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Topic: My Fanfiction: The Smurfs: Legend of the Lost Smurfette
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Speedysmurfling
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posted 11-12-2020 07:26 AM
Wow! This is pretty good! Better then anything I have wrote, that’s for sure.
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Posts: 135 | From: Verona, Wisconsin | Registered: Oct 2020
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Book writer smurf
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posted 12-09-2020 10:36 AM
Wow! This IS pretty good! Speedy, I would like to see what YOU wrote!
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Hey my first book is on my homepage FYI it’s not finished!
Posts: 14 | From: Verona, Wisconsin | Registered: Dec 2020
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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posted 10-01-2021 06:34 AM
Chapter Forty-Five: The Whole Story of the Lost Smurfette (Part One)
Papa Smurf, along with Smurfette, Grouchy and Brainy had been busy at work helping Ariel and Alistor prepare a new portkey to leave for London when Smurfette struck up a conversation with him and Ariel.
"Is it true that today is your smurfday, Ariel?" Smurfette asked cheerily.
"Yeah, I guess," Ariel replied. "I'm a hundred and ninety today."
"Wow!" Smurfette half-giggled pleasantly surprised about something. "Today's Clumsy's smurfday, too!" She exclaimed with a big smile. "And I think he's also a hundred and ninety today... It's like you're twins or smurfthing."
Papa Smurf sighed and looked up to see Alistor watching the conversation, who gave him a look, as if he were saying "go on, tell them."
At the same moment, as if he knew he was being spoken of, Clumsy walked up behind them.
"Hey, Smurfs," he said in a slightly shy sort of tone. "Anything I can help with?"
Ariel looked over to him. "Hi, Clumsy," she responded, "Smurfette was just telling me how cool it is that we both have a birthday today."
Alistor intensified his expression towards Papa Smurf, who finally gave in with a sigh and addressed the whole group of Smurfs.
"Everysmurfy, could I please have you all gather together?" He called out. Every Smurf stopped what they were doing and formed in a circle around Papa Smurf.
"In celebration of the birthdays of Clumsy and Ariel," this statement was greeted with surprised cheering, to which Papa simply made a calming gesture with both hands. He continued, "I believe it is finally time I told you the whole story of the Lost Smurfette..."
To this, there was many whispered questions and confused faces which soon silenced when Papa cleared his throat and began to unravel the full, true tale of two worlds colliding and the two children that resulted from it.
"It all started some years before many of you were born... Including Ariel and Clumsy..."
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![[Smile]](smile.gif) Stick close for Part Two, coming soon to a forum near you!
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Posts: 1301 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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posted 01-17-2022 08:33 PM
Chapter Forty-five: The Whole Story of the Lost Smurfette
Papa Smurf sighed deeply as he prepared himself to tell this tale. Finally, he began, "A few hundred years ago, when I was still a young potato farming Smurf by the name of Russett, I met the then Princess Mersandra. She was being smurf-napped by a pair of evil sorcerers on the whim that they would be able to convince her kingdom that she had been taken by us Smurfs, thus resulting in a war."
Confused gasps could be heard throughout the Winslows' apartment.
Brainy Smurf spoke up with a question, "Papa Smurf, I don't understand, why did the sorcerers want to start a war?"
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The answer, when we return with the next part of this story
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Posts: 1301 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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posted 04-23-2022 09:28 PM
Chapter Forty Five: The Whole Story of the Lost Smurfette
Papa Smurf shook his head, "Their motives were... Unclear, to smurf the least... Whatever their plans were, Mersandra and I stopped them. We were not prepared for the battle that ensued afterwards, however.
"Fairies and Smurfs fell to each other's hand in droves," The old Smurf's voice began to crack, "So many Smurfs were forced to flee our village... The Fairy King's army was too strong.
"Mersandra finally managed to get her father to sign a treaty with what was left of our village... A law was passed by the Fairy King that Smurfs and Fairies were not to be seen together... It was a whole thirty years before I saw her again..."
Everyone in the room was on the edge of their seats.
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I may not always have the answer, but when I do, I stick with it!
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Posts: 1301 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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posted 09-11-2023 06:52 PM
Chapter Forty -Five the Whole Story of the Lost Smurfette
Papa's story had Ariel and all the Smurfs' full attention at this point. Even Alistor paused his efforts to prepare for the journey ahead to listen to the old Smurf regale them with the story of his wild one of a kind romantic encounter.
Papa's eyes welled up with tears as he continued, "Back then, there [I]were/[I] female Smurfs in the village but after the war, they had all fled deeper and deeper into the forbidden forest... Married couples of Smurfs set sail searching for safer lands..."
Papa's tears continued as he slowly continued to weave his history into words. "I was left to rebuild the village alone. One day, Storks started bringing newborn Smurfs... Letters pinned to their blankets, from my friends and family. They were in danger and sent their babies to the village for them to be safe..."
A tearful smile glimmered across the old Smurf's face, "Suddenly, Mersandra began visiting again... In secret, of course, those Elderfairies are very strict on what laws stay or go... We got married, with a little help from Mother Nature herself... Some time later, she had twins..."
At this point, Brainy spoke up, "But, Papa Smurf, twins?? You always told us that--"
Papa Smurf continued without acknowledging the interruption at all... "Mersandra had the babies in the palace, and had her loyal nursemaids send them to me in the village via Stork, planning to arrive at the same time as her children. However, the first Stork that was being prepared for the trip, the one that carried Ariel, had a controlling curse over him. Whomever was controlling him had him throw her into the Blue Moon Springs... "
Ariel gasped. Mersandra had never told her how she was born... Much less, that she really was her true mother! Now she only had one question. "Who was the other baby, Papa Smurf?"
Papa Smurf lifted his head as he replied, "Ariel, meet Clumsy... Your twin brother."
Clumsy looks up in shock at the sound of his name.
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Posts: 1301 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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posted 06-29-2025 11:40 AM
Smurfs, greetings!
I hope everyone has had a wonderful month of June full of pride, joy and happiness amidst the political, societal, and personal anxieties that are being faced by countless people worldwide...
It might disappoint you that I have decided to scrap this particular version of my fanfic... As I feel it doesn't line up very well anymore... These were middle-through-high school ramblings and now I'm grown up and I don't live with someone surveiling my phone for extracurricular writing and art...
However... This is not quite the story I have in mind anymore...
My character is still Ariel, but it's time for a makeover... I'll be back soon with details
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I may not always have the answer, but when I do, I stick with it!
My fanfic: http://bluebuddies.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?/topic/1/3803.html
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Posts: 1301 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
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