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Topic: "A Quest To Save a Hunter." - A Smurf Fanfic
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 07-13-2012 11:19 AM
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With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 07-13-2012 11:36 AM
Princess Bittersweet is so beautiful! :-D
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posted 07-14-2012 03:42 PM
OoOOOoooohhhhh I'm persuasive!!
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 07-15-2012 06:06 PM
Chapter Six
"Smurfette Wake up!" Greedette whispered. "Umm Why?" I asked. "Because, Gypsy wants to talk with us." Greedette said while pulling me off the bed. I sighed. "Okay, lets go." We both walked in the hall and walked in Gypsy's room.
"Hello." Gypsy said. "What do you need to tell us?" asked. " You both and Bittersweet have rare powers." Gypsy said. "What do you mean?" Greedette asked. "The powers are rare because the source that made them was destroyed. The powers were Persuasive, Thought and Knowledge." Gypsy said. "But those powers don't fit us or Bittersweet." I said. "Smurfette have you ever made someone do your bidding?" Gypsy said. "Umm Once I made Greedy open the dam when he said to me he would not." I said. "Ah ha! You have The Power of Persuasive!" Gypsy said. "Hmm I guess I am..." I said. "Greedette, can you read people's faces, or can you sense danger?" Gypsy asked. "Yes." Greedette said. Gypsy smiled. "Greedette you have my favorite power, The Power Of Thought!"
"So Bittersweet has The Power Of Knowledge." I said. "Yes." Gypsy said. "Cool Were like Superheros!" Greedette said.
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"I need to go." I said. "Aww Goodbye Bittersweet." The Queen said. "Oh one more thing. If some smurfs ask you if you saw me tell them yes and to go straight." I said. "Don't lie to your friends." The King said. "I'm not going to lie! What I told you is true! I am going straight." I said. "Ah, well then. Goodbye." The Queen said. I walked out of the castle. The storm was gone.
It has been two days sense I saw the King and Queen. And I have been feeling awful. I think I feel bad because I have not eaten or drank anything for three days!
I kept of walking. I felt like falling down.
I was in a jungle and I heard strange noises such as monkeys and buzzing insects. I wondered what happened to the older Sassette I met a few days ago. I wonder If she has a house or just travels around. I want to know all about her. I smiled.
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"Time for breakfast!" Lovette said. "YUM!" Greedy said. I sighed. "Whats wrong Greedette?" Lovette asked. "Umm Nothing. I'm just not hungry......" I said. "Can I talk with you alone?" Smurfette asked me. "Sure." I said while following Smurfette into her room. "Is Lovette evil?" Smurfette asked. "How could I know?" I asked. "You have the power of thought." Smurfette said. "Oh yeah. Umm hmm..." I closed my eyes. "She's... Umm bad or evil or nasty anything you want to call her." I said. Smurfette rolled her eyes. "How will we get the smurfs away from here?" I said looking puzzled. "Smurfs away from where darling?" A voice said. I turned around. "Lovette! Umm get them away from... Hefty's birthday present! The other smurfs might tell him if they see it!" Smurfette lied. "What is this present?" Lovette asked with an evil grin. "Its this umm.. glass vase...." I said trying to sound excited. "I know you both are not telling the truth!" Lovette hissed. "What are you?" Smurfette asked. "I am a servant of the evil. I was sent to bring you back to Master." Lovette said. "What is your real name?" I asked. "My name is Almyra." Almyra said. "Umm..." Smurfette seemed to be thinking of a plan. "Less talk!" Almyra demanded.
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posted 07-15-2012 11:01 PM
Brilliant! I'm serious, I love it, for your age-- this is amazing!
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 07-16-2012 06:48 AM
Thanks!
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posted 08-11-2012 07:22 PM
Chapter Seven
"Uhhh! Morning why did you come so soon!! I want some more sleep!!!!" I grumbled while getting out of my sleeping-bag. "EEK!!"I screamed. "I could have sworn I saw I face in the bushes!!" Fiercette said to herself. "I'll go get some firewood." I said while running into the everlasting dark wilderness.
"I'm back every-smurf! Oh yeah! nobody's here....." I said. "I need some water." I said. "If a creepy dude is in my bag
I will freak out!!!"
I said laughing to myself. I opened my bag. "Yikes!!!!!!!"
I said screaming at the top of my lungs. "I'm not a creepy dude." The smurfette said laughing. I gasped "Sassette?" She nodded "Have you been following me?" I asked.
"Mmm hmm." The older Sassette nodded.
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I can feel another body next to me. Its creepy because I don't know who he/she is and its super, super, super dark!!!!!!! I know that I'm in a sack of some kind. "HELLO!!!!" Anybody here? "Uhh I'm here........" A voice said. "Who are you?" I asked. "You don't remember?
I'm Greedette your best friend."
Greedette said.
"Oh! Now I remember!" I said.
"Ok now lets get out of here!" Greedette said. "I have a knife but I think we're up high." I said. "Hmm Just poke it upwards Please." Greedette demanded.
I did as she said and stuck the knife though the top of the sack. "OWW!!" A bird shrieked.
"See?" Greedette said in her "I told you so!" voice. I rolled my eyes. "Hey!! Quiet down there!" Amyra growled.
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"HEFTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Expert Smurfling screamed. "Uh yeah?"Hefty said while entering the smurfling bunk-house. "Your wife has a problem." Expert said. "But I don't have a wife. And besides even if I did your should not say people have problems." Hefty said. Just then Clever and Handy walked in. "Whats going on?" Clever asked. "That's what I'm finding out." Hefty growled.
"I did some "light" research and I saw that Greedette almost looks exactly like the evil smurfette!" Expert said. "But Smurfette is not Greedette." Handy pointed out. "I know, I think when Papa used the smurfy spell Greedette stopped being hypnotized and forgot everything. I "think" Smurfette gained Greedette's memories." Expert said. "Light Research?!!?" Hefty groaned. "Hahahahaha!" Clever laughed.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 08-12-2012 07:51 AM
well that ending certainly has me curious!!!
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 08-12-2012 08:02 AM
Thanks!
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posted 08-13-2012 12:33 PM
Chapter Eight
"I'm so glad I have company now!" I said. "Aww thanks." Sassette said smiling. "Come on Sassette! Lets go Its already 10:00!" I said. "Ok." Sassette said. "What was that??!!" Sassette said. "Huh?" I said looking confused. "Did you say something?" I asked. "Umm No I just thought I heard something." Sassette said looking around. A net fell from the sky. It landed on Sassette!!!! "Help!!!!!" Sassette screamed. The net lifted and started floating away. I heard Sassette screaming in pain in the distance. "Sassette!!!" I yelled. Just then a rock fell and hit me. I started feeling dizzy and then I fell down. "I- must keep on moving!" I said to myself. I wobbled over to a big rock to lay down.
When I woke up and remembered what happened I ran though the forest looking for poor Sassette.
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"Hey! We landed!" I said. "Yeah." Smurfette agreed. A light started to come into view. Someone was opening the bag! "Get out." Demanded a smurfette. "Yes ma'am." I said. The girl rolled her eyes. "Just get out okay?" I sighed as I got out. "Who's she?" I whispered to Smurfette. "She's Almyra remember?" Smurfette whispered back. "Oh yeah." I said. "Ok Girls when you go into this room Don't make fun of ANYBODY! in there okay? Also do not laugh, smile, make annoying sound or whisper." Almyra said while opening the metal door. We walked in silently. "Hello, Kitty!" A voice said. "Hi." Almyra said. "You both must be the trouble-makers." The voice said. "Just because I got one stupid B in math people call me a trouble-maker." I said rolling my eyes. "Greedette I don't think he's talking about that." Smurfette said patting my back. "Okay." I said. "What may I call you?" Smurfette and I said at the same time. "Umm...... Luke but nowadays people call me Mr. Nothing. Its so annoying! I mean would you like to be called Mr. Nothing?" Luke said. "Luke! I have your coffee!" A pretty red haired girl said. "Ok Dove." Luke said. "Kitty, Dove? Whats up with these weird names?" Smurfette asked. Almyra (Kitty) looked angry that they were being rude.
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"Anyway Hefty We need to find Greedette!!!!" Expert said. "Ok lets send out even more search parties!" Hefty said. "Look! Its Greedette's stork Bubble-gum!" Handy pointed at a stork with a purple ribbon around her neck. "The ribbon's holding a note!" Sassette said grabbing the note. "What does it say?" Clever asked.
"It says " Look in the mirror who do you see? If you see yourself your one step closer to me. Go down the evil road. And look for the twinkle in the dragon's eye. Look and search but don't be surprised because I'm there with you and I'm here with me! ~~ Mystery Smurfette
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 08-13-2012 04:20 PM
poor Sassette! i'm sure your smurfy heroes will save her though! :-)
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 08-13-2012 05:22 PM
![[Smile]](smile.gif) We'll see!
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Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 08-18-2012 08:05 AM
This is turning out great and epic so far! ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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