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Topic: fanfic: A world beyond ours
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 04:59 PM
im going to write a story and it should be done in a week or so its about the smurfs traveling to a different dimensoin to a new world witch is involving some characters from vic georges empath stories i hope you like it when i post it ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif) ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 05:01 PM
so it has them going to empaths universe in other words
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Nurturer Smurf
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posted 12-08-2011 05:12 PM
bakette, you may want to ask Vic first if it's okay to use his characters hun. if you haven't asked him already. ;-)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 05:16 PM
i am it wouldnt b good if i didnt
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VicGeorge2010
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posted 12-08-2011 05:18 PM
If it's a crossover, make sure Empath stays in his own universe when all is said and done.
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VIC GEORGE -- Westfield, MA, USA
"Cat and mouse games really aren't much fun for us mouse types" -- Empath from "Empath The Bandit Smurf"
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 05:28 PM
ok i just posted the question about it im working on it now
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Nurturer Smurf
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posted 12-08-2011 05:28 PM
that's very smurfy of you Vic :-)
bakette, i definitely look forward to reading your story :-)
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Lazy Smurf
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posted 12-08-2011 05:41 PM
me too, i love stories
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HELLO SMURFY WORLD!
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 05:51 PM
im also including my own new smurf named peaceful smurfette
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Sportette
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posted 12-08-2011 05:54 PM
shes a smurfling by the way
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Nurturer Smurf
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posted 12-08-2011 05:58 PM
that will be nice :-) i haven't read too many stories that focus on a smurfling.
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 06:20 PM
shes a smurfling by the way
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-08-2011 06:35 PM
oops did it twice
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Nurturer Smurf
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posted 12-08-2011 09:38 PM
lol that happened to me the other day. i didn't do it on purpose and couldn't figure out how to delete the second one.
all these new stories popping up are exciting! i've started trying to dig up what i have of my own so i can reread them while waiting for more of everyone else's.
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Sportette
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posted 12-09-2011 01:06 PM
finished chapter 1 peaceful was found in a rainforest and tagged along with the other smurfs by the way any way heres chapter 1:
The 17 smurfs and there new friend peaceful smurfling fell out of the rainbow twister,then peaceful went over to some hills and noticed some mushroom houses in the distance “Hey smurfs look over here!” peaceful said.The other smurfs came over “Those look like the homes you told me about.” “It is we are home!” Smurfette exclaimed. “Papa smurf Papa smurf were home Papa smurf. i knew it as soon as I saw it…” “Brainy!” the other smurfs said. “Gosh,are we really home?” Clumsy asked.“I bealive we are Clumsy, I belive we are” Papa smurf said.“What are we waiting for…” said Nat Let's go!” all the smurfs ran until they got there but when they got there they realized it wasn't their home.
To be continued…
hope you liked it ! it got done sooner than planed sorry its short
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-09-2011 01:08 PM
its a short story so far itll get longer in chapter 2
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posted 12-09-2011 04:13 PM
all ready so interesting, wonder what will happen next...
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HELLO SMURFY WORLD!
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Sportette
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posted 12-09-2011 04:37 PM
well youll find out
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-09-2011 05:52 PM
i just drew a sketch of peaceful she has a purple shirt and skirt with a black belt a necklace with a peace sign her skirt has peace signs on it and so does her hat with yellow hair with 4 streaks of pink in it gray high heeled boots peace sign earings pink lipstick and eyshadow oh and chapter 2 should be done by sunday
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Nurturer Smurf
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posted 12-09-2011 06:02 PM
your picture sounds smurfy :-)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-09-2011 06:53 PM
wow im fast at writing its already finished so ill post it tommarow
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blue4ever
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posted 12-09-2011 07:17 PM
Oh, im so excited
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HELLO SMURFY WORLD!
(I'm blue4ever)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-10-2011 10:17 AM
ok heres chapter 2:
"Wait a minute this can't be our home its different here" Slouchy said "Yes,Slouchy,it is different here it cant be our home" Papa said."I hate not being home" Grouchy said " Me too" said Snappy."Hey maybe if we look around we'll smurf someone or something"Peacful said getting ready to go"C'mon smurfs lets smurf to it!"and they began to walk then Hefty said "Look over here" the smurfs came over "theres a smurf" and there was he wore a star patterned suit with a star mark on his forehead. Papa went up to him and said "Exuse me," the smurf looked up "Hello Papa smurf" he said "How do you know my name?" Papa asked " This smurf has known you since this smurf was a smurfling" the other smurf answered "Um, you see we are from another time and place can you please smurf us to your village" Papa said "How does this smurf know you are not fakes" the smurf said "This smurf has never seen that smurfling back there nor the smurf with a leaf hat" he added "Do anything you need to smurf but quick qustion why do you have that starmark?"Papa said"It does many things for instace telepathy this smurf now knows how to know see if you are true smurfs"he said he now knows they are smurfs and need help "what is your name?" papa said "This smurfs name is empath " empath said "Nice to meet you Empath" all the smurfs said."ok this smurf will lead you to the vilage"Empath said "yay!" all the smurfs said. "Lets get smurfing!"Sassette said.When they got there they looked around and Empath took them to the other Papa smurfs house but no one was home so empath went to look for him along with the others he was no where to be found.
To be contiued
hoped you like chapter 2!
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-10-2011 10:18 AM
i mean hope you liked it! ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
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Sportette
Bakette
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posted 12-10-2011 11:37 AM
chapter 3 will be done soon
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