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Topic: A Smurf Fan Fic - Born of My Imagination
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snapette smurfling
Smurfling
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posted 07-06-2012 11:13 PM
I hope thigs get better for the smurfs, mostly brainy and clumsy. You go smurfette. Great story, cant wait for another update.
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have a smurfy day.
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Jokie Smurf
Jokie Smurf22 / Chloette / Elton John Smurf / My dog Padfoot
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posted 07-07-2012 01:09 PM
Yeah, I am loving this story! ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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When people say giving is better than receiving they are talking about me. Giving someone one of my exploding presents is WAY better than receiving one. ;)
Posts: 2871 | From: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA | Registered: Nov 2011
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 07-07-2012 02:00 PM
i've always loved how Smurfette stands up for others :-D you portray her so perfectly Squeaky!
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we're all someone's little fangirl.
Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Smurfette
Smurfalicious
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posted 07-07-2012 04:39 PM
I just love this story Squeaky!!! You make me look so good in your art! Thank you, keep your mind wide open your brilliant!
Posts: 2886 | From: Smurf Village | Registered: Dec 2011
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 07-08-2012 10:27 AM
Thank you so much, Snapette, Jokie, Stormy and Smurfette for your smurfy kindness.. ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Carnation
dogboo22 / Brunette / Greedette / President Smurfette / Summer Smurfette
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posted 07-08-2012 10:43 AM
I love this story so far! Poor Brainy ![[Frown]](frown.gif)
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With a good attitude no one can bring you down - Carnation
Posts: 969 | From: Far Far Away | Registered: Nov 2011
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 07-24-2012 10:16 AM
And here we go again...
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And things were going at Smurf village with time putting them on their right place. Brainy had apologized to Clumsy, telling he had much regret and adding that "Papa Smurf always says one must say one is sorry for having smurfed something wrong", so that little by little they were seen together as usual and Clumsy was in his happy mood again.
But there was still someone who didn't give up so easily and would do everything to ruin the tranquility of the little blue people in Fantasy Island.
“Go and help do the table for the guests' 'self-service'”, the head cook told Gargamel, giving him out a covered dish. “Carry this plate with care, this is not a cauldron! And don't even think about leaving, the employees are keeping an eye on you.”
The sorcerer made a humble face but changed it to a terrible expression when the man turned around.
“I'll still change you into a frog, you loathsome snail!” Gargamel threatened mentally. "How humiliating! I, Gargamel, a powerful wizard, being treated like a paltry manservant!"
But he had to obey, whether he likes it or not, as he hadn't been given any chance of escaping in order to pursue the Smurfs again; so the terrible wizard drove his way to an open air space where a large dinning table had been set up. Arriving there, he put the plate on it and was about to go back to the kitchen when he heard two young women chatting near the table. His ears weren't deceiving him - one of them were meaning something about "blue rats"!!
"...And to think the boys poked so much fun at me! I only wish I could have remembered that before and told Mr. Roarke about it", she said. "Now I'm quite sure it must be part of some fantasy he's done for a guest!"
"Oh, you're right", her friend replied. "If everything is possible here as he usually says, why can't blue rats exist?"
"And I feel he can do everything that imagination permits..." She made a pause and got an enraptured look. "He's so marvelous!"
The other girl sighed.
"And so handsome too... I only wish I knew he's already got a girlfriend!"
Gargamel made an effort to make a friendly face and approached the girls.
"Excuse me, dear good ladies", he addressed them with an edulcorated voice tone. "Pardon my interruption, but I couldn't help hearing what you've just said. You said something involving 'blue rats'... Right?"
"We really did", answered the girl, somewhat disgusted at that odd figure before them. "And what's your business with this?"
"Oh, just imagine! At first sight I can look a mere servant but in fact I'm a great wizard who's the master of these blue rats you meant!"
The two girls changed glances. Firstly they seemed they were going to have a fit of laughter at once, but something had retained them. Could it be possible that guy was really what he said? After all, they were at Fantasy Island... Who knows he was a Mr. Roarke's old acquaintance??
But before they realized to tell something, Gargamel was approached by one of the waiters.
"Hey, you!" he said. "What do you think you're doing? You are here to work and not to chat with the guests! Go back to the kitchen and get other dishes!"
The mean wizard didn't insist. But gave the man a contemptuous look and turned his back arrogantly, leaving with his nose in the air.
"I would have been successful if that idiot hadn't appeared", he thought angrily as he was driving his way. "Patience, patience, Gargamel! You haven't been defeated yet! You're much smarter than that Roarke and his lackeys. I'll overcome all of them and after releasing Azrael, I'll get those miserable little pests and nobody shall impede me!!"
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![[Eek!]](eek.gif) ![[Gargamel]](graemlins/gargamel.gif) ![[Azrael]](graemlins/azrael.gif)
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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snapette smurfling
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posted 07-24-2012 08:41 PM
Yay clumsy's happy again, and haha Gargamel. Grate story, cant wait for the next update.
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Posts: 20 | From: missouri | Registered: Feb 2012
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Amy Sue Smurfette
Nurturer Smurf / The Odd Smurf
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posted 07-25-2012 09:49 AM
i second snapette's comment! ooohh i wonder what mean old Gargamel will come up with this time???
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Posts: 903 | From: fah fah aweeey... | Registered: Oct 2011
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 07-26-2012 06:42 PM
Thank you so much, Greedette, Snapette and Stormy. And yes, Gargy seems to be really in the mood for some evil!
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Smurfette
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posted 07-26-2012 11:50 PM
So amazing! And I just love the artwork.
Posts: 2886 | From: Smurf Village | Registered: Dec 2011
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 07-27-2012 12:23 PM
Thanks much! And coming from Gargamel, one can expect everything...
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Archive Smurf
Baraduke Brainy / De-Evolution Smurf / Space Harrier Brainy / Oingo Boingo Smurf / ToonerSmurf Inc. / Smurfus Norsmurficus / Archive Smurf
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posted 07-27-2012 11:39 PM
Man I was so lost.. ![[Confused]](confused.gif) for a while now, mainly because I was busy with quite a bit of things.
GREAT WORK SQUEAKY!! KEEP IT UP
Posts: 1476 | From: Canada | Registered: Jun 2008
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 10-20-2012 11:17 AM
Squeaky, when will you update this story?
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Posts: 600 | From: Milton, MA/Chile | Registered: Apr 2007
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 01-05-2013 04:55 PM
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Meanwhile...
Tattoo was at Smurf village talking animatedly with the little blue people, who wanted to know something more about the magic place where they had come forth.
“And speaking of Mr. Roarke... He sometimes seems to be so mysterious...” commented Poet. “After all, who is really Mr. Roarke, Tattoo? What's the people's opinion about him?”
“I will try to explain, Poet, but I think you all shall understand”, promised Tattoo. “In fact all I have to say is dat some people call him... (and pointed upwards the sky) and some call him... (at this moment Tattoo pointed down)”.
The Smurfs got silent and changed glances, but nodded showing they had understood. Then after that they stared at Brainy Smurf, whose blue face flushed crimson with embarrassment.
“But what about you, Tattoo?” asked Handy. “What do you call him?
“Me, Handy? I call him Mr. Roarke.”
The little blue creatures smiled approvatively.
“So you mean there are people who think Mr. Roarke is...” Smurfette couldn't finish her sentence but repeated Tattoo's second gesture. “How nasty!”
“Crêpe suzette, it's very unsmurfy!” Painter got upset.
“Pardon my frankness, Tattoo, but some humans are really very ignorant”, commented Dreamy Smurf.
“I HATE ignorance!”
“Oh, gosh, how can anyone think this about Mr. Roarke, Tattoo?” Clumsy Smurf was pretty annoyed.
“Never mind, who cares about dem?" Tattoo shrugged. "Anyway, I'm very glad to see you Smurfs seem to like him!”
“We really do!” replied Greedy.
“We like you too!”, added Harmony.
“And Julie!” seconded Clumsy again.
“By the way, how did you two meet each other?” Hefty was curious.
“It's a long story, Hefty... For being a dwarf I was usually jeered by many people and nobody used to take me seriously...”
“I HATE jeers!”
“...but when I first came to Fantasy Island, he invited me to work here and I became his assistant by den!”
"Gee whiz, how smurfy, Tattoo!" commented Clumsy.
"Otherwise, we have a human friend who is just like you, Tattoo", said Vanity. "His name is Peewit and he's very cool and amusing!"
"Really?" Tattoo gave a large smile. "Den your friend Peewit must be a great guy! I'd like to meet him."
"Oh, I'm smurfsure you two would smurf along very well if he were here!" added Harmony.
“And Julie has always lived here in Fantasy Island, right?” observed Smurfette. “She told me about!”
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If the drawings are ready I'll post other part still today! ![[Cool]](cool.gif)
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 01-07-2013 05:30 PM
At last Brainy realized to talk.
“There are two things I'd like to know: how did Mr. Roarke arrive here and how did this place become Fantasy Island?”
The other Smurfs looked at each other, surprised at his questions. It was true, nobody had imagined that before, so they had to recognize - although unwillingly - it really made much sense.
"Dis nobody knows, Brainy Smurf", Tattoo answered. "Not me eider. What everyone knows is dat he's de only owner and proprietor of Fantasy Island. And by den he's been hosting people from everywhere to make deir fantasies come true."
"Huh, so that Mr. Roarke gives the people fantasies, right, Tattoo?"
"Wrong, Clumsy." Brainy shook his head. "Of course these fantasies are not free; he must ask for a price, for Papa Smurf always says that humans use money to smurf their deals and business, and since Mr. Roarke is a human he would be no exception." He made a pause and added: "By the way, I'm still curious, Tattoo: how much does he ask for a fantasy?"
The little human smiled and made a mysterious pause before replying.
"Just de modest sum of 50,000 dollars!"
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!" The Smurfs couldn't disguise their astonishment.
"I HATE 50,000 dollars!"
“50,0000 dollars?” Brainy's eyes grew incredibly wide. “What could be the worth of this in smurfberries?”
Tattoo assumed a superior look.
“I think not even all de smurfberries in de Smurf village could cover dis amount, Brainy Smurf!”
“Holy smurf!...”
“Gosh, what are 'dollars', Tattoo?” asked Clumsy.
“Dollar is a kind of currency which is accepted all over de human world!”
"What a pity!" Shy Smurf thought but dared not to say it. "If I could smurf a fantasy of mine..." And sighed, disheartnened.
"But what about the people that have no money, Tattoo?" Smurfette was disappointed. "They also must have some fantasies... I don't think this is fair!"
"Well, mademoiselle..." Tattoo needed to make a pause, somewhat constrained. "Sometimes de Boss sets some precedents for de ones dat haven't enough money for [i]deir[/] fantasies!"
On hearing that Shy Smurf smiled at once. So he could realize a fantasy of his!
"I need to talk to Mr. Roarke when I first have a chance!" He thought.
The other Smurfs changed glances, enchanted. And something seemed to be working inside those little blue minds...
..................................And what could it be?? ![[Wink]](wink.gif)
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 01-07-2013 07:05 PM
About an hour later Julie had just gotten back from a fantasy, in which she helped a guest who wanted to be a typical cloak-and-dagger movie hero. She was truly relieved to have left on time before any swordsman saw her and kidnapped her, as some villains used to do in such movies.
She passed by the Smurf village on her way, when...
"Julie! JULI-EEEE!" She heard a voice calling her name out. "Wait for me!"
She turned around and saw a Smurf running to her.
"Clumsy!" The young woman was surprised. "What are you doing outside your village?"
"I saw you arriving here and I realized to follow you!"
"But..." The young woman was so confused that she didn't know what to say properly. "...but you shouldn't have done it!"
The little Smurf's expression changed from happy to a sad one and his voice trembled a bit.
"So... so do you mean you don't want me to see you anymore?"
The young woman got moved and took him tenderly in her hands.
"Oh, please, Clumsy, you know it's none of that at all! The only thing I don't want is that Papa Smurf gets angry with you again!"
As if by enchantment Clumsy smiled once more.
"Then may I stay with you?"
"Well... only if you haven't any work to do."
None of them imagined they were being observed. Mr. Roarke was between intrigued and amused. He had just changed his jacket and shirt just after having a "little accident" with Harmony... The little Smurf had chosen an awful moment to play his trumpet.
“Er... Sorry, Mr. Roarke!!”
.........................And some surprises might come!!
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Smurfy1For2
Blue Believer
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posted 01-08-2013 06:40 AM
Ooh I LOVE IT SQUEAKY!! I LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR ART!!! THE PICTURES ARE SO CUTE!! Look at Smurfette she looks so good! Gargamel as a waiter made me laugh!!!! THANKS SQUEAKY
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u wished u rocked as i
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 01-08-2013 10:29 AM
Glad to see you enjoyed it, Smurfy. Thanks a smurf!
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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Oakley Smurf
Brainy Smurf Snaeha
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posted 01-09-2013 05:48 AM
Really enjoyed your story,Squeaky but i also put my fanfic story on hold because of this reason too.
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I'm Brainy Smurf's alter ego one that didn't wearing glasses...for now...
"Eyesight 200/20 but I always see what's on my mind"
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Sassette
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posted 01-09-2013 09:37 AM
So SMURFY!
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Have a smurfy day!
Posts: 4530 | From: Smurfingland | Registered: Jul 1999
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Amtrak Smurf
Super Smurf
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posted 04-10-2013 02:31 PM
Hope you update this story soon, Squeaky.
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The destination of this train is: Smurf Village
Posts: 600 | From: Milton, MA/Chile | Registered: Apr 2007
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Amtrak Smurf
Super Smurf
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posted 07-02-2013 12:17 PM
When will you update this story, Squeaky? Some of us are very eager to know what happens next.
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The destination of this train is: Smurf Village
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Squeaky Smurf
Hering Smurf
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posted 09-04-2014 08:35 PM
I really want to make them come, Linkin, but for a while I need to finish at least two more Smurf pics for the story. Probably on next Friday or Sunday they'll get ready.
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Keep on always smurfin'!!
Posts: 7509 | From: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil | Registered: Jul 2008
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