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Topic: "Empath's Wedding" sample write
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Vic George The ND Guy
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posted 01-23-2012 05:16 PM
A sample featuring Hefty and Gutsy...I mean, Duncan McSmurf:
It was night in Pussywillow Hollow. The pixies had folded over their wings and slept on the branches. Hefty, Duncan, Willpower, and Tuffy were camped nearby, huddled together near a fire they have built.
"The nights here are so chilly," Willpower said. "I'm not sure if I can smurf through a few more nights of all this hiding from the Wartmongers."
"Just hang in there, laddie," Duncan said. "You've smurfed through much worse than this with all that time-traveling we did when Grandpa Smurf lost the Key of Chronos."
"Right now I'd rather be smurfing through time than wasting it protecting the Pussywillow Pixies just so they can attend a wedding," Hefty said.
"You always seem to have something against Empath and Smurfette smurfing together," Duncan said.
"You think that smurfing Empath and Smurfette together for the past ten years was easy?" Hefty said.
"I never said that it was easy, Hefty," Duncan said. "Sometimes I do think about what kind of future I would want to smurf with such a fine lass like her. I would give anything to make sure that she would be happy. But I know somehow that she would never be happy smurfing her whole life with me."
"So you would just give up on her, like every other Smurf seems to be smurfing when it comes to her and Empath," Hefty said.
"That's one battle that I just don't have enough strength to keep smurfing, Hefty," Duncan said. "I would rather give up my happiness for Smurfette's than be selfish and expect for the slim chance that Smurfette will someday smurf her heart to me if she's already smurfed it to someone else."
"Well, I don't intend to retreat from this battle, Gutsy," Hefty said. "I'm going to let Smurfette know how much I care for her, and I'm going to fight for her heart no matter what."
Duncan sighed, realizing how dead-set his friend is and how he isn't going to persuade him to change his mind.
"Let's just smurf to sleep. We're going to need our strength to continue our job here in the hollow before we return to the village."
"Aw, let them come," Tuffy muttered. "I'm not afraid of what's going to happen, and I'm not afraid of this wedding."
Hefty snickered as he settled down on a leaf along with Duncan and Tuffy. "You will be, Tuffy. You will be."
-------------------- VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA "Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
Posts: 4103 | From: Westfield, MA | Registered: Mar 2003
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Vic George The ND Guy
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posted 01-25-2012 09:38 AM
The fanfiction story is complete and posted on Smurfs Fanon Wiki.
-------------------- VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA "Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
Posts: 4103 | From: Westfield, MA | Registered: Mar 2003
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Vic George The ND Guy
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posted 01-25-2012 05:30 PM
A picture collage based on a Foreigner song, for a scene involving Hefty. 
-------------------- VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA "Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
Posts: 4103 | From: Westfield, MA | Registered: Mar 2003
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