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Topic: Break Out!
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MissCassidy
Super Smurf
Member # 3409
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posted 02-22-2013 09:57 PM
Greetings, this is my first post on the RP forum. I'm not sure how the general reply/flow of the RP posts go here so I will do my best to learn and catch on.
From what I can tell, it is a free form style RP.
So... without further delay, let me set the scene and see what happens.... **************************
The forest was unusually quiet for the season. Still, Tracker Smurf had been searching through the powdery snow for the first sign. A storm had blown in from the North West which delayed his initial journey by three days. Papa Smurf urged him to hurry out, for only his nose could find it.
It, being the first sign, the Snowdrop. It was the first flower of Spring, and the very first Snowdrop contained a rare essence which was a crucial ingredient to Papa Smurf's cure potion.
Tracker walked on marking his steps and testing the surface of the snow for weak spots with his walking stick. A human could manage, but to a Smurf a simple snow drift was an avalanche! He also kept a wary eye and ear to the sky. Although the Smurfs had many forest friends, a wise Smurf could never be too careful around stoats and foxes, especially during the winter!
He paused a moment listening. The forest was still too quiet. What happened next startled Tracker, he found himself face to face with a creature he had never seen nor did he believe existed until now...
-------------------- Rise Avalon!
Posts: 131 | From: Florida, USA | Registered: Nov 2010
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
Member # 4119
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posted 04-26-2013 08:30 PM
Tracker: *freezes*
Creature: *keeps inching towards him, it's a big caterpillar with a big redish face and it's green all over with big black spines that looked like split ends on human hair since the ends of the spines resembled like a fork in a road or something*
Tracker: Uhh.. Hi there.
Caterpillar: *No reply, when it comes close to tracker it turns and just keeps inching along*
Tracker: Wait what are you! *He runs after it and makes the big mistake of letting one of the spines touch him. They are stingers and he feels a wave of pain and since he's a smurf he feels a lot more pain than a human would*
1 hour later....
Brainy: What's taking Tracker so long? He should be here by now.
Papa: I don't know, but I'm starting to get worried. Maybe we should send someone out to get him.
Brainy: Okay, but who should go?
Papa: I think maybe I should go with whoever wants to come with me.
Brainy: And I can watch over the village while your gone!
Papa: Do you think I haven't learned from the last time you had power over this village? I'm hoping not to be gone very long, but if I am then I'll put Smurfette in charge.
Brainy: Oh, so you'll put Smurfette in charge but not me!
Papa: Yes, I just wouldn't wanna risk it.
Brainy: Fine.
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*By the way, the caterpillar tracker saw is a Buck-moth caterpillar and starting around now is when they come out where I live and they sting and their stings will sometimes leave temporary marks on your body depending on how bad the sting is. Also trust me, I've gotten stung a million times, it's not fun and to a smurf I couldn't imagine since the stinger can sting a bigger area on a smurf's body than it can a human.
Here are some pictures of the buckmoth caterpillar:


And then eventually they turn into these ugly moths that have startled me before when I touch a tree and then a moth flies at me.

-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
Member # 4086
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posted 05-07-2013 02:05 PM
Smurfs: TRACKER!!!! WHERE ARE YOU Tracker: * out of breath * oh hey I just ran into a monster and it stung me * shows then the purple sting * Smurfette: Oh dear... Hefty: let's get you back to papa! Greedette: what did the monster look like? Tracker: it was an ugly green creature with spine thingies all over! Greedette: * raises an eyebrow * I think it was a caterpillar.. Tracker: no! Caterpillars are fuzzy green worm like NICE creatures. Handy: whatever! Lets let Papa look at that sting.
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
Posts: 969 | From: Far Far Away | Registered: Nov 2011
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