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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 10-07-2012 10:51 AM
Continuing story from random point starting now
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SPORTETTES POV
I walk into the house and go lay on my bed. It was a really busy day. Another blue moon is today. Another dance it's midday and I'm still exhausted so I decide to take a quick nap before 7 when it starts. So I just fall asleep. My dreams are never good. Never safe. With my life most wouldn't be suprised. They've seen what I have been through. Still there are moments when I push it all aside and think positive. Usually when hefty takes me to this mountain. The flowing stream, the songs birds sing to us, him right next to me. It makes me feel safe and happy though my life is a living nightmare.
I wake up again at 6:24. Unlike last blue moon my dress isn't as simple. It has one strap and is very long. It is blue green and I'm wearing it with white sneakers. I get dressed and put some lip gloss on then change my earrings and braid my hair. The clock says 6:57 and I'm just waiting for hefty. He comes out in a tuxedo.
"Shall we?" Hefty says. I laugh a little.
"Yuparootie," I say as we go. Trying not to fall in the heels, I trip over the dress. Hefty catches me and pulls me up.
"This is probably the nicest you've looked since our wedding last month," hefty says smiling.
"Don't get used to it sweet-cheeks," I say since I think I've been looking a little to nice. Dun dun dun.
As we arrive I'm relieved everyone is there instead of in gargamels clutches but he's dead so whats to worry about? Hefty and I sit at a table with bakette and baker.
"This is the nicest you've..." Bakette starts.
"Already heard that one," I say.
"Told you, sassperila please," baker says smiling as bakette hands him some sassperila.
"Still betting? I don't know when you two will stop." Hefty says smirking. That's some of the night but it seems to never end. Not that I wasn't having fun, I just get really tired. By the end of the night we went home and just immeadeatly fell asleep. At about two there's a knock. "Can you get that?" Hefty says. In reply I snore and kick him. He gets up and answers it there's no one but then there are two loud cries. "Sportette come over here!" He says. I lazily get up and come down stairs.
"Holy smurf..." I say.
To be continued
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Sportette
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posted 10-07-2012 01:37 PM
How is it?
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posted 10-07-2012 02:48 PM
That's really good Sportette!!! Keep it up and I can't wait to see moooreeee!!!
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Sportette
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posted 10-07-2012 06:40 PM
😃 Thanks chapter 2-
SPORTETTE POV
There's a basket at our feet with two baby smurfs inside. They must be twins like me and bakette. I tell hefty to be quiet and I hear another cry and think go figure. Hefty picks up the basket brings it inside. "Got any milk?" He asks me.
"Milk is the only thing I drink so of course we do." I say going to the fridge and get milk. "Now where do I put it?" I say to myself then get two straws. I walk in the room put a straw in each of their mouths and pour milk into the straws.
"That works,but where do they sleep?" Hefty asks me.
"In our room and then eventually the guest room," I say taking the basket upstairs. We both go to bed but the baby's cry again. It stinks.
"Not it!" I say.
"Not it,dang it." Hefty says and gets up. "We don't own diapers," he says.
"Use a paper towel." I say then go back to bed. Whatever happened after that the babies didn't cry for the rest of the night. In the morning we go see pops. The sign on his door says do not disturb under any circumstances. In my mind it says donut disturbance you can have a circus stand but I just yell.
"PAPA SMURF!" I yell and there's an explosion then he comes out. "Oh good your up," I say smiling.
"Does anyone read the sign? Well since I'm out here what do you need?" Papa says brushing himself off.
"There are two babies in this basket," I say.
"Smurfness gracious how?!?!" He exclaims.
"There's this note but its Latin," hefty says handing him it.
"It reads, Dear Hefty and Sportette, Congratulations you get to keep two of my latest creations made of both your DNA. Their your children. Take care of them or I will take them back. Signed your creator." Papa reads clearly. "Be careful, I know sportette isn't the most responsible smurfette but if you mess up they will be taken back or given away or something. Please be careful," he says.
"We will be pops," I say but truly think I will mess up.
50 years later
"Mom, violet made my dolly goth!" Positive cries.
"We'll sorry for being creative," says violet.
"We're gonna play a game, sit down on the couch and watch spongebob okay. Now go do that," I say. I'm pooped its gotten a little easier but violet just started wearing makeup and black junk. I figure shell get over that stuff. When hefty gets home I have to leave. We revolve for work. He just came home. "Good luck," I whisper in his ear and kiss him on the cheek before I go.
First I have to chop fire wood. Then I'm helping smurfette fix her phone and teach her how to use it. Finally I have to go grocery shopping,clothes shopping, and toy shopping. Positive wants a new Barbie doll. I notice all the wood is chopped so I go to smurfettes house.
"For some reason it won't turn on," she says. I press and hold the power button.
"It was off, here's a manual on how to use it." I say handing her it.
"Thanks,wish me luck, I'm gonna need it." She says as I go. Next shopping. Poop.
To be continued
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posted 10-08-2012 12:17 PM
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Now I go to the dollar store. But it's confusing because we pay in smurf sized pennies. One penny is equal to one dollar. "Let's see,milk,fruit punch,fruit snacks,pizza,eggs ,turkey,bread, and animal crackers." I read aloud grabbing said items. Then I go to the toy section. I grab a Barbie, markers, two coloring books and a monster high doll. After I go home and just get stuff off the Internet.
When I come home I put the groceries in the kitchen. "Hefty put the stuff away!" I yell and take the toys upstairs to their room. One half pink and purple and a little blue, other is black and dark blue and really dark purple. They are playing in the middle of the room. Positive is a fairy and Violet is a vampire.
"Hey kids, here's you stuff. Come down by six for dinner it's four thirty so an hour and a half." I say then add," take your holloween costumes off by the way," then go downstairs. It's hard being a mom. I grab the computer and go on ebay. Then I tap what to get. It's all human stuff so I shrink it. After tapping everything I snap and itall comes out in the perfect sizes. In getting boring. I fall asleep on the couch,when I wake up its six. There's no one upstairs or downstairs but me. Where is everyone I think. The whole village is deserted. Then I see jokey. That's weird.
"Jokey? Where is everyone?" I ask him gently.
"I don't know I can't find anyone but you." He replies. Then he looks right at me. He backs away a little.
"What is it?" I ask curiously.
"Your face,i-it's so pale and thin. It's almost gone." Jokey says.
"Oh no, the triduse,"I say and run to gargies old hovel. Then I peel open the floorboards. "It's gone,some one took it we have to get it back or the world will die off." I say to him.
"Who do you think has it?" Jokey asks.
"I don't know. But he didn't take these seven things. Take one. It'll keep you alive." I say handing him it.
"What will happen if we don't the who's it whats it back?" He says.
"So many questions, and we all die. " I answer. I made it to keep us safe about 200 years ago. I'm almost dead.
To be continued
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posted 10-15-2012 07:17 PM
Next chapter warning extremely super short chapter
I fall to the ground. Appearently someone knocked me out. When I awake, I'm in a dark room. A large one I look in all four corners I see jokey, farmer and scaredy. Oh god, how will I get out. I yell to them and they look at me. As I move foreword so do they when we are all in a group we make a plan to escape. Luckily scaredy seems more secure and confident around me that's why he's constantly looking over my shoulder.
"Anysmurf know how we got in here?" Jokey says nervously. We all shake our heads no. I just open my mouth as I am pulled back to the wall. Then farmer. Then jokey. Then scaredy just backs away so he doesn't feel the pain.
"My back! That hurt." I say trying to escape the shackles. I hear light footsteps. As a human figure appears,only it's smurf sized.
"Hello?" A girls voice echoes. A girl with blonde hair and purple high lights walk in. She smiles,it seems to be directed to me.
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posted 11-03-2012 07:18 AM
Next chapter
She seems fairly firmilier. I know her from somewhere. "Who are you?" I ask her raising an eyebrow. My question bounces off the gray steel walls of the dark room.
"I'm Sierra, Sierra Mist." She replies. Her answer echoes as well. I snicker a little.
"I drink Sierra Mist almost everyday." I say. Sierra sighs at how I made fun of her name. The shackles on my wrists and ankles tighten, nearly ripping me in half. Sierra takes out a key and walks to me through the narrow corridor. Using the key she unlocks me. Then the others. Afterwards she tells me about whats happening to the other smurfs.
"My sister is trying to destroy all the smurfs. She took the triduse (pronounced tried-use) and is planning on destroying it tonight. The other smurfs are in the similar situation. She separated then in different dimensions groups of four," Sierra tells me. As we are about to leave scaredy pulls me back.
"I c-c-cant go s-sportette!" Scaredy says. I haul him over my shoulder and drag him along. "STRANGER DANGER!!!!!! STRANGER DANGER!!!!!!!!" He yells risisting. I sigh and continue moving. Scaredy kicks me in the eye and I yell at him.
"WHAT THE HELL SCAREDY KNOCK IT OFF AND STOP BEING A JACKA$$!!!!!!!" I yell losing my temper. Scaredy shrinks to the ground. "Sorry, just get moving." I say calming myself. He crawls along with the others. He's a pain in the smurf sometimes. We continue moving until we are in broad daylight. Sierra says we must get to mount smurf to stop her evil sister. Running is the only way we will get up there in time. I begin to run up the steep hill. At first the passageway was alive and healthy, now it's covered in acid dead flowers and trees getting darker and darker by the second. Once we reach the top I see a diamond shaped like a cloud. That is the triduse. I go to the figure holding it and try to reach for it. As soon as I try though a bony hand grabs my arm. I fall unable to gain balance again. I watch as the skeleton figure purposely nearly drops the diamond. He/she taunts me as I simply close my eyes.
CLIFFHANGER
This is a crappy chappie experiencing writers block booo...
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posted 11-07-2012 04:15 PM
Chapter uh um whatever
WARNING THE FOLLOWING CHAPTER MIGHT SHOCK YOU
I open them again and I see somewhat what I wanted to see. There stands all the smurfs. What I don't want to see is the skeleton holding positive and violet by their necks. I gasp and tackle the skeleton. As it falls my daughters both tuck duck and roll somewhere else. I raise my elbow high with my hand clenched. Fairly quick I punch the skeleton in the face. The impact causes the skull to fly off into the volcano. I stand up. Hefty runs over to me. When I look him in eyes he gasps in terror. He places his hand on my cheek. I see my reflection in his teary eyes. My eye is swollen,bruised and bloody. I have a wound on my forehead. The universe goes all wee-Oo-weeo.
I wind up in the regular village in my home. I'm in my bed. Slowly I turn my head seeing hefty looking back at me. There's a loud knock a the door. We both go down stairs and open the door seeing a mad papa smurf.
"Sportette I am disappointed in you," he says. Oh dang he found out. "You have been swearing, hunting, and introducing things rude and disturbing." "Ever since you arrived the village has been a wreck," he continues. After that hefty steps in.
"Really papa smurf? Are you blaming her because she has enemies? Are you blaming her gargamel is a jerk? Are you papa?" He says raising his voice.
"Hefty smurf stay out of this." Papa says
"NO, SPORTETTE IS MY WIFE AND WHAT DID SHE EVER DO?" Hefty says yelling as loud as he can. Many smurfs stop to see what is happening.
"HEFTY SMURF!" Papa says. Hefty is about to say something as papa with his clenched fist swings at him. Hefty falls to the ground unconscious.
"Hefty!" I scream. His lip is bleeding. I stand and stare straight into papas anger filled eyes. "LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE A$$HOLE! YOU WANT ME TO LEAVE FINE ILL LEAVE! NOTHING WILL CHANGE SO ILL LEAVE TO PROVE IT TO YA!WHEN HEFTY WAKES UP ME HIM POSITIVE AND VIOLET ARE LEAVING WELL COME TO SEE OUR FRIENDS BUT WE WILL NEVER EVER SEE YOU AGAIN!" I scream at the top of my lungs. Papa smurf is blaming me for all this. I can't help who the hell I am so smurf that lunatic. He doesn't care about all these new smurfs. He hates me he dispises me. I pick up hefty slam the door and place him back on the bed. I sigh longingly. Goodbye village.
TO BE CONTINUED
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posted 11-07-2012 05:04 PM
How was it
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posted 11-21-2012 02:33 PM
When I come down stairs I see my daughters. Terrified with tears. I go to the kitchen and grab three of my potion bottles. One is green, one pink, and one orange. I mix them all together. Filling a dropper,I go to the roof. Before putting it on the roof I yell,"GOODBYE SMURFS! AND SMURF YOU POPS!" I let the liquid drop on the large mushroom. Instantly it was teleported. Soon the roof was not a mushroom, it was an actual roof from the year 2012. The house was grayish purple. It was no longer a smurf house it was a human one. I jumped off the roof. I am now a human, six foot one, medium length brown-orange hair. Also im was wearing a gray shirt saying 'NO HEELS ON MY TURF.'and jeans. The now human me was around the age 35 being 348 as a smurf. I walked in and saw a two seven year olds. Also a confused man with dark brown hair. Around 35 as well, wearing a very dark green shirt and jeans.
"What's going on?" Hefty asks me.
"He wanted us to leave and we did. I'm Carol your Micheal and you two are Annabelle and Violet" I say answering all their questions. At first they are confused but soon we all realize its for the best.
THE END
End credits
Written by- Kaleigh Ormond
Illustrations by-Kaleigh Ormond
MAJESTIC SONG-
Do you see the world in different colors?
Do you see the world in black and gray?
Alone in your thoughts how many others have stood
Where you stand, where you stand today
I've stood where you stand
But oh, can you
Wait for me now?
Take off this crown
To break all that defiles
Don't you know?
Wait for me now
The end's robbed me now
Wait for me, wait for me
Wait for me, wait for me now
The promise of safe return undelivered
The ocean is wider than I first guessed
When roads disappeared I followed the rivers
But somehow got in over my head
So deep I felt taken
Wait for me now
Take off this crown
To break all that defiles
Don't you know?
Wait for me now
The end's robbed me now
Wait for me, wait for me
Wait for me, wait for me now
A lost dream of what could have been
A house on fire, a tangled web
The key turns to find the locks have changed
In time to hear the back door slam
A sound that to this day I can't forget
The colors drained to black and gray, oh
Wait for me now
Take off this crown
To break all that defiles
Don't you know?
Wait for me now
The end's robbed me now
Wait for me, wait for me
Wait for me, wait for me now
Wait for me- Rise Against
Secret about sportette-
Seems smurf but really sportette is a full blooded human. Searching for adventure a wizard accidentally casts a spell on her causing her to become a smurf. Sportettes true human name was carol turned smurf at age 15.
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posted 11-21-2012 02:34 PM
Tell me how it is
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Vic George The ND Guy
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posted 11-22-2012 12:28 PM
"Dorothy, wake up."
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VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA
"Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
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posted 11-22-2012 02:01 PM
This is perfect.
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Sportette
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posted 11-23-2012 04:42 PM
Vic what do ya mean?
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posted 11-23-2012 05:39 PM
Just the feeling I got from reading the last part of this story, like it was the end of "The Wizard Of Oz".
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VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA
"Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
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Sportette
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posted 11-23-2012 08:27 PM
Oh okay
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