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Topic: "The Smurfs Meets Thomas & Friends", A fictional story from my dreams.
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-07-2007 05:09 PM
Hello, Smurffans! I had just created a story by combining two of my shows, all on my own in dreams. It's called: The Smurfs Meets Thomas & Friends.
My story will be based from The Smurfs Season 9 series and Thomas & Friends Season 10 series. The Genres in my story will have: Adventure, Action, Humor, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, and Friendship. And it's in british.
Here's my summary: The Smurfs had smurfed themselves in the mid-1950's on the Island of Sodor, Where they met Thomas and all his friends. And there's an arguement between this certain smurf and this certain engine. Will the two individuals settle they're differences and become friends? You'll just have to find out for yourself as you read my story.
Also, My story will start and end with some songs. I'll reveal them to you all at the start and ending parts of my story. There be also some background songs, and you have to figure out the name of it, who are the singers, and what movie is it from. And their be some theme music.
Now for the characters, I did the math and found out that 17 smurfs and Smoogle, are the main characters from Season 9. So here's the list of them.(Minus Smoogle)
They are:
1. Grandpa
2. Papa
3. Baby
4. Smurfette
5. Sassette
6. Snappy
7. Brainy
8. Clumsy
9. Greedy
10. Grouchy
11. Handy
12. Hefty
13. Jokey
14. Lazy
15. Vanity
16. Painter
17. Wild
Now, here are the characters from Thomas & Friends.
They are:
Thomas the Tank Engine
Edward the Blue Engine
Henry the Green Engine
Gordon the Big Engine
James the Red Engine
Percy the Small Engine
Toby the Tram Engine
Emily the Beautiful Engine
Annie and Clarabel, Thomas' two coaches
The Troublesome Trucks
Sir Topham Hatt(AKA The Fat Controller)
And minor appearences, cameos, and mentionings of some other friends from T&F.
And one more thing, Their be no villians in my story!
Well, That's my update. Now the question is, Where should I type in my story? I'm most certainly not going to type it here. Can anybody help me? Please and Thank You.
Smurf you later!
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-09-2007 02:13 PM
Thank you, Raven Child. But I'm asking, where should I type my story? ![[Roll Eyes]](rolleyes.gif)
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Smurfy1For2
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posted 08-11-2007 10:44 PM
Put your story on here so we can read it!!
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-11-2007 10:47 PM
Raven Child!
I can't log myself in on fanfiction.net 'cause my e-mail address n password are invlaud. Think I can type my story on to your website? Please?
If not, I have to cancel my story. ![[Frown]](frown.gif)
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Smurfy1For2
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posted 08-11-2007 11:06 PM
amtraksmurf! Put your story right here!!! It sounds good!
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-11-2007 11:09 PM
Are you sure? My story is so BIG and it comes in chapters!
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-12-2007 08:39 AM
All right, If you all say so.
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-12-2007 08:52 AM
OK, Here's Ch. 1. Enjoy!
[Opening story song]
[Aly & AJ - Walking On Sunshine]
(If you would like to hear this song/watch this music video, Go to Youtube.com, n type it in.)
Chapter 1: The Meeting
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-12-2007 03:01 PM
It was a beautiful and crispy day on the Island of Sodor. Lots of visitors from all over the world came to visit the island. They came in two ways of getting to the island, either by boat... or by plane. And there's only one way for the visitors to get around the island, and that is... by train.[Gordon's whistle blows]
That late afternoon, Thomas, along with his two coaches, Annie and Clarabel, were on there way home after having another hard days work. Thomas is exhausted, he's been taking passengers to and fro around the island.
"Boy, We sure had a very busy day" He puffed to his coaches.
"Yes we did, Yes we did!" The coaches sang.
"And now, we all can get a good night's sleep." He replys, as he trundles along happily to Tidmouth Sheds.
Meanwhile, Ten miles down the line, the rainbow-colored time-traveling tornado appeared from sky. It came down, and stops inches from the tracks. One by One, the Smurfs fell down, and land their toosies on to the ties and gravel. And the tornado suddenly disappears. The Smurfs moaned and groaned, and rub their behinds to heal the pain after having a rough landing.
"Now where are we?" Brainy moaned.
"Hmm, I don't know." Grandpa replyed, and looked around. He can see that there's nothing but trees, bushes and lots of grass. "We must be in some kind of open field, I think" He said, but still looking very confused.
"Ow, What have we smurfed on?" Hefty groaned, as rubs his behind.
"Uh, gosh." Clumsy reply. "It lookes like we smurfed on some rocks."
"And some wood." Handy added.
"And what are these hard things?" Smurfette pointed out in between.
"Hmm?" Handy pondered, and walked towards one of the rails. He examined it and begin to think what it is. Then he turned to Hefty. "Hefty, would you smurf me a boost, please?"
"Sure, Handy." The tough smurf said, and lifted the carpenter smurf right on top of the rail.
Now Handy got a good clear view, and started to look around. He looked to the left, and to the right. And then he stop and started to wonder.
"Will Handy, Did you see anything?" Asked Papa.
"Well, I see everything that Grandpa said," He replyed. "But, I'm more concern about on what we smurfed on."
"I HATE what we smurfed on!" Grouchy grumble loudly.
Handy roll his eyes skyward in annoyance, and continued on what he was doing. Then, he looked down, he can see his reflection on the top of the rail. Then he crouch down, and began to touch it. It was all nice and smooth. Then he gently knocked it. "It's made out of metal." He said to himself. Suddenly, he gasped. He began to look at both the rocks, the wood, and the rails all at once. Now everything is all coming back to him.
"Hey, Smurfs!" He shouted. "I think I know what we smurfed on!"
"What?!" The others reply franticly.
"We have smurfed on some TRACKS!" He said loudly.
"Tracks?" Brainy said puzzledly.
"I don't resmurf." Greedy added.
"Don't you all remember?" Handy explained, and jumped down from the rail. "That is what we use to get my railsmurfer to smurf on back at home."
"Oh, I remember that!" Snappy replyed
"You're railsmurfer was lots of fun!" Sassette added.
"Until Gargamel showed up and ruined everything!" Snappy added also with a dissapointed tone in his voice.
"Well, This problem is now smurfed." Brainy replyed. "Now we to figure out where we are, what year is it, and how can we smurf out of here." He said, and everyone agreed with him.
"Do you still have the crystals, Grandpa?" Papa said to the very old smurf.
"Still safe and smurf." Grandpa replyed, as he patted on his very long beard.
"This is going to take a very long time, and it's denfinitely not funny." Jokey moaned.
"I know, all this wondering where we are is driving me smurfy." Painter Groaned.
"And it will ruined my complexion." Vanity added, as looked at his reflection.
So one by one, all the Smurfs started to wonder. Suddenly, they heard a strange noise.
"Hey, what's that noise?" Lazy yawned, as he tries to keep himself awake.
"I don't know." Handy replyed. "But it sounds very familiar."
"Uh, whatever it is, it's getting louder." Clumsy added.
All the Smurfs looked all around trying to found out where the noise is coming from. Just then, they can feel that the ground below them is starting to shake.
"I think its a smurfquake!" Hefty shouted
"But, If it's a smurfquake," Brainy replyed. "...how come the ground's not smurfing?!" he said loudly. And all the Smurfs are starting to panic. And Baby Smurf is starting to shake in fear.
Then they heard other noise, a screeching, vibrating noise, coming in between from rails, and both noises are getting louder.
"It's getting louder!" Handy shouted
"And the ground's shaking is getting stronger!" Smurfette also shouted.
"I HATED louder nosies and strong shaky grounds!" Grouchy said loudly.
"Whoa!" Snappy and Sassette yelled, and they both fell down.
Papa came to them, and helped them up. "Are you two, ok?" He asked.
"Yes, Papa Smurf." The two smurflings said, and they hold on to Papa's waist to keep they're balance still.
Just then, Wild and Smoogle turned around, and they could see that there's something coming straight toward them and the others. They gasped, and their eyes and mouths were widen. In a panic, the two race towards the others. They jumped and wave their arms to get the others attention.
Papa was the first one to notice them. "Wild, Smoogle, what is it?!" The leader smurf asked.
And the other smurfs got they're attention too.
Both the wild smurf and mammal pointed to the object that is coming directly towards them.
The others gasped, and they can see what the object is as it comes closer and closer.
"Zous Ta Smurf!" Painter shouted. "It's... It's..."
"A GIANT RAILSMURFER!" Handy screamed. "SMURF FOR IT!"
In a heartbeat and panic mode, the Smurfs jumped
over the rail, and ran quickly as they could.
Hefty was the last one to escape. At last, while catching they're breaths, the Smurfs are all safe and sound.
"Is everysmurf here?" Papa asked, while catching his breath.
"I... I think so." Hefty said panttingly.
Suddenly, they heard someone shouting. "HELP!"
"No, I DON'T think so!" Hefty replyed panicly, and ran back to see who's left behind. Now the others are getting even more worried. The tough smurf jumped up the rail. As he peeked down, he gasped, and can see who's in trouble. "Clumsy!"
"Hefty, I'm stuck! Help me!" The clumsy smurf paniced.
Hefty could see that Clumsy's leg is stuck between a rail spike and a rail chain. In a hurry, the muscular smurf jumped down, and began to pull Clumsy. He heeved and he hooed, but Clumsy is still stuck tight, and time is running out.
Just then, as Thomas puffes down the line, he gasped. He could see that there's something on the track that he's running on. "Cinders and Ashes!" He shouted, and he blow his whistle. "[Peep! Peep!]"
Hefty and Clumsy heard Thomas' whistle, and the tough smurf is trying very hard to get his friend free, but still Clumsy is stuck very tight.
"Hurry! It's getting closer!" Handy shouted
"Oh No!" Thomas screamed, and applied his brakes.
The Smurfs can see that Thomas is getting closer and closer.
"Hurry! Hurry up! Papa yelled.
"I can't!" Hefty shouted. "Clumsy is stuck tight!"
"Oh No! Clumsy!" Brainy yelled.
"Brainy!" Clumsy yelled back.
Now the Smurfs could see that Thomas, still applying his brakes, is getting very close.
"Run!" Papa shouted, and they scrambled into some
bushed. But Brainy, still worrying about his best friend, started to run towards the tracks. But Handy reached and grab his wrist, and forced the smart smurf away from the rail.
"No, Clumsy! Hefty!" Brainy yelled to Handy.
"It's too late! They're goners!" Handy shouted.
And just hearding that is making Brainy breaking into tears. Suddenly, the screeching loud noise from Thomas' brakes grew louder, making both Brainy and Handy to cover their ears, shut their eyes, grudge their teeth, and drop down to the ground like a bunch of ragged dolls.
Clumsy and Hefty could see that they're time is up.
"Will Hefty, it's nice smurfing ya!" Clumsy said, knowing that time is up for him.
"No, not yet!" Hefty shouted. Then, with quick thinking, both he and Clumsy layed bellyed down on the wood tie, and placed his arm around him to keep him safe. "Hang on!" He said loudly.
Thomas is now getting very close. Clumsy and Hefty shut their eyes. Thomas shut his eyes as well.
"I most stop! I most stop!" The little blue tank engine said nervously. But he's getting the feeling that it might be too late, ...for them!
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(Me speaking): Oh Dear and Oh Smurfs! Will Thomas stop in time? Will Clumsy and Hefty be ok? And will Brainy and Handy lose they're best friends? You all just have to wait see what happens next, and don't panic!
Fun fact: When Handy said he use to have a railsmurfer back at the village, it was from the Season 7 episode: Locomotive Smurfs.
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posted 08-12-2007 11:07 PM
Thank you, Raven Child. What's your email address? And how can I do it? ![[Happy Smurf]](graemlins/Happy_Smurf.gif)
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Amtrak Smurf
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posted 08-13-2007 11:18 AM
Raven Child, Did you get my email?
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posted 08-13-2007 11:08 PM
Shane, Smurfy1for2, what do you two think of the chapter?
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posted 08-14-2007 10:32 AM
Pretty good ![[Cool]](cool.gif) can`t wait to see more...
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posted 08-20-2007 11:56 AM
Excellent amtraksmurf, keep it up!!
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posted 08-20-2007 12:23 PM
Thank You!
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posted 08-21-2007 05:21 PM
Hello, every smurffan! Here's the next chapter!
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posted 08-22-2007 08:58 AM
On Saturday, That is.
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