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Topic: The Second Smuf Village?
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-27-2011 12:37 PM
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Originally posted by Brainy Smurf Snaeha:
Wow you're really good at writing!
My fanfuc is currently on hold but in this 4 days
holidays i will have a chance to continue the story
again.
My teacher said the same thing to me. Thanks. I'm glad that you like my fanfic. ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 12-27-2011 02:07 PM
i love it! i love that you made Casey a smurf too, and i love the idea of Christmasette Smurfette :-)
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Uncle Gargy
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posted 12-27-2011 05:37 PM
Great story! You're doing very well. I'm trying to do long chapters as well and don't know if you're the same but I need notes to make sure everything is covered and I don't repeat anything.
It's good to bring in characters that did not seem to get much 'airing' in the original stories, such as Homnibus and even Lord Balthazar. I'm trying to make Gargamel's mum more 'interesting'.
Keep up the good work! : )
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-27-2011 05:37 PM
Thanks Nurturer. Did you know that Chloette and Casey were based off of me and my sister. My name is Chloe and my sister (Dogboo22 on here) is Casey. I am gonna introduce Christmasette more in the story.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 12-27-2011 06:01 PM
i did :-) i remember seeing you talking about about you two being sisters, i think in Smurfette's smurball thread :-)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-27-2011 06:06 PM
Yeah, it is in that thread.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-27-2011 08:44 PM
i had a feeling she was based on you
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-29-2011 02:15 PM
Here is chapter 5 of "The Second Smurf Village?"
Chapter 5
Stylette Wins!!!!
Both Hefty and Handy were wondering where the new smurfs were. Then they heard somesmurf yell “Who in the smurf are they?” All of the smurfs crowded around the smurf who yelled that, who turned out to be Brainy. The curious smurfs looked to see the smurfettes and smurflings from the new village behind a bush. “Are you all okay?” Hefty said to the smurfettes, who looked shocked that someone found their hiding place. “Hefty, you know these smurfs?” Harmony asked. “Yeah, we found them on our expedition to find Chloette’s home. We were wondering where they went.” Hefty explained. “Handy, Tracker, Greedy, and Vanity know too.” He added on. The five other smurfs nodded their heads to show that he was telling the truth. “We weren’t gonna tell you until we found them. Honest.” Handy said. “Handy’s right.” Tracker said. “I’m not mad at you.” Papa said in a calm voice without one bit of anger in it. “I was just curious about them; and of course, a little surprised.” They saw the smurfs from the new village introducing themselves. “I’m Magikette. I’m an amateur wizard and I am kind of the chief of the, I mean our village.” Magikette said followed by some twin smurfettes, they had perfect long light brunette hair that was flowing down; Hefty recognized them because he recalled having fallen on one of them when he jumped over the hedge. “I’m Fashionette. The prettiest smurfette in the world. I am also the smurfette who got flattened by that rude smurf” She said pointing at Hefty. She acted as if she didn’t know she had a smurfette who looked just like her right next to her in the same outfit, a glamorous one sleeved red dress. “I’m her sister, Model Smurfette.” Her sister said right after her twin if perfect twin sync. Right after they introduced themselves and had a long argument about whose dress looked smurfier, they started talking with a smurfette who was dressed in green smurferalls and a light blue shirt underneath them. She had some patches on her smurferalls like hearts, stars, etc. Her dark brunette hair was pulled back into a ponytail and she had a pencil in her ear. She had now grabbed her pencil and started drawing in the sketchbook that she clutched in her hand. Handy looked at Vanity, who was looking at her just staring. When Vanity noticed Handy looking he pulled his hand held mirror over his face and acted innocent like he wasn’t doing anything. Handy giggled knowing that it was awkward for Vanity to look at a smurfette when he was usually looking at himself in the mirror. “Oh, and I’m Stylette Smurfette.” The girl said quickly “I design and sew the Fashion Sisters dresses so they can walk the runway.” She added while looking at the twins to show that they were the Fashion Sisters. After she said that she went back to her own work on sketching what Handy guessed were dresses with the Fashion Sisters hovering over her to see how it was turning out. “I’m Christmasette; most of the smurfs call me the jolliest smurfette of them all. I’m the village event planner and decorator and you can guess what my favorite holiday is……… if you didn’t guess, it’s Christmas!!! The smurfs who had just arrived in the village recognized her as the smurfette that they had almost been introduced to on the eagle. “My assistant is Party Smurfette.” As she introduced her friend, they saw a colorful looking smurfette walking over to where the smurfette, who could very well be mistaken for an elf. “Hi, I’m Party Smurfette.” The smurfette said. She had shoulder length bright orange hair and a yellow rainbow polka dot dress that almost reached her ankles. She clutched a red balloon in her hand. She had the biggest smile a smurf could have.
After they had introduced all of the smurfettes and smurflings in the village, the Fashion Sisters said that they would do a fashion show in the Smurf Theater, where the smurfs perform plays often. Handy made a table and Stylette chose three smurfs to be judges she chose Tailor, Vanity, and Smurfette for their knowledge on fashion and style. When it started, the lights came on and they saw Fashionette walking around the stage doing fancy model-like poses. She wore a red sequin dress that covered her feet and her hair was in a French braid which lied on her back as she walked around. Tailor thought from looking at her that every hair on her head was in the perfect place. After Fashionette strutted around the stage doing poses, the judges voted. Tailor voted 5 (on a scale from 1-10), Vanity voted 6 even though most of the time he was looking at Stylette, and Smurfette voted 8. Next Model Smurfette came out wearing the same thing as Fashionette except hers was light pink and she had her hair flowing down reaching her hips not in a braid like her sister’s, as she walked and did poses like Fashionette and Tailor voted 7, Vanity voted 6, and Smurfette voted 8. Next the smurfs thought it was over until they saw Jokey Smurf get on stage, he giggled to himself and said “I think it would only be fair if the creator of their dresses were to get up on this stage and show the judges what she could do. Come on up here Stylette!” Stylette was surprised to hear this, but that is what Jokey is best at, surprising people. She walked up the steps on the stage unsurely as Jokey helped her up. Then Stylette walked around the stage. But unlike the Fashion Sisters, she did flips and did cartwheels and stuff. Tailor voted 9, Vanity voted 10, and Smurfette voted 9. Then Jokey yelled “Stylette Wins! Let’s give a big hand to Stylette!” All of the smurfs clapped while the stylish twins had their mouths hanging open from shock. When the smurfs started walking to do other things only Hefty heard from behind the curtains of the stage, the Fashion Sisters fighting about which one of them Vanity liked the most. Hefty chuckled hearing this but he kept it to himself, for he didn’t like to tell secrets of other smurfs or smurfettes.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-29-2011 03:37 PM
nice
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 12-29-2011 04:23 PM
lol they're fighting over Vanity :-D
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Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Archive Smurf
Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 12-29-2011 05:09 PM
Wow, identical twins, opposite interests and fights! You are actually putting a lot of effort into this fanfic! KEEP IT UP!
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-29-2011 05:37 PM
I can see that you like my twin idea. I should remember that for chapter six. Unfourtunantly, I am about to go to bed so I can't write any of the next chapter. Iam now in bed with my kindle posting. It's not a kindle fire. It ia the kind that is smaller than the firat model.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-29-2011 05:39 PM
is it ok if i use your twin idea for my fanfic with bakette and sportette for twins
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-29-2011 05:48 PM
I can see that you like my twin idea. I should remember that for chapter six. Unfourtunantly, I am about to go to bed so I can't write any of the next chapter. Iam now in bed with my kindle posting. It's not a kindle fire. It ia the kind that is smaller than the firat model.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Archive Smurf
Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 12-29-2011 05:56 PM
No problem, I will be waiting for your next chapter patiently. There is no time to rush on the sixth chapter because rushed projects don't come well so it is always good to take time!
Anyways, goodnight!
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-29-2011 06:00 PM
Sorry I said that twice. It's fine for you to use twins in your fanfic.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-29-2011 08:24 PM
ok thanks and yay ![[Razz]](tongue.gif)
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 12-30-2011 08:31 AM
No Problem Sportette. ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-30-2011 04:06 PM
I am starting to draw some of the characters in this fanfic so here is Stylette.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-30-2011 04:10 PM
nice drawing i think ill try drawing her but i wont be able to post
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-30-2011 04:23 PM
Here are Model Smurfette and Fashionette, aka the Fashion Sisters. I already posted this somewhere on bluebuddies but I renamed it so I could post it again. Here it is.
Here is Christmasette and Party Smurfette
Christmasette
Party Smurfette
Here is Magikette Smurfette
Here is Rudy Smurfling
Here is Aquamarine Smurfette
Here is Naturette Smurfling
Here is Chloette Smurfette
I will post more as I make them. I had a problem and can't upload my picture of Jokette. I will try to fix that and post the picture.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-30-2011 04:29 PM
Ok, you can draw Sketchette Sportette.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-30-2011 04:36 PM
wasnt that stylette jokey?
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 12-30-2011 04:54 PM
Oh yeah, sorry.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-30-2011 05:00 PM
its fine just wanted to tell you
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