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Ruffette
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posted 05-03-2009 09:15 AM
im still not done but somepoint before its all over i will introduce MARINA SMURFETTE! 
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posted 05-03-2009 11:00 AM
Your story is getting even cooler, Sammy. And the Smurfette pic is lovely too! She's always charming in any color. You managed to get what could seem impossible: changing Marina into a Smurfette! Now she and Handy can stay together, such a nice work! ![[Enamored Smurf]](graemlins/Enamored_Smurf.gif)
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Ruffette
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posted 05-09-2009 02:33 PM
thanks squeaky! and also some smurfs meet thier parents! SHHHHHH! the also have other siblings. Even Ruffette,Smurfette and Sassette have some! this is a top secret sneak peek! Heheheh
THE SEARCH PARTIES ARRIVE IN SMURFTOPIA “Where is she” demanded the queen. “you see, your hiney-ness, fawnette loves that smurf a lot” Jockette explained. “Jockette, if he’s from out there he is trouble” the queen explained. “But they seemed really nice, your hiney-ness” Jockette argued. “Its probably a trap” the king debated. “If you can not do it yourselves I will have to do it myself” the queen grumbled. “you and your hiney” jockette muttered to herself. SOMEWHERE IN THE FOREST The queen and king were searching for fawnette they used magic to find the smurf village. “Papa smurf theres two others that just entered the village!” Brainy warned. Papa smurf looks in the direction Brainy is pointing. “Amazing, simply amazing” Papa smurf gasps. “Where is she!” Demanded the queen. “where is who?” Papa smurf asked. “Fawnette!” screeched the queen. “please, calm down” Papa smurf ordered. “She’s not leaving!” Ruffette shouted. “your alive” gasped both the queen and king suddenly interrupted by Ruffette, Smurfette, and Sassette. “w-what?” Smurfette questioned. “we could take you three back to smurftopia to reunite with your families, they’ve missed you so much, you probably don’t remember being turned into magical blue clay!” The queen cooed. “what!” the three smurfettes chimed. “years ago three smurfettes were turned into magical blue clay and one at a time they would all be turned back into smurfettes by a wizard at just the right time” Explained the king. “Your memories will come back once we bring you home to smurftopia” the queen cheers. “but pappy gargamel created us from his spell book” sassette explained. “does this mean I can stay in smurf village?” Fawnette asks. “OK” the king answers after a long moment. “But perhaps you should give some of the smurfs in this tiny village a tour of smurftopia” The queen adds. A slow smile spreads across fawnettes face. “Are there any other parents in smurftopia” smurfette asks. “there might be.” Fawnette answers. “some of the older smurfs say that when I was about three days old the evil queen, Gnora smurfnapped the king and queen and wouldn’t return them unless 100 baby boys were given up to the human world” Fawnette continues. “OH that’s so smurfy” Smurfette chuckles. “why didn’t you tell us about this before?” Ruffette questioned. “I didn’t know about it or if you were the same girls that were cursed. Hefty, Tuffy, Ruffette, Jokey, Clumsy, Smurfette, Sassette, Fawnette, Papa Smurf, Tracker, Grouchy, and Handy packed some bags to go to smurftopia. TO SMURFTOPIA The group set out to smurftopia. Fawnette lead the way. She sprinkle some magical dust over each smurfs head. They all entered smurftopia together. It was amazing. Flowers grew everywhere there was a glorious river on the far side with a long range of mountains. There were smurfs and smurfettes HEFTYS BRUTALLY MUSCULAR FAMILY (Brawny, Musclette, Buff) scattered everywhere. They were all different shapes and sizes and ages. There was even a smurf with two heads. “who is that” Hefty questions pointing at the two headed smurf. “that’s bob and joe” Fawnette explained. “some of us have real names” She adds. “how smurfy” smurfette giggled. “that’s one strong old lady hefty says” pointing at a smurfette with grey hair that was lifting a huge barrel. “who are you calling old lady” Demanded the grey haired smurfette. She pauses to take a good look at hefty. “you! You’ve got lady muscles boy! But your face, it’s so much like my husbands” she says examing hefty carfully. “Well I’ll be smurfed! Your hefty” she observed. “what” he says. He was mildly creeped out. I gave up my little boy and he grew up to be a tiny bonewrack” she grumbled. An older smurf enters the scene. “Who’s the kid” said the smurf. “I think its our boy hefty all grown up” said the smurfette. “that can’t be hefty he’s got to be stonger than that” argued the smurf. “He’s got the tattoos we gave him before we had to give him up” “who are you” hefty questions. “were your parents, boy” the smurfette chimed. “We had to give you up along with 100 other parents that gave up there little boys.” Explained his long lost mother. “you were only a few days old.” His dad added. “OH! Shut up and go get Buff, I’m sure buff can’t wait to meet his little brother!” she giggles. RUFFETTES INSANE PARENTS!(Scumette, Rugged) “your daughter has returned” the queen explained to the two older smurfs. “she survived” barked ruffettes mother. “Yes she did”the king explained. Ruffette steps out from behind him to greet her parents. She paused her mom was only wearing an old tattered dressand she had buck teeth. Her dad wore a old pair of pants without shoes and a torn shirt. Her parents mouths dropped open. “Ruffette whats wrong wit ya! Aint you gonna come and see your room where you used to sleep.” Barked her mom. “Uh,maybe” Ruffette answered.
GROUCHYS MOODY FAMILY AND TWIN SISTER (Cranky, Crabbette, Misery) “I hate smurftopia” grouchy mutters. “what do you have to be angry about you don’t live here!” screeched a smurfette with a strange hairstyle that was different than any other girl. She was pretty, yet strange. She took a good look at him. “You look exactly like me” she observes. “y-you’re my brother!” she mumbled. “stay as far away from me as possible, grouchy I have no love for you even if we are twins.” She shouts. Grouchy looks at her confused. He follows the smurfette.
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Ruffette
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posted 05-09-2009 08:39 PM
and here is a pic of grouchy and misery 
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posted 05-12-2009 05:07 AM
Sammy this is great. and I love misery!!
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averylurvesyou
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posted 05-19-2009 05:49 PM
very nice update! and good job on that pic!
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Ruffette
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posted 06-06-2009 10:01 PM
here is more but not done yet!be patient ive just been really busy
“Wait!” grouchy shouts. Misery stops and turns around. “Why are still talking to me!” she hisses. “You haven’t been apart of my life so why are you so concerned now!” she grumbles. He looks at her. “I hate you anyways!” he shouts back. Both siblings stare at each other before storming off.
Ruffettes re-discovers her room Ruffette steps inside ‘her’ house. All the walls seemed familiar now that she was seeing them. “come see were your room was” Said ruffettes mom rather quietly leading ruffette to a tiny light pint painted door. Ruffette stepped inside the room. There was a small pink bed that sassette could sleep in. There was a white curtain and a small pink chest full of toys. She walks over to the chest she picks up a small pink teddy. She hugs it close. “I must have been really young” Ruffette decides. “you were only about 70 years old” Ruffettes mom tells her letting a gentle smile spread across her face.
Jokeys Family?
Later on ruffette goes to look around smurftopia. She hears a tiny giggle behind her. She turns around to greet her best friends familiar giggle. But when she turns around she sees a little girl. “Why are you laughing?” Ruffette questioned the little girl. “Because I just stuck a spider down your skirt silly” giggled the tiny smurfling. “What?” ruffette hissed. “you don’t have to worry its not poisonous” informed the little girl. Ruffette could feel the spider crawling down her leg. She let out aloud scream before flicking it off. “Don’t ever do that again!” Ruffette hissed at the smurfling. “I’m so sorry about that” said an elderly smurfette with hair that was darker than the childs probably with age. “My daughter takes after her father and I.” explained the older smurfette. Ruffette starred straight at her face. It was a face she recognized. It was almost exactly like jokeys only with more wrinkles. Almost on cue jokey stepped up to the three of them. “hey ruffette” he said letting a wide grin appear across his face. Ruffette returned his greeting with a wave. It wasn’t long before he noticed what ruffette noticed.
Grouchy and misery friends?
Grouchy spots Misery clutching two identical teddy bears. Shes sitting alone on a log. When he gets closer he notices her crying. He steps on a twig making a loud snapping sound. She turns around and looks at him. “I thought you hated me” she whispered. “I do hate you” he argued. “than why are you here?” She questioned. “I’ll leave. Even if I hate leaving” he answers. “NO! you can stay if you don’t hate staying” misery argued. He sits down next to her. “these were our very first teddy bears when we were first born and then you left. When I was older mom told me about you. Since then I’ve kept them close by” She explained.
Heftys Brother
Heftys dad came back with a very muscular smurf following behind him. Heftys eyes widened when he saw his muscles. It was amazing seeing them so muscular. Hefty reached his hand out to shake his brothers hand which he regretted when he could no longer feel his hand. When his brother let go hefty peered down at his purplish hands. Everyone looked at him grinning. “your so tiny! Your gonna turn out like our cousin” Explained Buff. “UH, what cousin?” hefty questioned. “OH you never knew ruffette shes probably smurfed” explained heftys dad. “UH, actually shes here” hefty explained. “Are you smurfing! OH! We have to have dinner at my sisters house tonight and see my favorite niece! And shes my only niece!” screeched heftys mom.
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Oakley Smurf
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posted 06-07-2009 08:13 AM
Thanks,sammy! this smurftopia is a smurftastic idea! about all the smurfs stories,your new smurfs and pics it's was very cool! even it still not done! I'm very busy.stills no new smurfy idea for today. maybe tomorrow. i'll post a new topic.
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posted 06-07-2009 03:01 PM
Great chapter, Sammy! How nice seeing Grouchy and Misery starting to get along well...
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Ruffette
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posted 06-14-2009 09:26 AM
In a few hours Heftys family would be having dinner with Ruffettes family. ‘how could it be possible, I don’t want to be ruffettes cousin, shes obnoxious’ hefty thought to himself. COUSINS??? How could it be possible. “Is it my baby? Are you back? Is it you my little Jokey” cooed the elderly woman. Placing a gentle hand on jokeys shoulder. “UH? I’m jokey but who are you?” Jokey questioned. “I knew you wouldn’t recognize me” She chuckled. “But I think I’m your mother” she added. “amazing, simply amazing!” Papa smurf gasped. “Gosh papa smurf this place shore is smurfy” Clumsy giggled. “Yes it is. Why don’t you look around” Papa smurf suggested. “OH BOY!” clumsy cheered running off leaving papa smurf by himself. Fawnette, Tracker, Tuffy, and Handy were joined by Clumsy on there tour of smurftopia. “This is chefettes diner, she does the cooking while her husband, chef smurf does dishes all day” Fawnette says pointing at a large building full of tables and chairs. “Don’t come in!” shouted an elderly woman wearing a black dress with a grey apron. “why not?” Fawnette questioned. “Because Marina is doing work in here, someone broke a table last night” Chefette explained. “could we just come in for a second so I can show them” Fawnette pleaded. “OK” Chefette sighed. Handy saw her, and everysmurf saw him looking at marina. ‘shes a smurfette?’ handy asked himself. Each smurf became silent. It was marina. “Umm Handy are you okay?” Fawnette questioned. “Was marina a mermaid?” he asked her. “yes, but when her father died she tried to see if we had something that could bring him back, we didn’t and chemist accidentally spilled a failed experiment on her which caused her to become a smurfette, she learned to use legs and then did all of the handy work that we could never do” Fawnette summarized. “Do you think I could go help her?” handy asked. “I guess so” fawnette answered. Marina sat down by the broken table working on fixing it. “do you need help?” asked the smurf. “what?” said the smurfette looking up from her work. There was a shocked silence. “handy?” she guessed. “yeah its me but how did you end up in smurftopia?” he asked her. “I used to come here and see the other smurfs and smurfettes in smurftopia, I ended up being turned into a smurfette by accident” she explained. He smiled at her and kissed her gently on her forhead. “do you still love me?” she asked. “yes” he answered. Clumsy, Tuffy, and Tracker looked at the couple quietly. “So Fawnette who is he!” Chefette demanded pointing at tracker. “Umm this is Tracker” Fawnette answered pointing at her mate. “tracker?” Chefette repeated. “σας, ώστε η μικρή μας για kidknapping fawnette” Chefette asked. “chefette doesn't που μιλούν ελληνικά” fawnette answered back. “And hes not kidknapping me!” she added. “don’t speak greek they don’t know what your saying!” Fawnette grumbled. “sorry” Chefette grumbled. “This is so smurfy that your finally home!” Cried Jokeys mother. “who is she?” she asks pointing at Ruffette. “this is my best friend Ruffette” Jokey answers. “ruffette come back here!” shouts her mother from inside of her mushroom house. “yes ma’am” Ruffette grumbles. Heading for her moms house. “Your cousin and his Family is over for dinner so wash up!” she demanded. “what cousin?” ruffette asks. “OH? You don’t remember cousin hefty because he was only a baby” Ruffettes mom explained. “Hefty?” Ruffette asked. “Grouchy I don’t know how to say this” Misery started. “say what?” grouchy asked. “I hated you because you left me and that’s what mom and dad always told me” she continued. “they told me you left because I wasn’t good enough to be your sister and that you hated us” She explained. “I didn’t hate you I just didn’t know you!” he argued. “And I hate that I never knew anyone!” He added.
TRANSLATIONS σας, ώστε η μικρή μας για kidknapping fawnette so your the one kidknapping fawnette
chefette doesn't που μιλούν ελληνικά chefette, he dosnt know how to speak greek
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posted 06-15-2009 04:37 PM
Your story is getting even lovelier, Sammy. Keep on Smurfin'!! ![[Wild Smurf]](graemlins/Wild_Smurf.gif)
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Ruffette
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posted 06-30-2009 08:50 PM
Misery looks at her brother. A tiny smile appears on her face. “Maybe we can be friends” She says. “Hefty I’m sure you can’t wait to see your cousin!” His mom orders. “Uhhg shes annoying” Hefty complains. “Oh you barely know her yet!” His mom yelled. “I don’t think I want to know her” He grumbled. “Later on maybe you can meet some of my friends” Marina suggested. “I’d love that Handy replied, looking at his mate. For a moment both of them look at each of carefully studying each other. “I love you” Handy whispers “I love you too. Handy” She replies wrapping her arms around his waist and giving him a kiss. Hefty lets out a loud groan. “Chill out she just your cousin” His dad decided. “Shes a freak of nature!” Hefty argues. His mom and dad just roll there eyes. Hefty and his new found family wait outside for ruffettes mom to answer the door. “Come in and meet ur cousin!” Ruffettes mom orders grabbing hefty by the wrist. “What?” he stuttered as he was shoved into a little girls room. The walls were pink and there were pink curtains and a small pink bed. Ruffette looks up from the floor where she has three photo albums opened. “Hi Hefty!” She said letting a smile spread across her face. “Why are you so happy?” he asks raising an eyebrow. “Well If were cousins we might as well pretend that were friends.” Ruffettes suggests. Hefty looks at her “for once I agree with you” he decided. Ruffette forced a huge phony smile. So did Hefty. “This is where our room would have been if you were still here, but I grew up alone in here” Misery grumbles. “I’m sorry” Grouchy whispers, Placing a gentle hand on her shoulder. “It’s not your fault” Misery answers wiping away a tear. She turns around to look at her brother. She wraps her arms around for a hug. Usually he would back away but inside he felt bad for his sister. “I won’t leave anymore” he whispers. “promise?” Misery questions. “I promise” He answers. “Papa Smurf do you know a Natural, Snappy, and Slouchy smurfs?” The Queen ordered “Actually there back in smurf village and they had a little accident” papa smurf explained. “what accident?” She sneered. “Ummmmm, They’re children” He answeres. “How are they children!” She screeched. “Do I even want to know!” She yelled. “Bring the three smurflings to smurftopia they’re ready for school” The queen sighed after calming down a little. “So Hefty your family seems. . . Strong?” ruffette says trying to make conversation “Ummm yeah. . . too strong” Hefty answers. Ruffette nods. “And your mom scares me” Hefty adds. “Well everyone has there sensitive side and she just is scared to show hers” Ruffette answers. Now Hefty nods. “Maybe we will start to get along” Ruffette says. “that’s in a longshot!” Hefty laughs. Ruffettes smile fades. “You don’t think you could learn to like me better?” ruffette guesses. “Nope. Your too idiotic and immature” He admits. “so that’s what you think of me?” Ruffette decides. Hefty nods. “Nice clothes by the way” Grouchy comments looking at her insane outfit. “umm thanks I guess?” misery guesses.
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posted 07-01-2009 11:06 PM
Oh, I see there's still some difficulty among some Smurfs and their new found families! Wow! Very great story, Sammy! ![[Roll Eyes]](rolleyes.gif)
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posted 07-02-2009 10:10 AM
Actually i don't have enough time to read all of the stories. Overall it's a very interesting one! keep it smurfing,sammy! Sorry,that i keep busy at this time around but i'll get touch all of you everyday at least one post.
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posted 07-02-2009 06:13 PM
Another good chapter... keep smurfin'! ![[Sassette Smurfling]](graemlins/Sassette.gif)
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posted 07-03-2009 12:46 AM
Good work Sammy!!
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posted 07-04-2009 10:22 PM
thanks everyone!
More!!! its not done until ruffette gives birth to ragette and roarette
Hefty and Ruffette sit in the tiny room, pretending to make conversation. “this is weird talking to you like a idiot” Ruffette says “yeah it makes you seem stupider than usual” Hefty agrees. Ruffette scowls at him. “I feel the love, cousin” Ruffette sneers sarcastically. “I love your sarcasm” he teases rolling his eyes slightly. “shutup or I’ll rip your teeth out” Ruffette warns, starting to get angry. “Sorry” he whimpers slightly flinching. “wimp” she whispers under her breath. “what was that” he sneers. “I called you a wimp, cousin” she said rather sweetly. Heftys cheeks turn to a light pink color. “I’m not a wimp” He says. “yes you are, yes you are!” Ruffette teases. “Heftys a wimp, Heftys a wimp!” She taunts repeatedly, standing up. She runs to the other side of the room . Grouchy could see that misery was about to start crying again. He sits next to her on her bed. He gives her a warm hug. “I know that I barely know you but I feel like I’ve known you my entire life, grouchy” She whispers. “Me too” he whispers back. For a long moment the twins say nothing to eachother. “I have always loved you since we were both tiny babies” she admits. “I think I love you too but first I want to get to know you” he tells her. “Okay” she agrees. Ruffette grabs a pillow from her bed and whips it at her cousins head. “hey!” he snickes throwing it back at her causing her to fall back on her tail. “I got you!” hefty teases, helping ruffette up. Ruffette scowls at him. “that’s not funny” she snickers. “you sound like jokey” he teases. “DUH! Hes my best friend sometimes you sound like handy” She argues. “Do I?” he questions. “yes. Everyone sounds like there best friend sometimes because of how much time they spend together” she answers. “OH?” was heftys answer. “Smurflings this is called a school ”explained the queen. “Oh smurfy!” snappy piped up. “yes, this is where you four will meet other little smurflings your age” she explained. “Smurfaroo!” both Sassette and Nat cheered. All four smurflings ran towards the school. “Smartette theses are four smurflings from the smurf village” she said. “welcome!” Smartette cooed. “We have Nat, Snappy, Slouchy and, Sassette” the queen introduced. “Why don’t you four find a place to sit at one of the tables, its craft time” she said encouragingly. Slouchy saw a little girl sitting by herself at a table. She had two light brown braids. “come on slouchy! Come sit with us!” snappy shouted At a table with Nat, and Sassette. “I’m gonna sit with her, she looks lonely” Slouchy answered pointing at the little girl. Snappy scowled at him but didn’t say anything. “Hi” Slouchy said quietly to the girl. She looked up. “Hi! My name is Mousy” she introduced. “Gee, uh? How come your sitting by yourself?” he asked. “I just don’t fit in with the other kids, I’m too shy” she answers. “that’s not very smurfy” he says. “I don’t care if they don’t like me” she answered. Ruffettes mom pokes her head in the door. “its time to eat” she calls. Ruffette and Hefty walk into the dinning room. Everyone sits down, and begins eating. Hefty whispers something insulting in ruffettes ear and she kicks him under the table. He barely lets out a quiet “ouch” Afterwards Ruffette stands outside with hefty assuming lots of smurfs would be staying with there families in smurftopia for a few nights. “I’m gonna go see if handy still has his girlfriend” Hefty says. “Okay bye” Ruffette says. For a moment he looks at her. “Maybe we are starting to get along” Hefty says with a wink. She reaches her arms out to give him a hug. He hesitates before leaning in for the hug.
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posted 07-06-2009 04:50 PM
Nice new Chapter Sammy Keep It up cas't wait to read the rest ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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posted 07-06-2009 09:55 PM
Great job, Sammy! That's really good that Hefty and Rufette are starting to be more friendly to each other. Keep on smurfin'! ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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posted 07-19-2009 10:37 AM
i like the story it keeps getting better and better.
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posted 07-25-2009 10:24 PM
Finally I got another chapter done
Ruffette walks into to the kitchen to say goodnight to her mom and dad. She stops when she hears a howling soundcoming from outside. “whats that?” Ruffette says turning towards her mom.. “What? That’s just scratches” She answers. Ruffette looked puzzled. “Babe, we haven’t introduced her to scratches yet” Her Father answered. “What! How did we forget to introduce her to her best friend” “Scratches?” Ruffette said, Feeling more confused than ever. “that stupid mutt that’s does its business in our back yard you loved that creature!” Her mom explained without taking a breath. “Its late and you need some rest, your beds a bit small but tomorrow we’ll get a bigger one for you” Ruffettes mom said. “okay,” ruffette said with a smile. “Night mom, night dad” Ruffette added. The next morning was very sunny and bright. “Good morning, grouchy” Misery whispered nudging her brothers shoulder. Grouchy rolled over and looked at his sister. “I HATE waking up” He said letting a small smile appear on his face. “I know you do” Misery said sarcastically.
Later on in Chefettes diner is packed. Vanity Walks in to see a lovely smurfette with long curly hair stepping off the stage, As someone else goes onto the stage. “Look at her” vanity gasps. “Who?” Hefty questions, being the closest. “her” Vanity answers pointing at the smurfette with the curly hair. “I guess she’s kinda pretty” Hefty comments. “She’s more than just kinda pretty” Vanity swoons.
“Glam, you were great!” cooed a red-headed smurfette. “thankyou” replied Glam. She looks around the diner. “Who is he?” She questions pointing at a smurf with a flower pinned to his hat. “He is cute you should go talk to him!” Squealed the red-headed smurfette. “Scarlette that’s what you said about my last three husbands!” Glam giggled. “But you have to at least go talk to him, he could be the one!” Scarlette whispered. “what makes you think I will ever find the one” Glam argued. “Buts he’s not from smurftopia, he’s probably different than other smurfs!” Scarlette decided. “I’m at the beginning of my third divorce I don’t need to go looking for a fourth one” Glam explained. “Glamourette! Go for a another one you can take it, girlie!” Scarlette cheered. Pushing Glamourette towards the smurf.
Misery see’s a smurf sitting on a mushroom. When she gets closer she notices he is distraught. “Whats the matter?” she questions the crying smurf. “O-Ohhh I made hefty upset” He whines. “That’s a stupid reason to cry you don’t have real issues in your life do you?” she questions. “But verything is so awful” He sobs. “What that’s not nearly as bad as, smurficide or getting beaten, and having verbally abusive parents, or getting your heart broken so many times!” Misery growls. The weeping smurfs just crys harder. “You don’t got it half as bad as I do, I’ve been lied to all my life, I had to face my parents without my brother to help me! All of my friends are dead and the ones that aren’t don’t seem to like me anymore!” Misery adds starting to shout. “please stop yelling at me” the smurf wails. “that must be so awful! Ohhh I feel so bad for you!” He cries throwing his arms around round her. “SMURF! Get off me you creeper! If you wanted a hug you could have just asked me first!” She screeched.
“Ohh I’m so sorry” He weeps. “C-can I have a hug?” He asks. “Okie” Misery agrees, leaning in for the hug. She can feel her blue face turning pink. “whats your name?” she asks “W-weepy” He answers. “Maybe we can be friends” she suggests. “Really?” He says wiping away a tear letting a slow smile appear across his face. Misery nods, also allowing herself to smile.
its not done yet but soon ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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posted 07-26-2009 09:37 AM
Very sweet! Misery may have found someone to make her display her tender side and Weepy by his turn shall get more secure and less prone to cry for any silly reason. Nice chapter, Sammy! ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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