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Topic: A smurf fanfic: The Secret of the Tunnels
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 03-25-2012 03:08 PM
Fine, I write a bunch of stories at once. That way I never get writers block. Well, the first part of this is kinda a cliffhanger but I'm finally finished. (Plus I made a picture for one scene ![[Wink]](wink.gif) Oh, and Tabby, Smurfette, and Animator are included in this story though, apologies to Tabby that she isn't included until later in the story. ![[Frown]](frown.gif) )
Chapter 1
Groundhogzilla’s hole
It was a typical afternoon in the smurf village. Everyone was just leaving Greedy’s house after a smurfy lunch so they could get back to their chores. As soon as Papa Smurf walked out of Greedy’s house, he almost got knocked down. He looked to see the smurflings. “Can we go into the forest alone? Please Pappy, oh, I mean Papa Smurf!” Sassette pleaded. “Yeah, can we go?” The rest of the smurflings begged. Papa Smurf sighed. “Why do you want to go into the forest?” Papa Smurf asked. The smurflings paused for a while; soon Nat said “We want to see all of the plants and animals. We were also planning to show the new smurflings what it’s like to know two kings, a squire, and a jester.”
By this, he meant their friends King Gerard, the King (who is known by no other name), Squire Johan, and Peewit the jester. “Why don’t you want a grownup smurf to come along?” Papa Smurf asked. “It was a dare from Brainy. Please Pappy, or, uh, Papa.” Sassette replied. “You must take an adult with you.” Papa Smurf stated sternly. The smurflings looked let down. Then they heard a loud “Woah!” and they spun around to see Animator Smurf tripping over a rock. Clumsy looked
over and said “Well Golly! That’s the rock I lost from my rock collection!” 
He ran over and picked up the rock. The smurflings rushed over to the aid of Animator. Animator brushed the dirt off of his pants and said “Don’t worry, I’m fine. Um, Papa Smurf!” Papa Smurf walked over. “Yes Animator, what is it?” He asked. “I heard the smurflings needed a grownup smurf and think I qualify.” Animator laughed. The smurflings cheered. “Smurfaroo!
Could we go with him? Animator is a lot of fun!” Papa smurf laughed. “That would be fine. Just listen to Animator. And don’t go too close to Gargamel’s hovel, and….” He was interrupted. “Ok, Ok, Papa Smurf. We know.” Snappy said impatiently. “And now we’re off!” Naturette shouted excitedly. They started running. A couple minutes later, they heard a loud “Woah! What’s this thing?” They turned back to see that Animator had tripped on something. “Nice trip! See ya next fall!” Rudy joked. The smurflings ran over to see a hole. “That’s just a hole, you’ve seen a million. “That one’s no ordinary hole.” Nat pointed out. “That is the hole of a Groundhog or a mole or something.” Naturette added. “It’s much too big.” Nat’s eyes widened “In a storybook that Papa Smurf once read to me it said that there is something called Groundhog-zilla, it said it’s hole is bigger than anyone has ever seen
before.” The little smurfs looked scared. “Well, is anyone gonna go down there to find out?” Snappy asked with his teeth chattering. “I’ll do it.” Nat said bravely. “I talk to moles and groundhogs all the time, I might be able to reason with him.” Naturette stepped up “I’ll follow you in.” she said trembling. “Lower us down on a rope and I’ll tug once if I need to come up, twice if I think it’s safe for you to come down, and three times when I hit the bottom.” Nat told Animator and the other smurflings, who promised to hold the rope for him and Naturette. Snappy and Speedy tied rope to their friends and Nat crawled cautiously over to the hole. He was sitting with his legs hanging over the side. After taking a large breath he pushed himself over clutching the rope tightly. Breathing heavily, he slowly went deeper and deeper into the never ending blackness. After a few minutes his feet touched
something hard. He slowly stood up and he gave the rope three hard tugs. Suddenly the room illuminated with orange light. Nat gasped in surprise. He looked around and saw that it was a large underground room that was crafted by hand. He saw a bunch of tunnels that he thought must lead to other places in the forest. He didn’t dare take one step until he knew for sure that it was safe. Suddenly he heard voices approaching. His instincts told him to hide so he dived in a tunnel. He peeked out and saw two smurfettes walking out. One of them had hair as red as a rose and she wore a light violet shirt with a darker violet flower in the center. She wore smurf pants that were a little lighter than Chloette’s, and her cheeks were very rosy red. The second smurfette had hair the color of honey and was wearing a pink dress with sleeves that went to her wrists. Her hat and high heeled shoes matched her dress.
They were deep in a conversation. “I wonder if Storm is getting into any trouble with Foofoo. That guard rabbit hates men.” Said the one with rosy cheeks. “Yeah Rosie, I’m just thinking about poor Stormy and D.J. I mean, that rabbit is monstrous.” Said the second smurfette with a horrified look on her face while thinking about the thing they addressed as Foofoo. “We’d better get back to work, you know how mad Peachy would be if she found out we came down here to rest.” Said the one called Rosie.
Nat felt like something was crawling inside him. He had all of his senses alert as he watched. To him, it felt like he was sitting down there for hours. Then he slowly got drowsy from sitting there and half an hour later he woke up startled. What was going on around him slowly came back to his memory as he peeked out from behind the rock, which he was hiding behind. He noticed that the two smurfettes were gone. He slowly got to his feet and walked uneasily looking around. “It seems like someone could live here. What are those? They look like, rooms.” He said to himself softly. “Let’s see, these stones in the wall say something. They are so dusty.” Observed Nat. Then standing atop his toes, he blew on them. Dust flew everywhere and after it cleared, Nat read the carvings. “D.J., Stormy, Rusty, Sunny, Honey, Peachy, Rosie, Ash, Sasha, and Lavender. Wait, wasn’t Rosie the name of one of those smurfettes that came in earlier?” He asked himself. Then he turned to get a better look at the hall of tunnels that lead to different places in the world. There was one thing that caught Nat’s eye though. There was one tunnel marked Rusty/Papa’s House. Nat thought that was mysterious. Then he remembered his friends were waiting at the entrance to the area which he was in. Then he ran over and yanked the rope twice. Then he heard in Rudy’s voice above “It’s about time.” Then he saw Naturette sliding down the rope. “Didn’t you say you were gonna follow me in?” Nat asked when she was a few feet from bottom. “I was, but Kit Kat wanted to follow and she couldn’t fit.” Naturette started. “Who’s Kit Kat?” Nat interrupted. “Oh, Kit Kat is a kitten that I own. Magikette wouldn’t get me an elephant. So she got me a kitten instead. I’ve been letting her wander around the forest. She always comes back,” Replied Naturette. “She has actually been sneaking into the village when we don’t see her. She was there when Animator tripped earlier and you just didn’t see her.” Nat was surprised from hearing this. “Uhhh, how in the world did we not see a giant kitten?!” Nat exclaimed. “Uhh, more about that later. What have you learned?” Naturette said impatiently. “What was in there? I thought whatever it was had eaten you for sure.” She added. “Sorry, I got too carried away. There were two smurfettes in there though. One was named Rosie.” Started Nat. Naturette interrupted before he could finish “Wait, don’t I see the name Rosie over that door? Maybe we should look inside.” She suggested. Nat thought for awhile and soon made his final decision.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-25-2012 04:30 PM
I love it
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 03-26-2012 01:36 PM
this is fantastic! i love that Naturette wanted an elephant :-D
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Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Sportette
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posted 03-26-2012 01:38 PM
Cool
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Archive Smurf
Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 03-26-2012 06:35 PM
This is actually looking pretty good so far, Padfoot. ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 05-07-2012 11:27 AM
Thanks everyone!
I just finished Chapter 2:
Chapter 2
Rusty’s Girl
Meanwhile, in the smurf village, Inventette found herself no use with the ones by the tunnel, so she came to the village to see if she could help out there. She saw Papa doing his usual wizardry stuff. “Hello Papa! May I help you today?” She said in her usual high pitched voice. “Not right now Inventette, maybe you could help some other smurf.” replied Papa, while pouring the contents of one vile of dark purple liquid into another. “Okay Papa.” She said in her cheery tone. “I’ll help Handy!” then before Papa could say anything, Inventette was running off.
“Oh Handy, I don’t think the smurfs could get a better engineer than you.” Tabby Smurf was saying, watching carefully as Handy was hammering some boards in place. “You think so Tabby?” Handy asked, blushing slightly. Tabby kissed his cheek. “Of course! How could you think not?” Tabby said kindly. Then when they were leaning in, lips pursed and right when their lips were about to reach, they heard a high pitched voice yelling “Hey Handy! Papa said I should help you fix the dam!!!” Handy’s head turned quickly to see Inventette running down the river bank. “I’m sorry about her Tabby.” Handy whispered.
At that moment, Papa Smurf was taking a peaceful walk around the village. It was a crisp autumn evening and he felt a strong breeze. Then something flew and smacked him in the face. He was knocked to the ground. He saw it was white and it didn’t feel heavy. He knew it was paper. Soon he grabbed the sign and read
Papa laughed “D.J. is still into that stuff. Not surprising at all.” At that moment he saw Hefty walking over to him. “What is that paper you have Papa Smurf?” Hefty asked. Papa quickly shoved the paper behind his back. “Oh it’s…Nothing. It’s just an old spell of mine.” Papa lied. “Okay Papa Smurf.” Hefty said, curious about that paper. Hefty walked away. When Hefty was out of earshot, Papa slipped away and went in his house.
“I wonder if I should go.” He asked himself. Then he heard a knock at the door. “Come in!” He yelled. Then he saw Spy Smurfette walk in. “Hello Papa Smurf. I just got off the phone with the President, and I was just wondering if your smurfs and you would be interested in coming on a trip to the smurf house with me. I need some help with this case and I think you could help me.” She said, seriously. “We’d love to! When would we be leaving?” Asked Papa, glancing down at the flier. “Tomorrow.” Replied Spy. Papa gulped, and then Spy spotted the flier. “Oh, are you planning on going to D.J.’s dance party? I’m sorry. You can go there if you want.” said Spy, reading the flier to herself. “I guess the smurfs could go with you.” said Papa. “They’re under the age limit anyway; they wouldn’t be able to get past the entrance.” He added. Then, for the first time, Papa noticed that Spy was now reading the back of the flier. He looked over and saw a sign for a lost smurf:
“They won’t give up will they?” Papa blurted out. Spy looked at him. “What did you say?” She asked suspiciously. “This Rusty case is the one I’m working on. D.J. hired me to try to find him. I’ve got some info about him like that he is dating Sunny, a female rock star who came in as a replacement for Haley. The rumor among Sunny and the Cool Smurfs fans is that Sunny, is the one whom the song “Rusty’s Girl” that D.J. Smurf made, was about. But you should know all of this since you was in your 200s when the band was really really popular.” Spy said.
“Oh Smurf! I just gave away my whole case! Oh!” Spy started getting angry at herself. “Wait!” She stopped like she had just got an idea. “I’ll call the president and ask if I can arrange our meeting to be next week. I was wondering if I could go to the party with you. I may be able to talk with D.J. about this case while we’re there. Would that be okay with you Papa?” She asked. “I don’t see why it would be a problem.” Said Papa. Then they heard the chime of a bell. “Sounds like Greedy is ringing the dinner bell. We’d better go!” He said. And they rushed out to try to get a good seat in Greedy’s house.
“Hi Papa Smurf.” Said Greedy as they approached the entrance to Greedy’s house. “Hello Greedy, what’s for dinner today?” Papa asked politely. “We’re having your favorite, Acorn Stew!” Greedy said proudly. “Greedette, Chef, Baker, Cook, and I worked all day to make it.” He said. Then Papa walked over to the pot with the acorn stew and he spooned some into his bowl. Then he walked to his seat. He started making an announcement “Everysmurf, tomorrow I’m going to a party with Spy Smurfette. The age limit is 201 so you guys cannot come. I’ll be back hopefully before you guys wake up the next morning.” He paused and saw Spy Smurfette writing something in a notebook. “Ahem, when I’m away. I will have Magikette Smurfette in charge.” He finished.
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 05-11-2012 12:16 PM
that's positively smepic Jokie i love the dance party poster :-D
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 05-11-2012 03:57 PM
Thanks Nurturer!
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
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