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Topic: A new village fanfic
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 06:01 AM
I just started writing a book about some smurfettes i hope you will read it! I'm not really a good writer so it might now be super long. here's A preview!
Chapter 1 Harmony meets Musicette
In the smurf village Harmony smurf was playing his horn besides that everything was quite. Then the smurfs ate breakfast, jokey was handing out his gift boxes but Harmony was not happy " I am going out in the forest" He said " Ok" All the other smurfs said Not to far away from the smurf villege there was another village! " BRAVE!!!!!!!!" Wizard smurf yelled " Yes?" Brave Smurfling replid " Have you been going to mount smurf again?" Wizard said. " Y-Yes" Brave said " Well you know its dangerus for a little smurfling" " Yeah yeah yeah" Then Wizard woke up Musicette,Rytemette,Dancette,Strongette,Sneakette and Study. " Good morning!" Musicette sang! " Good morning to you to" Rhythmette replied! "Yeah" said a soft peaceful voice they all turned to see Dancette! "Hey Dancette" "Hey Wizard!" "I going out in the forest bye!" Musicette said. "Ok" Her friends replied.
Harmony played his horn but little did he now Musicette heard his music and you wanted to hear it better so she went closer! Harmony heard a stick creak he thought " GARGAMEL!" "Who's gagamel?" a soft voice said he turned to see a pretty smurfette with a white dress that went to her knee's and soft brown hair in a bun.
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Cowgirl smurfette
Evil Smurfette / SPORTETTTE 2 / Country girl smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 07:29 AM
Cool
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 03-14-2012 07:53 AM
Nice
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 08:35 AM
Thank you
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 03-14-2012 08:51 AM
oohhh could this be the beginnings of love?
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 08:56 AM
I think it is Nurturer ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 09:08 AM
Chapter 1 Harmaney meets Musicette In the smurf village harmaney smurf was playing his horn besides that everything was quite. Then the smurfs ate breakfast, jokey was handing out his gift boxes but harmaney was not happy " I am going out in the forest" He said " Ok" All the other smurfs said Not to far away from the smurf villege there was another village! " BRAVE!!!!!!!!" Wizard smurf yelled " Yes?" Brave Smurfling replid " Have you been going to mount smurf again?" Wizard said. " Y-Yes" Brave said " Well you know its dangerus for a little smurfling" " Yeah yeah yeah" Then Wizard woke up Musicette,Rythemette,Dancette,Strongette,Sneakette and Study. " Good morning!" Musicette sang! " Good morning to you to" Rythemette replid! "Yeah" said a soft peacefull voice they all turned to see dancette! "Hey Dancette" "Hey Wizard!" "I going out in the forest bye!" Musicette said. "Ok" Her friends replid.
Harmaney played his horn but little did he now Musicette heard his music and you wanted to hear it better so she went closser! Harmaney heard a stick creak he thought " GARGAMEL!" "Who's gagamel?" a soft voice said he tured to see a pretty smurfette with a white dress that went to her knee's and soft brown hair in a bun. " Who are you? “ Harmaney asked “ My name is Musicette. Whats yours?” “ H-harmaney” “Nice name” She replid “Thanks” “I love your music” Musicette said “You do!?” “Yup its lovely!” “Can i smurf you back to my village with me?” “ Um ok but i must get back to my village at 12:00 ok?” “Ok” At the village all the smurfs loved Musicette . She even played the harp for them. “You can really play the harp!” Hefty said “ thanks” “I have to go back to my village. Would you like to come?????” “Sure” all the smurfs said. “Welcome back Musicette!” her twins said ( Musicette, Rhythmette and Dancette are triplets) “Musicette why are 100 smurfs following you” Brave asked. “There some new friends i made” She said “Oh ok” Brave said. The smurfs stayed for dinner. The smurfs said good bye and left.
Chapter 2 Brave Smurfling’s way
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 11:16 AM
Chapter 2 Brave Smurfling’s way Brave smurfling always wants his way,but he gets lonely sometimes cause he’s he only smurfling in his village. Brave is a spoiled child,cause Wizard always lets him have his way even though he gets angry quickly. “Musicette! I want a new teddy bear!!!!!!!!!!!!” “*sigh* you already have ten teddy bears brave” Musicette said “Who cares!” the little smurfling cried” “Musicette all the little smurfling wants is a teddy bear! he should always get what he wants!” wizard said. “WHAT!?” Musicette cried! “Thats crazy!” said Dancette!
-------------------- With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 03-14-2012 01:45 PM
i love that they are triplets! and that Musicette plays the harp <3
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dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-14-2012 02:27 PM
Thank you Nurturer. this is my first time writing a book so I'm doing my best!
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