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Topic: fanfic: A world beyond ours
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Lazy Smurf
blue4ever
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posted 12-10-2011 11:39 AM
YES ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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HELLO SMURFY WORLD!
(I'm blue4ever)
Posts: 157 | From: smurfs village | Registered: Dec 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-16-2011 03:52 PM
chapter 3 is a little hard to do but it should be done by christmas
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-17-2011 05:20 PM
should be done by christmas
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-17-2011 05:22 PM
oops didnt realize i already posted it ,im almost finished
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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-20-2012 07:10 PM
I found this in my topics started list should I finish it now and do my other story or finish my other one that has like four more chapters left then do this one I'm confused ![[Embarrassed]](redface.gif)
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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
Member # 2823
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posted 03-21-2012 09:14 AM
Take your time Sportette.
My fanfic is still not even halfway through the story
So take your time there's always something to
inspires or give you new ideas to write.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
Posts: 696 | From: Bangkok,Thailand | Registered: May 2009
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-22-2012 11:03 AM
I think I'll do both since this one is a story I wrote when I was 8 so 2 years ago
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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-22-2012 11:04 AM
Oh yea and the book I wrote the story in is at my school I forgot to bring it home
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-22-2012 07:34 PM
Chapter 3(finally):
They looked all through the village they checked homnibusis(or however you spell it) house mother natures and father times papa was gone. "hmmm this smurf can't seem to find him" Empath said "well he has to be here somewhere" snappy said. They made one more search. Still nothing. "I wonder where I am?" the other Papa smurf said "that's confusing" peaceful said.
They then found papa smurf by the river smurf "hello papa number two" sassette said. He turned around looking at them confused "smurflings I thought there were only 4 not 5?" papa
said "and only one of me" he said looking at the other papa "well you see we are from another time and maybe dimension" the other papa said "we are? Oh ya we are!" clumsy said. "if there's another papa there's other ones of us too right?!" nat asked "I think so" hefty said and the smurflings went to meet them.
Hefty had followed he saw wild,handy,smurfette, and himself! "hey wild" hefty said to wild "hi hefty" wild said back. Hefty was suprised where he was wild just spoke a bunch of gibber jabber "well there is another one of me" hefty said looking at other hefty "where did you come from" the other hefty said "another dimension duh" hefty replied. He then went to meet the other smurfs from this dimension type thingamabober.
The smurflings met them selves well exept peaceful. "woah now I cant tell you apart well I can for sassette since she has different clothes but I'm bad at spotting differences" peaceful said kinda confused. They played smurfball. Snappy's team won. "im getting bored now" peaceful said "we all are" the other smurflings said. They walked back to where all the other time travellers were for some kind of announcement.
Bit of a cliffhanger hope you like it
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 03-23-2012 07:36 AM
i do like it! i wonder what the announcement could be...
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-23-2012 11:11 AM
Thank you
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 03-23-2012 04:35 PM
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter. So curious about that announcement! ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-23-2012 04:57 PM
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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 03-24-2012 06:15 AM
I love it
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With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
Posts: 969 | From: Far Far Away | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-24-2012 06:35 AM
Thanks
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Seether karma and effect
Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 03-24-2012 07:24 AM
Why are you thanking me? I'm only telling the truth. ( ![[Smile]](smile.gif) )
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 03-24-2012 07:42 AM
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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 03-24-2012 12:10 PM
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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