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Topic: My Smurf FanFic
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-05-2011 12:25 PM
hey! im making a fan fic called "The Smurf of the Centry". Its about me (tabby smurf),Lauren smurf (my bff), Handy smurf, and all of the others. its about when i first became a smurf and how my life is as a smurf. Its filled with suspense, adventure, and romance. its mostly PG but at times it does get somewhat R just to warn u smurfs. the best part is...... IT WILL BE RIGHT HERE, IN THIS CONVO, ON BLUEBUDDIES!!! all i need to do is get the extra female and parent smurfs. stay tooned and it will be here in about 3 weeks to a month. have a smurfy day!!! ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 11-05-2011 12:30 PM
smurfy <3 i can't wait ;-)
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-05-2011 12:45 PM
thanks!! i cant wait for you to read it!!!
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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SmurfFan82874
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posted 11-05-2011 04:09 PM
Looking forward to reading your story!
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-05-2011 08:23 PM
Thanks!!! I cant wait to post it
Ibjust need my other characters and il be fine
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-07-2011 02:27 PM
Hey i finished the first part!!! It will be here soon!!!!!
I finished the second chapter to!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-15-2011 04:00 PM
Chapter one:
Wha..Where am i? i saw a bunch of mushrooms with little windows and doors. AHHHHHHHHH!!! i saw a blue creature the same size as i was just sleeping. he awoke and said " oh its only a tiny human" and went back to sleep. momentarily,he awoke again and also started to yell also.there was soon about 100 others suronded me me until i herd a loud voice rised over the mumbles of the crowd. Settle down my little smurfs!! we dont want to scare t poor child!!! butit was to late, i was scared half to death and did n o tknow what to do. he was like the others but with red chothes and a white beard.he started to ask questions and started with who r u, all i could say was Tabby. He finished his questions and called a meeting at the village square. so i just sat there not sure what to do until i heard a loud and strong voice. U smurfing or what? excuse me? are u smurfing or wHat?! not sure what to do or say, i just sat there. Finaly he just said fine, ill just carry u. so he picked me up and placed me on his shoulders and he started to walk. out of the corner of my eye i saw 2 smurfs looking at me with lovestruck eyes.we finaly got to the village square and the smurf put me down.hte one they call papa smurf called me up to the stage, so i went. as i went up i saw in one smurfs miror that i was half naked!!! it looked like i was mauled by a bear!!! so i tryed to cover up with the little clothes i had on. when i got up there, Papa smurf told me to sit down on a barrel of hay. then he started to say his speach: My little Smurfs, Not only for the bountifule harvest, but also for the welcomeing of Tabby, i am throwing a dance!!! a round of applause came as fast as thy came.Suddenly all of the smurfs except one of the ones i saw earlier crouded around the only female smurf in the village. thje 1 i saw earlier had a came up to me and said: Hey im Handy, Handy smurf, i was wondering if you wanted to go to the dance with me. of course, it would be an honer. Papa told handy somthing i could not quite here Handy nodded and walked away. Papa smurf gave me a tour of the villageand i met everysmurf 1 by 1. but we got back to his house he turned to me and asked on strange question, "that Handys a real charmer isnt he" he had a somewhat satisfied look on his face. Yes, He is very handsome.i said with a weak and shy smile.finae it was the night of the dance and all or the preporations were done and Handy told me to cover my eyes and he would lead me somwhere.when we goth there , it was a beutiful purple and teal house. on the inside was tailor smurf with another surprise, a new purple and teal dress.amazed, i grabbed the dress and put it on. prefect fit!!! as i was trying it on handy ran to his house to put on is tux and we both left for the dance.when we goth there, everysmurf was danceing to the smurfy toon of the smurflings.me and handy danced to a slow dance, some smurfberry wine made by Greedy and Rootbeer Smurf. the dance was sadly over and me and Handy went back to my new smurf house. but at my house, Handy said goodbye to me and he kissed my hand. suddenly a huge wind went by and i was blue!!! Blue like all the others!! just then pap smurf came by and saidyou are now a smurf,i think this is the begining of a wonderful realationship.
Hope you enjoyed it!!! keep looking for Chapter 2!!!
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-16-2011 09:29 AM
Hope u smurfs like it!!! I understand if its not the greatest, ik only 11
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Rowena
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posted 11-16-2011 10:17 AM
I admire your enthusiasm!
I've always thought that writing fanfiction is a fantastic way to practice and polish up your writing skills, no matter how old you are. But, it would be a lot easier for your readers to enjoy your story if you broke it up into paragraphs.
Smurfy start! ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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SmurfFan82874
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posted 11-16-2011 02:41 PM
I agree with Rowena, especially about paragraphs. And I would suggest using quotation marks around things your characters say. Other than that and some minor spelling issues, you've done really well!
I look forward to your next chapter. Keep up the good work! ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-16-2011 03:31 PM
Alright i'l take that into typing my next story!!! Thanks!!
My Language arts teacher was very proud of me when i told him what i did!!! Im also proud of myself!!
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-21-2011 03:26 PM
ok i updated my FanFic so it is easier to read:
"Wha..Where am i"? i saw a bunch of mushrooms with little windows and doors. "AHHHHHHHHH!!!" i saw a blue creature the same size as i was just sleeping. he awoke and said "oh its only a tiny human" and went back to sleep. momentarily,he awoke again and also started to yell also.there was soon about 100 others suronded me me until i herd a loud voice rised over the mumbles of the crowd.
"Settle down my little smurfs!!" "we dont want to scare the poor child!!!" but it was to late, i was scared half to death and did not know what to do. he was like the others but with red clothes and a white beard.he started to ask questions and started with who r u, all i could say was "Tabby".
He finished his questions and called a meeting at the village square. so i just sat there not sure what to do until i heard a loud and strong voice. "U smurfing or what"? "excuse me?" i said very puzzled at the question. "are u smurfing or what?!" not sure what to do or say, i just sat there. Finaly he just said "fine, ill just carry u". so he picked me up and placed me on his shoulders and he started to walk. out of the corner of my eye i saw 2 smurfs looking at me with lovestruck eyes."curious, very curious" we finaly got to the village square and the smurf put me down.the one they call papa smurf called me up to the stage, so i went. as i was half way up i saw in one smurfs miror that i was half naked!!! it looked like i was mauled by a bear my clothes were so torn!!! so i tryed to cover up with the little clothes i had on. when i got up there, Papa smurf told me to sit down on a barrel of hay. then he started to say his speach
"My little Smurfs, Not only for the bountiful harvest, but also for the welcomeing of Tabby, i am throwing a dance"!!! a round of applause went as fast as they came.
Suddenly all of the smurfs except one of the ones i saw earlier crouded around the only female smurf in the village. the 1 i saw earlier had a came up to me and said: "Hey im Handy, Handy smurf, i was wondering if you wanted to go to the dance with me". "of course, it would be an honer" i said very astonished at Handy.
Papa told Handy somthing i could not quite hear, Handy nodded and walked away. Papa smurf gave me a tour of the village and i met everysmurf 1 by 1. but we got back to his house he turned to me and asked one strange question, "that Handys a real charmer isnt he" he had a somewhat satisfied look on his face. "Yes, He is very handsome".i said with a weak and shy smile.
Finaly it was the night of the dance and all or the preporations were done and Handy told me to cover my eyes and he would lead me to a smurfy surprise. When we got there , it was a beutiful purple and teal house. on the inside was Tailor smurf with another surprise, a new purple and teal dress.amazed, i grabbed the dress and tryed it on. prefect fit!!! As i was trying it on Handy ran to his house to put on is tuxcedo and we both left for the dance.
When we got there, everysmurf was danceing to the smurfy song of the smurfling song. Me and Handy danced to a slow dance, some smurfberry wine made by Greedy and Rootbeer Smurf. the dance was sadly over, Handy and I went back to my new smurf house. but at my house, Handy said goodbye to me and he kissed my hand. suddenly a huge wind went by and i was blue!!! Blue like all the others!! just then Papa smurf came by and said "you are now a smurf,i think this is the begining of a wonderful realationship". with another satisfied smile
hope its better to read!!! i will b posting chapter two very shortly!!!
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Rowena
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posted 11-21-2011 03:56 PM
It is easier to read now, thank you! But you still want to keep an eye out for spelling and capitalization. That'll help make sure it's your story that stands out, not the grammar.
Looking forward to your next installment!
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~Quotation from Brainy Smurf
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Tabby Smurf
MrsHandySmurf
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posted 11-21-2011 05:36 PM
TOLD YOU SOON!!!
Chapter 2 THE TRUTH COMES OUT
"Ooooh Handy, what could be better than sitting with your boyfriend talking about anything that comes to mind?"
"Well Tab, only one comes to mind"
"What could that be?"
"Knowing the love of your life is somwhere in the world, and you find her". with that, we kissed, for the first time on the lips.(Handy is a great kisser). "i'l be right back, ok Tab" "Dont be too long"so Handy started to walk to the ocean."Why would Handy go to the ocean to get water" i wondered? so i climbed the trees and started to follow Handy.
"Marina, Marina, are you there" "Whos Marina"? i wondered quit anciously.Suddenly somthing poped out of the water. A mermaid!!! Marina was a mermaid!!! "Oooohh Handy, i thought you would never show up." " im there for you Marina" Handy smurfed with a smile. listen Handy i must tell you somthing that you must not tell anywone!! "NOt even Tabby?!" "Not even Tabby Handy" with that, they kissed on the lips!!! i started to cry and went back to the rock we were sitting on before he left.
Shortly, Handy arrived and sat back on the rock, put his arms around my sholders and we talked about our speciltys. Lets see, "i like to fix things around the village, build new things, and invent things to make the village a smurfier place to live." Wow Handy, you sure know how do do a lot of stuff. "I like to do voice imitations my friends." I showed Handymy imatation of Smurfette, Papa, Brainy, and Himself. it was gettin late so we headed back to the village to go to bed. but insted of going to bed i went straight to Smurfettes house.
"Smurfette!! Smurfette open up!! its Tabby!" Tabby come in."Pffff thanks Smurfette, i have the most shocking thing to tell you!!" "what is it, you sound urgent" "I think Handys cheating on me!!" Smurfettes jaw droped to to the floor and i explained everything. And i promise i can get evidence. I left the house and walked home, WHen i got there, Handy was waiting for me.
"Tab look what i made!! its a video and picture smurfer!!" "just What i needed, handy can i borrow it?" "sure use it for how ever long you want."
that night i saw Handy run off into the forest. again i climed to the trees and followed.
TO BE COMTINUED......
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-22-2011 12:58 PM
Part 2
I saw Handy on a rock that looks out into the ocean and sat. i dicided to talk like smurfette to see if i can smurf anything out of him and turned on the video and picture smurfer. "Hello Handy, its Smurfette, plesase dont look at me, i look like a mess." "oh hi Smurfette." what are you smurfing out here in the middle ofthe nght Handy?" "just thinking" "about Marina""Yes".
you stillove her dont you Handy. ohh a little b. ( at this point i was in my regular voice ) "Well thank you Handy for shreing that very valuable imformation" i said with a smeirk on my face. "OMS Tabby i can explain u see-""No HAndy i talk first" " i saw you and MArina kiss the other day. You're cheating on me!!" Tabby, Kissing mermaids is a way to transfer thoughts. "its true" said a familir voice. Marina!!!
see Tabby come here. ummm ok. Marina kissed me and i herd: Is Handy a good kisser? i just laughed and walked away. Marina spilled the beans and tole us to tell the others that her and Handys brother Marco are getting married.that night i was very realived, we were begining the preporations for their wedding. i could not wait to get started.the best part is, i was a brides maid!!!!
THE END
i will post chapter 3 in about a week
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
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SmurfFan82874
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posted 11-23-2011 08:50 AM
Much improved, MrsHandy Smurf! Still a few spelling issues, but much better. Good job! Looking forward to part 3.
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-23-2011 10:39 AM
thank you very much. i would be a lot easier to have spell cheack on here so i know if theres a mistake.
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Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Amy Sue Smurfette
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posted 11-24-2011 05:52 PM
i loved your story MrsHandy Smurf :-) it was very romantic.
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Wizard Smurf
Smurfling
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posted 11-24-2011 09:18 PM
Awesome!(chapter 1 is my favorite!)
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Do If what your Smurfin!
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-25-2011 07:29 PM
Thank you Nuturer smurf. i try and keep it that way. again i must warn everysmurf that in the next 3 to 4 chapters, the romance may get a little intense, so i must state: FOR VEIWERS THAT BECOME VERY UNCOMFERTABLE WITH SUCH THINGS AS 3 LETTER S WORD ENDING WITH A X, PLEASE DO NOT READ, VEIWER DISCRESION IS ADVISED.
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 11-25-2011 07:38 PM
thank you for the warning. i personally thrive on romance, so i look forward to reading more of it :-)
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-26-2011 07:00 AM
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Originally posted by Nurturer Smurf:
thank you for the warning. i personally thrive on romance, so i look forward to reading more of it :-)
I totaly agree. I love romance!!! I Dream about romance with my boyfriend. I just love all kinds of romance
Posts: 619 | From: Handy Smurf/ MrsHandySmurf mushroom, Smurf Village | Registered: Jul 2011
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-27-2011 01:05 PM
im puzzled on chapter 3. it may not be here as soon as i thought it would. ![[Frown]](frown.gif)
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Swag is for Boys, Class is for Ninja!!!
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 11-27-2011 06:21 PM
im exited for chapter 3 cant wait i love romance dont know why
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Tabby Smurf
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posted 11-27-2011 09:12 PM
Everywone loves there own kind of romance Bakette!!! I actualy have a Bakette in one of my chapters when i raise smurfs from the dead. Also some of my storys inclued intense romance, violence, inapropriate language, and mean ways to use the word smurf. Plus most of the charactars i made dont quite set a good example...... But im still useing them anyway!!!
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