio..."
Chapter 7:"Shower,Thunderstorm in the weird part of town" "Home Run"
Chapter 7/2:"Mission Impossible:Smurf Protocol" "Your mission,should you choose to smurf it"
Chapter 8:"Sacrifice for the world" "You're good smurf,Brainy Smurf"
Chapter 9:"Face the world and protect the homeland" "สู้ตาย!!"
Next Chapter 10 will release sometime in December 2012 stay tuned!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 05-01-2013 09:41 AM
I'm Soooooo sorry that i was not be able to update the story in time but I'll promise i'll release the long awaited chapter 10 very very soon!
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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