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Topic: "Peewit And Sassette" - possible FanFic, hopefully complete
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Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 01-05-2012 02:07 PM
Hey guys, I was having some imagine one day and it is going to be a fan fiction of Peewit and an older-aged (close to Peewit's age, which is unknown) cloned version of Sassette transformed to human form just like Johan and Peewit (not the original kindergardener smurfling version). It's gonna be a love story, and G-rated more importantly, because the smurf forum is a forum for family, kids and any age! The off-topic forum is PG.
Anyways, any ideas for Peewit's age? I was thinking he can be 13 by his looks and sounds on The Magic Flute.
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Jokie Smurf
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posted 01-05-2012 02:09 PM
I think 13 is a smurfy age for Peewit.
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posted 01-05-2012 02:13 PM
Thanks, and Johan could be a little older as he looks six foot something compared to Peewit.
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Now, I will practice writing Chapter 1 after I finish pre-planning the story, then I will take all notes from Chapter 1 and make the chapter with proper English sentences and decent paragraph structures.
The process of the pre-planning may as well take a few days and each chapter might take 2 days.
When the fanfic is done, possibly on February...I will start an art showcase thread of the story.
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 01-05-2012 03:56 PM
very smurfy idea, Brainy Smurf Archives. i love it :-)
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posted 01-11-2012 01:25 PM
CHAPTER 1
Once upon a time in the Smurf Village, there lived many happy little blue people called Smurfs. Every day they would always play, work, help out Papa Smurf, and even go to their little mushroom houses. While the other smurfs work, the four little smurfs called Smurflings would be at school learning lessons with all the other smurflings, yet also having fun. There were 3 male smurflings by the name of Slouchy, Snappy and Nat. Slouchy is a very lazy, tired and confused little smurfling. Snappy appears to be more up to things, but is very agressive, angry and exciteable. Nat is much more polite than the other two, very calm and very nice. He is also obsessed with nature such as plants and animals. Just like there was only one female smurf by the name of Smurfette, there was also a female smurfling by the name of Sassette Smurfling. Sassette is also very nice, calm and also very funny but sometimes she gets very excited and likes to tickle the other smurfs just for the fun of it. She also exclaims stuff like "bouncing bullfrogs" when she is surprised, like all the time before she says a sentence.
At class today, Snappy was bothering all the other smurflings by yelling out stuff when the teacher was talking. The teacher's name was Mr. Smurf, and he taught in a very polite manner.
"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT???" Snappy yelled.
"Shut up." Slouchy said in a rather deep voice.
"BLAH BLAH BLAH SLOUCHY, YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING!" Snappy yelled.
"Bouncing bullfrogs, won't you stop already?" Sassette said, frustratingly.
"Yeah, we are all here to learn. Not scream random stuff all the time you know." Nat said.
"He's absolutely right..." Slouchy said, and then fell asleep.
Once Slouchy has passed out during class, all the other Smurflings were jealous and gave him a nasty look. Mr. Smurf was frustrated that he felt like he had to wait all day.
"Do I have to wait all day?" he said for once.
"I don't know what to say about this." Confused Smurfling said.
"THEN DON'T SAY ANYTHING!" Snappy exclaimed, and Confused got scared and ran away.
"What a horrible day, thanks to you Slouchy and Snappy." Sassette said, and then she smiled.
"Okay, why are you smiling if you are serious?" Nat looked at Sassette and said.
"Shhhh!" Sassette exclaimed, then she snuck out to tickle Slouchy Smurfling. All the other smurflings were hysterically laughing that they could draw pictures about.
"Shhh...be quiet, I'm recording this." Recorder Smurfling said.
"Okay, can I do the narration?" Actor Smurfling asked.
"NO!" Recorder Smurfling exclaimed!
"This is funny!" Artist Smurfling exclaimed, then drew a picture.
Mr. Smurf was getting so frustrated as he never was before as his occupation as a teacher that steam was coming out of his ears, his face was turning red with the expression of a Purple Smurf, and he couldn't help but glare at the little smurflings in that manner! The commotion continued, and Mr. Smurf wanted to say something, but he didn't want the other smurflings to fear him.
Meanwhile at Johan and Peewit's castle, Peewit was rehearsing for his mandolin concert in the other room out loud with his off-key singing being heard through an over-amplified microphone. Johan felt very annoyed and he had to plug his ears, so then he walked to Peewit's room and knocked on the door. Peewit had stopped at the middle of a song once he heard Johan's knock and he got so angry that he shouted at Johan.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?! I'M TRYING TO REHEARSE!!!!" Peewit exclaimed.
Johan, very surprised by Peewit's screaming said, "Please, can you at least turn down the music your playing? I could hear it from all the way there and it is kind of annoying.
"For goodness sake, I want to practice for my mandolin concert!" Peewit said, very frustrated.
"I know you can, but turn it down!" Johan said.
"Oh my goodness." Peewit snuck out of the castle through the window with his mandolin and microphone, climbed down and stormed away.
"Peewit! Where are you going?!" Johan said, but Peewit could not hear him. "Peewit!!! Peewit? Peewit come back!" Johan tried to run after Peewit, but Peewit was already far away.
At Mr. Smurf's classroom, Mr. Smurf decided to walk out and plan and interview with Papa Smurf at his mushroom house. The other smurflings then decided to throw things at Slouchy as he was still sleeping. However, Slouchy has woken up very angrily, and agitatingly.
"Why are you doing this?! I want to get some rest!" Slouchy was very angry his face was also turning red.
"BECAUSE YOU ARE SLEEPING DURING CLASS AND WE WERE JEALOUS!" Snappy shouted, and then laughed.
"Okay, but guys can you please stop tickling me?" Slouchy said.
"No!" Sassette said, and tickled.
Slouchy was almost as upset as Mr. Smurf, that he could not control it. At Papa Smurf's house, Mr. Smurf wanted to explain what was going on at class today.
Mr. Smurf, panicked and explained, "Papa Smurf, you are not going to believe what the smurflings were-"
"Okay, okay, calm down Mr. Smurf and clearly tell me what was going on please." Papa Smurf interrupted to calm Mr. Smurf down.
"Okay, at first Snappy Smurfling was exclaiming random things while I was teaching spelling lessons that it has annoyed all the other smurflings. Then Slouchy Smurfling passed out during my class which made the situation worse, but the worst of all Sassette Smurfling planned everybody to physically bother Slouchy Smurfling just to make him wake up very upset like there was no tomorrow." Mr. Smurf explained.
"Well they are just smurflings, smurflings will be smurflings and then they will grow up to be smurfs like us." Papa Smurf replied.
"But they have never been this chaotic before!!!" Mr. Smurf exclaimed.
"Oh, they were extreme?" Papa Smurf asked.
"Yeah, didn't you listen to the conversation?" Mr. Smurf asked.
"I did, but. Wait, they were bothering Slouchy Smurfling like there was no tomorrow and it was started by *gulp* Sassette?! Oh my goodness, I thought Sassette was a sweet and adorable little smurfling. Well yes she could be that way sometimes but she never started anything major before." Papa Smurf replied in a somewhat surprised manner.
"I know right? They have pushed my buttons today." Mr. Smurf agreed.
"It's mainly Snappy's fault for interrupting." Papa Smurf then claimed.
"How? Sassette turned it into a way different story, and an atrocious one." Mr. Smurf asked.
"It could be that bad behaviour on somebody could make them stressed and stress usually causes the smurf affected to get the negative behavior." Papa Smurf said.
"I guess your right, but they still should not do that." Mr. Smurf agreed.
"Yeah, pretty much. All smurflings of mine involved should get a bit of a time-out or a punishment." Papa Smurf said. "Well, definitely not a violent one, just a priviledge taken away."
"Okay." Mr. Smurf said. "Anyways, see you later."
Mr. Smurf ended the interview and left in a very calm manner back to class, however he tripped on a rock he has never tripped on before. It was rather big rock almost about his size, and it looked like it could have been a prank played by the smurflings because it had scribbles and doodles done on marker.
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posted 01-11-2012 01:33 PM
I'm already in process of Chapter 2 and it's coming along decently. It will probably be posted tomorrow more likely. Maybe today if I have enough time, and that is if i have enough time.
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posted 01-11-2012 06:39 PM
very smurfy beginning, Brainy Smurf Archives :-)
the smurflings in school was a very smurfy idea indeed.
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posted 01-12-2012 04:32 PM
CHAPTER 2
After 10 minutes, Peewit has finally arrived at the Smurf Village. At the Smurf Village, Peewit was looking around to see if there was anything interesting going on with the smurfs, or any certain place he wants to check out. Johan has lost Peewit after a very tough chase so he decided to return home and have a talk with the King. Johan was very worried, but he was really tired too as he is breathing a little heavily and feels low energy.
"Hello good sir, I have something to tell you." Johan said. "I have lost Peewit."
"Why did you do that?" The King asked.
"Well, Peewit was rehearsing for his mandolin concert and he was a little too loud. I told him to quiet down, but he completely refused to and yelled at me! I tried cooling him down but he snuck out and ran away! I had to chase him but I apparently wasn't so fast enough, and I lost him." Johan replied.
"My my, Peewit hasn't been that upset before!" The King commented.
"Yeah, it's very shocking to see. Maybe it is my fault." Johan said.
"Not really, Peewit over reacts a lot." The King said. "Anyways, you look very tired after the chasing. You should probably get some rest before we go find Peewit."
"Okay, but thanks for your understanding." Johan replied. "On second thought, I actually do think I should get rest."
Johan had left in a respectful manner to his bedroom, pulled out his sheets and got on the bed. He fell asleep shortly in a very peaceful manner, with no intrusions or interruptions.
Peewit looked around and saw that the smurflings had a school. He looked surprised because he never knew the Smurf Village ever had a school in general, so he decided to pop in and check it out. He simply opened the door and heard screaming.
"Wow! A wild party at school!" Peewit exclaimed with excitement, and positive energy. Then, he rushed to the noisy class and saw smurflings rough playing with each other. He looked kind of shocked as he didn't know what to do. He was thinking that he wanted to cue in, but he thought he was too big and he did not want to destroy any of the other little smurflings by accident.
"Hey, it's a big kid standing here in confusion!" Actor Smurfling exclaimed.
"Why does he have such a funny looking face?" Recorder Smurfling asked.
"I dunno, maybe he is a mascot of some sort!" Actor Smurfling replied, and he laughed.
Peewit glared at the smurflings in a stressful manner.
"Okay guys I don't think you should make him angry, he might destroy us." Smarty Smurfling said.
"Right and I'm not evil by the way, just please don't make fun of me. You are such adorable smurflings and you know it." Peewit said calmly.
All of the other smurflings looked at him in a surprised manner. Peewit has noticed the 4 smurflings he had seen before. Slouchy, Snappy, Nat and Sassette. Peewit has always loved talking to Sassette for quite a while, and has been entertained by her stories, sense of humour and even the conversations itself. He then smiled and wanted to say something.
"I think that is Peewit!" Nat exclaimed.
"Yes! It is, how are you doing?" Peewit smiled and said.
"Fair." Nat said.
"I'M SO GOOD I CAN SCREAM!" Snappy exclaimed.
"Can you please give me some rest? I had a rough day." Slouchy asked.
"Slouchy, I'll have you on the other room so you can rest." Peewit said in a friendly as he picked up Slouchy and gently placed him on a quiet room. He provided Slouchy with a pillow and a blanket and said goodnight. Slouchy then started his decent sleep as Peewit returned to all the other smurflings.
"Anyways, I'm back and I am glad you are doing good. How about you Sassette? I haven't seen you in so long!" Peewit said.
"Very good!" Sassette exclaimed.
"Alright, let's have a chat then!" Peewit said. "You can sit with me on your teacher's desk."
Sassette came to Peewit and they started having a conversation about today. The other smurflings decided to have an interview with each other and play some of the games that were provided in the classroom.
"What were you guys doing today out of curiosity?" Peewit asked Sassette.
"Snappy was being very annoying by screaming his lungs out random comments, and Slouchy was sleeping when the teacher was talking and that really made Mr. Smurf mad. I decided to start a bothering war on Slouchy by starting off with tickling him! It has probably became the biggest event to ever happen in this class!" Sassette replied.
"You bother Slouchy a lot?" Peewit asked.
"Not all the time, but I do it quite a bit!" Sassette replied.
"Okay, well my day was not so good. I was rehearsing for a mandolin concert but Johan told me to stop and I tried telling him I have to so I stormed out of my castle and came to you guys!" Peewit said.
"I would love to hear your mandolin concert, when is it?" Sassette asked in excitement.
"It will be performed exactly 2 weeks later." Peewit replied.
"Nice, are you selling the tickets right now?" Sassette asked?
"We won't be selling tickets because it is a free concert!" Peewit replied proudly.
"Bouncing bullfrogs, this is going to be excellent!" Sassette said. "I can't wait to hear your performance!"
"You can for a little time, but I am glad you are looking forward to it." Peewit said.
"You know what I wish for sometimes?" Sassette said. "I know I may be very young for this, but I kind of wanted a smurfling to live with me and have a house together."
"I wish the same thing too and I am several years older than you. I am a bit young too but I am 13." Peewit said.
"Hey we have something in common." Sassette commented, then exclaimed. "Hey I got something that would be cool!"
"What?" Peewit asked in positive shock.
"We could hack into one of Papa Smurf's spells and become the same age as each other." Sassette whispered into Peewit's ears. "However seeing as I am way much young to fall in love at that time, I think I should become about your age."
"Hey!!! That sounds like a great idea!" Peewit exclaimed quietly.
"Follow me!" Sassette said, then waved to the other smurflings. "Have a nice day."
All the other smurflings waved goodbye as Peewit took Sassette close to where Papa Smurf's place is.
"Is Papa Smurf there?" Sassette asked.
Peewit peaks through the window of Papa Smurf's house and sees that he is not here. He then looked on the other side and saw Papa Smurf with all the other smurfs having an unknown trip of some sort. "He is not there, come with me!"
Sassette said, "Okay!"
At Papa Smurf's house, Peewit placed Sassette on a chair, and he has decided to look through Papa Smurf's science and spell books. He scanned through all the books row by row, and then has found "How To Smurf A Smurf Into A Different Age". He then said, "This must be the correct one!" Peewit then looked through the pages of the book, found the actual step-by-step method written in the book and he has read through it. "Aha! That's it!" He pointed to the method and started performing it. He made a recipe comprised of 4 different certain potions and has mixed the liquids on a cup. He then poured a glass to Sassette at the correct amount and said, "Here you go, drink it and you will change to a different age!"
"Bouncing bullfrogs, this is going to be good!" Sassette exclaimed, then she gulped the whole glass. She started changing colours and started to grow a little bit. When the process was done, she did not look like a smurfling anymore, she looked more like a smurf instead. She walked to the closest mirror she saw and looked at herself. "My, I look even more smurfier than my past self!"
Peewit said, "You sure do alright!"
"Thank you so much!" said Sassette.
Peewit asked, "No problem, how old are you now?"
"Fourteen." Sassette replied.
Peewit said, "Just right for me!"
"Should we use this recipe on Slouchy, Snappy and Nat? They are my closest smurfling friends and I do not want to leave them behind!" Sassette asked.
"Alright! Fair enough!" Peewit replied, then took Sassette with him and put her in his pocket as he was about to walk back to the smurflings' classroom. He then noticed the smurflings were leaving school and he has found Snappy and Nat.
"Hey guys, want to come with me? You both seemed like you had a very good day!" Peewit has invited the two smurflings.
"Sure!" both Snappy and Nat replied.
"Okay, let's wait for-" Peewit paused, and he noticed Slouchy coming back slowly from his nap.
"I got the perfect rest I needed, thank you!" Slouchy said calmly.
"No problem, want to come with me, Snappy and Nat? We are going to have some total fun here!" Peewit said excitingly as he ran with the 3 smurflings and Sassette Smurf. He then went with them to Papa Smurf's house. At Papa Smurf's house, Peewit took Sassette out of his pocket and said to the other 3 smurflings, "Do you notice the different between Sassette now?"
"She grew apparently." Slouchy said.
"HOW DID YOU DO SUCH A THING?" Snappy exclaimed.
"I always dreamed of becoming a smurf, I want all my other smurfling friends to learn what is right and wrong and perfectly live that way!" Nat stated.
"DISRESPECTFUL!!" Snappy exclaimed.
"Please, no more of this." Nat said.
"Fine." Snappy groaned.
"Sit on those chairs my little smurflings." Peewit said as they pointed at the 3 seats. They all took their seats and watched Peewit pour 3 glasses of his recipe. He passed the glasses to Slouchy, Snappy and Nat. "Here you go guys, drink it and you will now become SMURFS!"
"Alright!" the Smurflings exclaimed and then gave each other cheers. They then drank the recipe and then they started flashing colours and growing. When the process was done, they had now became smurfs!
"Look at me, I look like Lazy Smurf's twin brother!" Slouchy said.
"Oh my goodness I feel so different!" Snappy exclaimed.
"I'm even more smurfier than before! So Smurfy that I could look at the butterflies every day!" Nat said very cheerfully.
"Very well my little grown smurfs, I think we should all get out of Papa Smurf's laboratory before he catches us. We want to surprise him instead of being punished for sneaking!" Peewit said and directed them out of the laboratory. He then got out of the laboratory and then made the deal to come back to the smurf village tomorrow. "Hey guys it was fun being with you! But I have to go as I need to make an apology to my friend Johan for running away from him. Anyways, I will come back tomorrow! Good bye smurfs, have a great day and stay smurfy!" Peewit said, and ran off!
"Bye!" Slouchy, Snappy and Nat exclaimed!
"Thanks for turning me into a smurf!" Sassette said.
Then all the 4 grown smurfs decided to hang around as Papa Smurf and the other smurfs are gone away on an unknown trip. They ran around, had races and snacked a bit.
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posted 01-12-2012 04:49 PM
great archive
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posted 01-12-2012 05:44 PM
Thank you! Chapter 3 will start being written soon!
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posted 01-15-2012 02:14 PM
i absolutely love this story!!
i hated how natural smurf became a smufling but now his a real SMURF horray!!!!
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posted 01-16-2012 11:01 PM
very smurfy, Brainy Smurf Archives. i wonder how Papa Smurf will take it.
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posted 03-20-2012 07:18 PM
That story is great Archive!
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posted 03-23-2012 02:27 AM
LOL, by the way, chapter 3 is almost done...I'll get that ready tonight.
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posted 03-24-2012 06:16 AM
I can't wait!
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posted 03-25-2012 12:34 AM
FINALLY AFTER A WHILE, CHAPTER 3 HAS ARRIVED!!!
Now the the four smurflings has been transformed into smurfs, Papa Smurf and all of his other smurfs are still at their trip, they are currently at a museum of insects in their ant cages.
"WHAT IS THIS DISGUSTING CREATURE?!" Grouchy exclaimed as he pointed with a death stare to an adventurous ant!
"Grouchy, calm down for goodness sakes, will ya?!" Brainy said.
"It's just an ant!" Smurfette said!
"I HATE ANTS!" Grouchy exclaimed!
Clumsy ran to Grouchy to try and calm him down, but all of a sudden..he tripped on Grouchy's foot and fell on the ants' cage.
"Clumsy, what are you doing?! Did you have to be in Grouchy's ally too?!" Hefty exclaimed.
As soon as Clumsy kept falling, nearly everything in this insect museum has been destroyed.
"THANKS A LOT CLUMSY, YOU MADE MY FEELINGS WORSE!!!" Grouchy exclaimed, pinched Clumsy's nose and ran off.
"You won't get away with this next time!!" Hefty said to Grouchy.
Then everyone looked at Clumsy with a questioning look.
"I never meant for all this to happen!" Clumsy said, and then weeped.
"You nearly blew up everything." Papa Smurf explained. "You tripped on Grouchy like you were..."
"But I wanted to tell Grouchy to calm down!" Clumsy interrupted. "I was kind of far, and I didn't want Grouchy to yell so I ran and then by accident without noticing, I tripped on him and I suddenly fell on everything that was close to me. Then all the other things around them collided!"
"I could understand, but it appears you don't have much experience in order to calm people down. I know that not just you, but all of us wanted Grouchy to calm down...but you should really be careful next time okay?" Papa Smurf said and then directed to all the smurfs, "Guys, I mean...smurfs, I think we should post-pone this trip. It was originally Grouchy's fault, but he could be having a bad day." Then all the other smurfs gave a big awwwwww....
"What about Grouchy, Papa Smurf?" Smurfette questioned. Then everyone agreed.
"Guess we will all have to find out where he is." Papa Smurf replied. However, only a few of the smurfs agreed with the plan and the others disagreed, especially when Poet said, "Can't some of us go home while some of the others find him? We don't want to be left in anxiety, unless we are really tough enough to go 3 hours finding him in replacement of a trip."
"I guess you are right!" Papa Smurf said. "I need 3 volunteers to go with me, who is up to it? Clumsy, I think you should go home with the others...we don't want any more problems okay?" Clumsy nodded, and Smurfette, Brainy and Hefty chose to volunteer with Papa Smurf on finding Grouchy Smurf.
Meanwhile, Grouchy Smurf has already been the first smurf to head home. He approached the Smurf Village with a really fast and aggressive pace. Once he stopped at the Smurf Village, he noticed that the 4 smurflings had turned into smurfs, but he only thought he was thinking things and said, "Smurflings into smurfs?! Naw, maybe I'm just seeing things badly...I need to get rest to calm myself down or else I end up as bad as Gargamel! I had many rough moments!" So, Grouchy went to his bed for a nap to satisfy himself. As the hours has passed, Grouchy woke up and suddenly felt slightly better and said... "Ah, what a dream...but I hate the past so mess that! I got to meet with the other smurfs and apologize!" So Grouchy ran off to find the other smurfs. Nat and Sassette noticed Grouchy running back and forth at the time and Sassette said to Slouchy and Snappy, "Did any of you see that?"
Snappy said, "I heard footsteps!"
Slouchy said, "I don't know and I don't care."
Snappy yelled, "SHUT UP! THERE COULD BE UNKNOWN EVIDENCE!"
Sassette then calmed the two down and said, "Bouncing bullfrogs! Can you please stop arguing? You're all grown up now like me and you are still fighting! I noticed that Grouchy used to be the only one in the smurf village, then he suddenly left!"
Slouchy and Snappy said in shock, "Why so?!"
Nat replied, "He could have retreated something so early, or whatever Papa Smurf planned for the other smurfs or whatever..."
Sassette said, "There's one clue! He is really stressed!"
Snappy said, "He's always stressed!"
Sassette said, "He does have a characteristic, but I think you meant more stressed than ever. Anyways, I guess we'll find out later." Then all the other smurfs except Papa, Smurfette, Brainy and Hefty came back to the smurf village. Grouchy came as the earliest again once he noticed the smurfs were coming back.
"Boy is Grouchy very fast paced today?" Slouchy asked.
"Yep." Sassette replied.
"SMURFS!!! SMURFS!!! Come down outside of your houses to the Smurf Village for a special assembly." Grouchy yelled through a microphone.
"What in the jumping jupiters was that?" Sassette asked. "Could be important, let's go!" Sassette and the other three smurfs came to the assembly.
At the assembly, Grouchy was clearing his throat...and then he said this important message, "I really want to tell you that I probably haven't been having a good day that time at the trip, something must have been going on in my life that is really tough indeed. Sometimes when a rough moment and something that I never really liked mix, it creates chaos for me. I should have explained my rough moments to you all, do you want to know them now?"
Handy exclaimed, "Tell us, we want to know why all this came through, please!"
Grouchy replied, "Okay Handy, thank you for your feedback. I hate not accepting any feedbacks. Now for the facts... There has been too much work for me and too much of being left out of fun. It was said by many smurfs that it was to help control my stress, but then again everyone has it's characteristics. I don't want to sound tough, but I really don't get why I have to be the only one that has to get the discipline and good lessons in here 3 times every week. Shouldn't everyone of very sensitive characteristics get some too if I need some?! In fact, if not any smurfs have this...then it's no point in having me in those not-so-fun sessions! Now all of you smurfs should think about how you would feel if one of you were the only one. I would probably get more criticism if Papa Smurf was there...but I bet a lot of you are still smart enough."
Everyone listened, and expected more to be said as his powerful words effected their feelings. Clumsy even asked, "Grouchy, can I please come on stage?"
"May I ask why?" Grouchy replied.
"Because I also have an important speech to give, it's just going to be quick!" Clumsy said.
Grouchy then said rather invitingly, "Okay, come off your seat and stand beside me on stage Clumsy." Clumsy then walked out of his seat, and then ran to the stage. Grouchy then said through the microphone, "Clumsy is going to give his words..in which I think are also an apology, or it could be just a feedback." Clumsy nodded and received the microphone from Grouchy, "Not only Grouchy is sorry and responsible for this, but I am probably more sorry than Grouchy for accidentally destroying the museum! My official intention was basically to calm Grouchy Smurf down from all this anxiety over a little ant, but then as soon as I came and spit out the words...I somehow, but I didn't want to..yet I did trip, and everything fell down and BAM! everything was gone. I think I need some disciplinary sessions too, you probably forgot about me just two minutes after it happened." Then he felt he was going to weep. "I never meant for this all to happen!!!" Then he all of a sudden started to wail.
Grouchy patted Clumsy on the back and said, "Now, now, you are NOT the only one that makes those mistakes, I have done something like that too and it was probably as bad as your incident. My, did I HATE myself in the past! I'll kill my pasts, I was so stupid at those times!" Handy walked off his seat and came up on stage, took the microphone and said. "But I think you actually had some great moments in the past too Grouchy, don't kill off you past...because sometimes even if it is not so good, the past is what inspires the present and the future after all!"
Grouchy thought and said, "I guess your right, we hate mistakes, but we have to live with it." Handy agreed, and Clumsy calmed down.
Grouchy said, "Thank you all for listening to the three of us!" Then Grouchy, Clumsy and Handy bowed and waved.
"My my, those strong words and apologies with details and their experiences changed my thoughts around into a more understanding position!" Painter said in a calm manner, "I should tell Papa, Smurfette and the 2 others when they come back from their search. It's a shame that it would be a few more hours as usually home would be the last place to search for unfortunately!"
Dreamy agreed and said, "Yeah, I feel like informing them now, but a smurf's gotta wait and not turn back!" Lazy felt more awake and said, "I..will...obey those words."
Sassette then told Nat, Slouchy and Snappy, "Oh.. my.. that made me learn a lot more about life! I know how feelings should be understood, how a person should express their feelings before something bad could happen, and how proper lessons, teaching and calming should be equal to every smurf and their characteristics!"
Snappy replied, "I should from now on explain why I stress when you guys don't know what it could be."
Nat then said, "I think this could have been why Grouchy was fast pacing at the village and then left, luckily he cooled down a bit. They had their crying fits, but I have mine too."
Then all the 4 smurfs got prepared to see the other smurfs to show them their new physical looks.
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Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 03-25-2012 07:44 AM
What do you think of my third chapter?
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posted 03-25-2012 08:04 AM
Three words
It was awsome!
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posted 03-25-2012 10:44 AM
I LOVE CHAPTER 3!! OMSOMS! ARCHIVE, I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE! OH, YAYYAYYAY!
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Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 03-25-2012 01:17 PM
thank you so much!!!!! Now to start off chapter 4..and finish it by the middle of this week.
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posted 03-25-2012 07:20 PM
Yay, as you can tell, I'm very exited!
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posted 03-26-2012 01:24 PM
oh my...this has been very exciting! and i can't wait until the others see the smurflings' new looks! :-)
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