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posted 12-19-2012 01:24 PM
I am writing a Smurf Fanfiction!! ![[Razz]](tongue.gif)
It is my first one- the history of the smurfs ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
I will post what I have written so far...
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If you like it please leave a comment and any improvements
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My friend might do some illustrations for it
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Also, the 3 smurflings represent me and my friends, I would have put my other friend in it but she HATES the smurfs ![[Frown]](frown.gif)
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Here it is
Your history teacher has probably told you all about the
Middle Ages, all the wars and fighting, the diseases, the
kings and queens. But there is one kingdom you may not know
about, a very important one: the Kingdom of The Smurfs…
Before the time of the Smurf Village we know today, all the
smurfs were servants to the powerful King Smurf. He was not
a fair leader. If you said anything against him, you were
certain to be thrown in the dungeons. It was almost
impossible to have a private conversation, as the king's
most trusted subjects were everywhere. You couldnt trust
anyone as they could be a spy for the king.
The only smurf who had a proper name was the king. Other
smurfs were not important. Instead of names they were given
numbers, which were printed onto their hats. The smurf hats
we know today are a symbol of freedom, but the hats the
smurfs wore back then were basically scraps of cloth which
they somehow fastened to their heads.
Every smurf dreamed of freedom but no smurf dared to make
that dream come true…
Smurf 387 knew what happened to smurfs who disobeyed the
king's strict laws. Last Autumn, he had seen his only
friends, the only smurfs he knew he could trust being taken
away by the king's guards. All he could do was watch as they
were dragged away, never to be seen again. The guards had
tried to make him forget what he had seen, but nothing could
make him forget what had happened.
Smurf 387 shook his head and returned to his work, sorting
mouldy smurfberries (for all the working smurfs like him)
from the plump, juicy smurfberries (for the king). He was
working alone, but he felt like he was being watched.
Without knowing what he was doing, he squeezed the
smurfberry he was holding, the juice spilling onto his
yellow trousers, which were already patterned with the
stains of 50 years.
Smurfette 132 was working in a field with three other
Smurfettes. They were younger than her and seemed to be
having a deep conversation about magic. 'Imagine'
said one 'if magic was real, we could cast all kinds of
spells, or maybe brew a potion! Or we could even look for
patterns in the stars to help us tell the future!' She
picked a twig off the ground and mimed casting a spell with
it. The Smurfette with curly brown hair seemed to be the
most interested by the idea of magic, and the Smurfette with
longer light brown hair was more interested by her
drawing, of a character half ghost, half smurf. The last
Smurfette had short ginger hair and glasses. She kept
telling the others that they needed to get on with their
work and seemed scared about what would happen if they
didn't.
Smurfette 132 sighed. Smurflings have so much imagination,
she thought.
Today Smurf 387 was working with a Smurfling. He had never
seen him before, so he must be new. He wore red clothes and
was probably about half his age. They had been working in
silence until now, but the Smurfling finally plucked up the
courage to say something. 'I wish I could live somewhere
where I don't have to smurf all this work.'
This was a very brave thing to say, because Smurf 387 could
have been a spy for the king, and the Smurfling could have
been imprisoned on his first day of work. 'I know how you
feel, I sometimes wish that,but I am grateful to be alive.
He dropped his voice to a whisper. 'I hope that smurfs and
smurfettes will be able to live together freely, and
smurfkind will live in harmony with humans.'
They talked while they worked, and soon, Smurf 387 learnt
that the Smurfling was called Smurf 450. 'You're very kind,'
said Smurf 450 'its almost like you're my own Grandpa!'
Smurf 387 laughed. 'I'm not that old!'
It was the first time on years that he had laughed, or had
someone to talk to. It felt good.
The next day, Smurf 387 was working with the smurfling
again. It was reassuring that there was someone he could
actually trust, someone to talk to. They were cleaning some
of the king's robes. Just then, the smurfling Asked a
question that came completely out of the blue.
'Do you think the king is real, or is he just made up to
scare smurfs into doing their work? I've seen hundreds of
drawings pinned up, but how do we know it's not just a
character from the mind of a brainwashed artist?'
'Young smurfling, I've often had those same thoughts myself.
And I want to find out! Because if this 'king' doesn't
exist, then there's no point in working for him. I've always
imagined a new life for the smurfs, and now is the time for
that fantasy to become reality! But I don't think everyone
working here will agree with me.'
'If we do get to the castle, there's still one more thing we
need to done before leaving this place. When I was a
smurfling, I met a Smurfette. We became friends but when we
were old enough to work, we were split up. I sometimes
wonder where she is now. When we are freed, I want to find
her again. She was the kindest smurf I have ever met.'
The smurf and the smurfling were planning their escape and
how to get into the castle. They knew it would be difficult,
but they were prepared. The possibility that one of Smurf
387's only friends was still alive and they could rescue her
kept their strength up.
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Did you like it? We were doing a project on the book 1984 in English and my story is kind of like it, because they aren't really allowed to do anything.
Stay Smurfy!
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They called themselves Smurfs. They were good
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