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Topic: The Second Smuf Village?
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-28-2012 03:46 PM
I can wait for your fanfic Archive. But hardly. ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-28-2012 03:47 PM
Kidding. ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-29-2012 06:58 AM
I am pleased to inform you all that I am starting to write the first chapter of my second fanfic called The Secret of the Tunnels. I won't release it until I finish chapter 7 of the second smurf village because I am in the middle of introducing a character that will be in the second story.
Here's a summary of chapter 7:
When the smurfs are getting to know the smurfettes and smurflings who just arrived Brainy spots a girl walking out of the ship that Adventurette came in. Adventurette tells them that her name is Seriousette. Brainy likes Seriousette but he's not sure if she likes him. Meanwhile Gargamel is complaining as usual when he hears a knock on the door. When he answers it, who would have guessed who was there.
Here's a challenge. Try to guess who Gargamel saw.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-30-2012 09:11 AM
You have whatever amount of time there is until I post my next chapter.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-31-2012 05:13 PM
I don't know how long that will be.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 01-31-2012 05:33 PM
thank you for the sneak peek, Chloette :-) i can't wait to read more!
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 01-31-2012 05:54 PM
I'm glad you like it. ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 02-05-2012 06:04 AM
Ok. I'm sorry for the long wait but here is chapter 7.
Chapter 7
Brainy’s Sweetheart
As the smurfs got acquainted with the smurfettes, who had just arrived, Brainy noticed a smurfette coming from the ship. Soon Adventurette noticed him staring and quickly said “I forgot to say that I also brought Seriousette to help out in the ship.” They saw that the girl had black, a little lower than shoulder length hair, a long plain green dress, and her hat and shoes matched her dress. She was looking at the ground and clutched a book in her hand. She wore dark violet glasses that were covered almost half way with her hair. She walked without saying a word and eventually looked up seeming like she just noticed that there were smurfs whom she didn’t know around her. She mumbled a little “hi” and she walked away with her nose in a book. Jokette, right when she saw her said “Oh Great! Here comes the only smurfette who won’t laugh at my jokes.” Adventurette didn’t look so satisfied with her just saying hi, so she said “What was going on in the ship that made you want to camp out in there for about a half an hour Seriousette? You didn’t even introduce yourself.” The new smurfette, whom was called Seriousette didn’t look like she wanted to talk right now and said softly “Just getting my books.” Adventurette, still not looking satisfied, let Seriousette go. Brainy watched as she walked with her book and got comfortably seated on a rock. He heard Adventurette mumble “Such a bookworm.” Then she moved on to other things. Brainy walked over to her and sat on the ground next to her trying to start a conversation with her. She looked as if she hadn’t seen him at all and had no idea he existed. She just read her book. “What’s your name?” Brainy asked. “Didn’t you hear Adventurette say that it is Seriousette?” She replied in a soft voice. “Yeah, I just wanted to hear you say it.” Brainy admitted smiling. “What are you reading?” Asked Brainy curiously. “It is called Harry Smurfer and the Prisoner of Smurf-kaban.” Seriousette answered softly. Brainy wanted her to talk to him. “I write books. They are much more interesting than that. I write Quotations of Brainy Smurf and Brainy’s Life Story.” Brainy showed off. Seriousette was now ignoring him. She had her nose in her book. Brainy was not giving up on trying talking to her. He said “I am also Papa Smurf’s personal assistant.” Brainy noticed that she wasn’t listening so he said a second time “I am also Papa Smurfs assistant.” After repeating that another 3 times, Seriousette got up and walked away. Brainy quickly followed. He was determined to not lose sight of her.
Meanwhile at Gargamel’s Hovel, Gargamel was saying “Ohh Azreal. How come no matter what I do, those pesky smurfs always get away? No matter what it is.” He banged his foot on a table with frustration and then jumped around in pain. Suddenly he heard a knock at the door. “Oh who could that be?” He asked himself in a frustrated manner. When he opened the door he saw a tall, blonde haired, beautiful lady standing there with an orb in her hands. “Why hello there, I’m Allura.” The lady said in a calm, graceful voice. “What do you want with me?” Asked Gargamel. “Can’t you see that I’m busy? I’m trying to find a way to catch an” Gargamel paused thinking that if he told Allura about the smurfs she would get curious about what they are. “Trying to catch an enemy?” Allura finished for him. “Yes.” Gargamel said. “But I am tired and am trying to devise a plan to catch the smurfs!” Gargamel went quiet noticing that he accidentally told her about the smurfs. “Smurfs?” Allura asked. “I know the smurfs. They seem like nice creatures. Why do you try to hunt them down?” Allura asked calmly. “Never mind lady! Why are you here anyway?” Gargamel asked. “You said that you were tired sir?” Allura asked. “Yes, but why does it matter to you?” Gargamel answered. “See this orb? It contains magical powers. It inspires the uninspired and gives energy to those who don’t have any. Here try it. Just touch the orb and the magic will rush inside you.” Allura said mystically. “It couldn’t hurt to try.” Gargamel thought out loud. He reached out a hand and grasped the orb. He felt energy flowing through his veins. Soon he felt like he could do anything, even catch the smurfs. “How will I keep in touch with you so I can use the orb?” Gargamel asked. “You may keep it if you want.” Allura said calmly. She handed the orb to him and said “This should help you catch the smurfs.” Gargamel looked happy. He grabbed the orb and said “Now go back to wherever you came from!” He marched into his house and exclaimed “Oh Azreal! Look what I’ve got! I might be able to get those vile little smurfs!”
An hour later, Poet Smurf, who once ran into Allura in the past and knew that despite her beautiful gentle appearance that inside she was ugly and evil, was walking through the forest searching for inspiration. Suddenly he saw a large figure run past him with great speed. “Wow, who can that be?” Poet asked himself. Then he heard the figure yell “I’m gonna catch those pesky smurfs!” Poet had a puzzled look on his face. “Gargamel?” He thought to himself. He thought for a few seconds trying to think about what to do. He got startled by the thing, who he assumed was Gargamel, was running back toward him. Poet dived into a nearby bush. Gargamel ran right past him. When he felt it safe, he ran back to the village as fast as his legs could carry him.
When he got a few feet from the village he started yelling “Papa Smurf! Papa Smurf!” The smurfs crowded around Poet. Poet was panting heavily and could barely speak. Papa walked up to him and asked “What is it Poet?” After he caught his breath, Poet started “When I was in the forest I saw Gargamel run past me. He was so fast he didn’t even see me even though he was hunting for smurfs.” Before he could say anymore Brainy interrupted “Poet, Poet, Poet. Even Gargamel is late for stuff sometimes. He was probably just rushing to some wizard convention or something.” Poet crossed his arms and said “But he said I’m going to catch those smurfs.” The smurfs were now laughing. Not at Poet, but at the fact that Gargamel ran right past him. After the laughter died down, Poet continued “He was unusually speedy and thinking about the part of the forest I was in, it would have taken Gargamel a great deal of energy to run all the way from his hovel to where I saw him.” Handy put the facts together and said “Poet’s right. Only Allura’s orb could give you enough energy to get from his hovel to where Poet was.” Poet was astonished by this joke and said “Maybe you’re right Handy. What if Gargamel used Allura’s magical orb.” Brainy cut in “What’re we going to do Papa Smurf?” Papa Smurf thought for a few seconds and finally said “We will save Gargamel so he doesn’t end up like Poet, Farmer, Painter, Handy, and Harmony.” The smurfs recalled their last experiences with that orb and how those five smurfs had gotten tricked by Allura and when they went into her house she tried to keep them as prisoners so they would clean and how they had nearly escaped. “I’ve got a plan. I’m gonna have Hefty, Handy, Farmer, Painter, Harmony, Poet and Brainy sneak into Gargamel’s hovel and one of you will make the lights dim. Then the rest of you will walk as close as they can to his fireplace without him seeing you. Then hurl a potion that I will give you into the fireplace and run in front of it. That will make harmless sparks fly out of the fireplace. The smurf that dimmed the light will then make his voice sound scary and say something like look forwards Gargamel. If I know Gargamel, he will get frightened and will immediately look where you want him to. The ones in front of the fireplace will make shadows on the wall and try to convince him to stop using the orb.” Handy raised his hand. “Do you have a question Handy?” Asked Papa Smurf. “Yes” Handy started “Isn’t this going to be a bit too risky?” Papa Smurf saw the concern in his eyes. Before Papa Smurf could say anything Brainy said “This assignment isn’t that bad, if we mess up we could only get eaten, turned into gold, or exposed to the rest of the humans. Eaten and turned into gold! Papa Smurf, don’t you think there is a less risky plan. We could sacrifice one of the smurfs, trade him a large cake for him to toss the orb in the lake, please anything but that!” The smurfs snickered, everyone but Seriousette. Seriousette didn’t laugh for two reasons. One is that she didn’t have a good since of humor, and second is that she felt a little affectionate towards him. “Oh, what happened to our fearless leader? Little task scared you?” Hefty teased. Brainy didn’t know what to say. Papa Smurf said “I will get to work on the potion right away.” And he turned to go into his lab.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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