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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 04-22-2012 12:25 PM
I will post poems i made here.
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 04-22-2012 12:26 PM
I just made i poem about smurfette.
here it is:
Smurfette has flowing gold hair. She is sweet and really quite fair. She makes a good friend, because she's sweet like smurfy cakes. Everybody loves Smurfette cause she's one of the smurfiest smurfs i ever met!
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 04-24-2012 08:22 AM
Love is sweet as honey Friendship is as fragile as a rose Happiness it always shows Magic it glows inside you!
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 04-24-2012 08:23 AM
I need fresh air, the wind blowing in my hair! The sunlight glowing upon my face!! Outside could never be replaced. The sky above me, so i can look up to see the birds flying gracefully. Oh how i love nature and its beautiful ways.
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 04-24-2012 08:42 AM
I've never been that into poetry, but I loved those poems Greedette! ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 04-24-2012 10:43 AM
your poems are absosmurfly beautiful Greedette especially that last one i agree with that completely :-)
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 06:35 AM
Thanks Nurturer and Jokie!
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 06:49 AM
Here's another one
Love shows Happiness grows. You make me smile, you make life worth while. Maybe that's why your a good friend. Who'll stick with me till the end.
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 01:09 PM
that's very beautiful :-)
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 05-02-2012 03:01 PM
I agree! I was wondering Greedette, since I'm a song writer, I may be able to take a few of your poems and make it the chorus of a song or something. It's okay if you don't wanna do it though.
-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 03:19 PM
that's a smurftastic idea!!! :-D
-------------------- we're all someone's little fangirl.
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 05-02-2012 03:35 PM
quote: Originally posted by Greedette: I just made i poem about smurfette.
here it is:
Smurfette has flowing gold hair. She is sweet and really quite fair. She makes a good friend, because she's sweet like smurfy cakes. Everybody loves Smurfette cause she's one of the smurfiest smurfs i ever met!
I was wondering if this poem is about Smurfette from the smurf village, or Smurfette the BB member.
-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 03:41 PM
The poem is about both.
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 05-02-2012 03:42 PM
Cool! ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 03:44 PM
quote: Originally posted by Jokie Smurf: I agree! I was wondering Greedette, since I'm a song writer, I may be able to take a few of your poems and make it the chorus of a song or something. It's okay if you don't wanna do it though.
Sure Chloette but please give me credit. ![[Smurfette]](graemlins/smurfette.gif)
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 05-02-2012 03:49 PM
Okay, I can do that! ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
-------------------- When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Shy Smurfette
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posted 05-02-2012 07:46 PM
Awesome poems!
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Smurfy1For2
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posted 05-03-2012 04:06 AM
GREAT WORK Greedette!!
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 05-03-2012 06:59 AM
Thanks Shy Smurfette and Smurfy1For2
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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