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Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-11-2012 06:46 AM:
 
Chapter one



It was a typical afternoon in the smurf village, Handy was working on the dam,Papa was working on a potion, and Greedy was baking yummy goodies. But a few smurfs were totally bored! those smurfs were Hefty Smurf,Tuffy Smurf,Tracker smurf and Jokey. "I wonder what we should do?" Tracker groaned "We could take a hike?" Tuffy suggested "Okay." the friends agreed. "Its a really nice day!" Hefty said " Yeah!" Jokey said. Meanwhile in another village. Where Smurfs and Smurfette's lived. It was a nice cozy village. The sun was bright and hot, Bloomette loved warm days! She had a lovely garden in the back of her green house. Bloomette had dirty blonde hair with light brown strikes she has a dark green hat and a purple shirt with blue jeans. Bloomette's best friend was Earthette. Earthette has short red hair some ripped shorts and a light green shirt that has a picture of earth on it. Most of the smurfs and smurfette's were at lunch that Gourmette made them. Gourmette had dark brown hair that went to her shoulders, she wore a light purple shirt with light blue pants and she had a bakers hat and an apron around her wast. "Right now I'm working on my greatest invention ever!!!" Clever smurf said to his fellow smurfs and smurfette's "Cool Clever!" Trendy Smurf said. Trendy smurf was married to Trendette. He was always looking fashionable. He always has time for others. he wheres a black tuxedo. Clever Smurf had dark blue overalls with a light blue shirt underneath, he has one son named Expert Smurfling. "I wonder where Teacher Smurfette is!" Trendette asked her friends "Probably teaching her class." Clever said "Yeah." his friends agreed. At Teacher Smurfette's class room her students were listening to the story of peter rabbit. The smurflings there were Expert Smurfling, Blushette Smurfling, Breezy Smurfling and Peppermint smurfling. "So smurflings how do you like the story?" Teacher Smurfette asked "We loved it!" the young smurfs cried! Teacher has honey colored hair that was mid-back, she had a long green skirt with a light green shirt and the letters "ABC" on it. She almost always had a smile on her face.
 
Posted by SmurfFan82874 (Member # 3926) on 05-11-2012 09:49 AM:
 
You have a good start there, Greedette! [Big Grin] Might I suggest you break your writing down into paragraphs? That would make it a bit easier to read. Good job!
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-11-2012 10:58 AM:
 
Here is a copy of it that is corrected.


It was a typical afternoon in the smurf village, Handy was working on the dam, Papa was working on a potion, and Greedy was baking yummy goodies. But a few smurfs were totally bored! Those smurfs were Hefty Smurf, Tuffy Smurf, Tracker smurf and Jokey Smurf. "I wonder what we should do." Tracker groaned "We could take a hike?" Tuffy suggested "Okay." the friends agreed. "It’s a really nice day!" Hefty said "Yeah!" Jokey said. Meanwhile in another village, where Smurfs and Smurfette's lived. It was a nice cozy village. The sun was bright and hot, Bloomette loved warm days! She had a lovely garden in the back of her green house. Bloomette had dirty blonde hair with light brown strikes she has a dark green hat and a purple shirt with blue jeans. Bloomette's best friend was Earthette. Earthette has short red hair some ripped shorts and a light green shirt that has a picture of earth on it. Most of the smurfs and smurfette's were at lunch that Gourmette made them. Gourmette had dark brown hair that went to her shoulders, she wore a light purple shirt with light blue pants and she had a baker’s hat and an apron around her waist. "Right now I'm working on my greatest invention ever!!!" Clever smurf said to his fellow smurfs and smurfette's "Cool Clever!" Trendy Smurf said. Trendy smurf was married to Trendette. He was always looking fashionable. He always has time for others. He wears a black tuxedo. Clever Smurf had dark blue overalls with a light blue shirt underneath; he has one son named Expert Smurfling. "I wonder where Teacher Smurfette is!" Trendette asked her friends "Probably teaching her class." Clever said "Yeah." his friends agreed. At Teacher Smurfette's class room her students were listening to the story of peter rabbit. The smurflings there were Expert Smurfling, Blushette Smurfling, Breezy Smurfling, and Peppermint Smurfling. "So smurflings how do you like the story?" Teacher Smurfette asked "We loved it!" the young smurfs cried! Teacher has honey colored hair that was mid-back; she had a long green skirt with a light green shirt and the letters "ABC" on it. She almost always had a smile on her face.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-11-2012 11:41 AM:
 
I corrected all of the spelling and grammatical issues, but I forgot to separate that into paragraphs for her.
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-11-2012 11:49 AM:
 
i love it so far love all the new characters and can't wait to learn more about them :-)
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-11-2012 12:54 PM:
 
Thanks
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-11-2012 01:19 PM:
 
Chapter two


Meanwhile back with Hefty,Tracker,Tuffy and Jokey. "Hey guys! Look at these footprints!" Jokey yelled to his friends. "Cool! i wonder who made them?" Hefty asked "I don't know." His friends said. "Look at this!!" Tuffy yelled. The other smurfs looked where Tuffy was pointing and they saw a red and white bow. "Hmm i wonder who was here."Tracker said "Smell it Tracker!" Jokey said "Okay." Tracker agreed. Tracker smelled the bow and said "I think the smurf went this way!" Tracker said while running "Lets go!" is friends said while taking off after him.



Meanwhile in the other village the smurflings were all in there house. " Expert!" Breezy said "Yes Breezy?" Expert said looking up from his math book "I need help with my math test." Breezy said. "Okay." Expert replied. Then the smurflings heard a knock on the door and when they answered they saw Imaginette Smurfette and Artsy Smurf ( There the parents of Peppermint) standing there. "Hi, smurflings!" Imaginette said. "Hi." the smurflings said "What brings you here?" Expert said "Well its Peppermint's birthday!" Artsy Smurf said. Peppermint smiled.
"Here's your present!" Imaginette said handing her a gift "Cool! Roller-skates!" Peppermint said. "Hey Peppermint, where's your red and white bow?" Artsy said "I think i lost it in the forest." Peppermint said. "Okay." her parents said.

In Gourmette's kitchen she was making smurfberry salad for the adults and Pasta for the smurflings. "Ah le disque dur étant un chef !(translation: Ah its hard being a chef!)". Then she rang the dinner bell and everybody came running in.
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-11-2012 05:41 PM:
 
ooohh yum pasta and i wonder if Expert is going to be the Brainy Smurf of that village?
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-11-2012 05:44 PM:
 
Yeah, this story is getting very good! [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 08:33 AM:
 
Chapter three

"Are we almost there?" Jokey groaned as they were running though the forest "Yes, we just need to turn at that oak tree, then i think we go under that bush." Tracker said "Okay." his friends said. After the smurfs climbed under the bush they saw a big wall with green ivy allover it. "Wow! How are we going to climb it!" Tuffy exclaimed "Yeah!" Hefty and Jokey said starring up at the large wall. Then the smurfs heard some laughing and talking on the other side! "Um is anybody over there!" Hefty yelled.

Meanwhile on the other side the smurfs and smurfette's were all eating there lunch that Gourmette made them. "Hey! Did you guys hear something?" Clever asked Trendy "Yeah!" Trendy said. "Weird!" Bloomette and Earthette said at the same time. Then the smurf and smurfette' heard a voice coming from the other side of the wall (again!) "Ah what was that!" Gourmette screamed "I'll go take a look." Clever said. "I'll go to." Mendette Smurfette said. The two smurfs went over the wall quietly "Wow who are they!" Mendette whispered to Clever. "Who knows?" Clever said.

"Do you think they heard us?" Tuffy asked Hefty "I don't know." Hefty said "Hey! i heard something!" Tracker said "What did it sound like?" Jokey asked looking around "It sounded like someone whispering." Tracker said "Lets look around then!" Tuffy said "Okay." his friends said. Then the smurfs split up to search the place.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-12-2012 08:49 AM:
 
Ooh, kinda a cliffhanger if you ask me. You are doing very well with the paragraphs Greedette. I am loving this so far. [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 08:51 AM:
 
Oooh thanks so much!
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 09:00 AM:
 
I'll write more in awhile.
 
Posted by Sportette (Member # 4102) on 05-12-2012 09:01 AM:
 
Nice [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 01:55 PM:
 
Thanks
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-12-2012 01:58 PM:
 
No Problem [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 05:13 PM:
 
Here's a picture of Gourmette.

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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-12-2012 05:17 PM:
 
Nice! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-12-2012 05:21 PM:
 
Thanks Jokie!!!
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-12-2012 05:31 PM:
 
No Problem. [Wink]
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-12-2012 07:47 PM:
 
GREAT picture she looks smurftastic :-D
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-13-2012 10:33 AM:
 
Thanks Nurturer Smurf
 
Posted by Sportette (Member # 4102) on 05-13-2012 11:15 AM:
 
Cool
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-13-2012 03:58 PM:
 
Chapter four


"Hey who are you two?" Tuffy asked to smurfs "Uh I'm-" "Did you find something?" Hefty called "Yeah, i found to smurfs hiding!" Tuffy called back. And when he looked at the smurfs he saw one smurf with dark blue overalls, and a light blue shirt underneath. And the girl with him had bleach blonde hair that was in a ponytail and a pink skirt with a purple shirt. She had pins in her hat just like Tailor. Then Hefty,Tracker and Jokey ran over. "Hey who you two?" Jokey asked "I-I I'm Mendette." The smurfette said nervously, "I am Clever Smurf." The smurf in the overalls said. "I'm Hefty, and these are Tuffy,Tracker, and Jokey." Hefty said.


"How did you find the village?" Mendette asked them, "I found a red and white bow and Tracker smelled it and found this big wall." The smurf who called himself Hefty said. Clever was being quiet, then he spoke. "Maybe we could meet at the big oak tree tonight at midnight." Clever said, "Okay." the smurfs replied. Then the three smurfs left. "They seem nice." Mendette said smiling at Clever "Yeah." Clever said winking at his friend. Then they hurried back into the village. "Was something over there?" Trendette asked "Uh no....." Mendette said. "Okay." Trendette said.
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-13-2012 04:51 PM:
 
[Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-14-2012 08:23 AM:
 
Chapter five

"Its almost midnight." Hefty told his other friends. Then the smurfs heard the door opening and they saw Greedy,Handy, Tailor and Painter. "Where are you guys going?" Tailor asked Hefty,Tuffy,Jokey and Tracker. "Uh were going to meet a few friends..." Tuffy said "A few friends???" Greedy said "When did you meet them??" Painter said in his french ascent. "We met them in the forest." Jokey said "Lets go." Tracker said "Can we go?" the other smurfs asked. "Sure." Hefty said. "Now lets go!" Handy said running towards the door. Then the smurfs ran into the forest and when they reached the great oak they saw to dark figures waving.

"Hi smurfs!" Mendette Smurfette called in her sweet voice "Yeah, whats up?" Clever Smurf asked. "Oh nothing." Tracker said "Who are those other smurfs with you?" Mendette asked pointing at Greedy,Handy, Tailor and Painter. "Oh those are are friends." Jokey added "Cool." Clever said. "Where do you guys live?" Greedy asked Mendette and Clever "We prefer not to say." Clever said. "Oui, okay." Painter said. Mendette smiled and said "I can't tell you where it is because my friends would be terrified." "Okay." The smurfs said. "What do you guys like doing?" Tailor said "I like engineering." Clever said "And i like sewing." Mendette said smiling "Cool i like sewing too!" Tailor said. "Nice." Mendette said. "Can you name the smurfs in you village?" Tuffy asked Clever "Okay, there's Bloomette,Earthette,Gourmette,Artsy,Imaginette,
Peppermint,Breezy,Expert,Blushette,Trendette, Trendy,and Teacher smurfette." Clever said "Well that's most of them." Mendette added. "Cool." The smurfs said "Thanks." The two smurfs said. "We have to go." the smurfs said. "Okay, wanna meet here tomorrow in the afternoon?" Hefty asked "Sure." Mendette said "Bye!" Clever yelled.
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-15-2012 06:47 AM:
 
Chapter six

"Do you think we should tell Papa about Clever And Mendette?" Painter said as the smurfs were picking the ripe smurfberries. "Hmm... i don't know." Hefty said "Me either." Jokey said "Dunno!" Tuffy added "I think we should." Handy said "Okay, His friends agreed. Then Handy ran off to tell Papa about the smurfs! "Lets follow him!" Hefty said while taking after his friend "Okay." the others agreed then they ran in Papa's house. "Hello." Papa said "Hi." Hefty and Greedy said "Handy told me about Clever and Mendette, i would like to see them." Papa said "Okay, you can meet them right now. We just need to go to the great oak." Hefty said "Lets go." Papa said running behind the smurfs.

"Thanks for the lunch Gourmette!" Trendette said politely. "Merci de sucre!" Gourmette said, "Huh?" Trendette said "She said "Thanks sugar!"." Expert Smurfling said "Oui." Gourmette said. Clever and Mendette excused themselves, and left the village to go see the smurfs. "Hi, Hefty!" Clever said. "Hey Clever." "Hello, nice to meet you." An smurf in a red suit and white beard said smiling "Hello." Mendette said sweetly "This is Papa smurf." Tracker said while pointing at the smurf in red. "Well hello papa smurf." Clever said shaking hands with papa.
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-15-2012 11:11 AM:
 
now most everyone has met them :-D
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-15-2012 12:05 PM:
 
Yep!
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-15-2012 12:58 PM:
 
Chapter seven

In the other village Expert was staring out the window watching the other smurflings play smurfball. He was studding for a math test. "Hi Expert!" Ginger Smurfling said while running over to him. "Hi Ginger..." Expert said "Whats wrong Expert?" Ginger said. "Ginger is so pretty! her eyes look like violets!" he thought to himself. "Nothings wrong.." he said "Okay.." Ginger said. Then she ran back outside and stared playing smurfball! " Okay 12 divided by 60 = 0.2." Expert said to himself.

"Hello, Papa smurf." Mendette said. "Hello." Papa said "Can i see your village?" Papa asked
"Well... i... um.. uh....... I guess so?" Clever said "Okay, great!" Papa said "Follow me!" Mendette said while running "Okay." All the smurfs said while running after her. "How will we get up the wall?" Papa asked Clever "Its a secret!" Clever said "Ok." Papa said. Then Clever pushed some of the bricks in the wall in and then a small passage was opened. "Come on!" Mendette said while climbing though the passage. "Wow!" all the smurfs said when they saw the village! But when the smurfs looked around they saw every-smurf was starring at them like they were crazy! "Ah! Who are you!!!!!!!!!!!" Trendette screamed. "Qui êtes-vous?!" Gourmette yelled. Then Expert ran to see what was wrong!
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-15-2012 12:59 PM:
 
Here's a picture of Ginger and Expert

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Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-15-2012 02:58 PM:
 
Chapter Eight

"Who are they Daddy?" Expert asked Clever "There my friends." Clever said "When did you meet them!" Earthette shrieked "We met them two days ago. And there really nice!" Mendette said calmly "He kinda looks like me." Ginger whispered to Expert. "Yeah." Expert whispered back. "Bonjour, pourrais-je demander quel est votre nom? Oh, et mon nom est Gourmette." Gourmette said, "Huh?" the smurfs said. "She was talking in french, so in English she said " Hello, might i ask what your name is? Oh and my name is Gourmette". " "oui." Gourmette said. A smurf in a beret and red jacket smiled.

"Nice to meet you all!" Papa said "Nice to meet you to." A girl with black wavy hair said. "These are the smurflings, There names are Peppermint,Ginger,Expert,Breezy and Blushette. A smurfette in a long green skirt and honey colored hair said. "Hi, my name's Doctor Smurfette. This is my twin, Medical Smurfette." A smurfette named Doctor said, "And this is Gourmette. And This is Cranky Smurf." Medical Smurfette said. "Nice!" Greedy said "Whatever!" Cranky Smurf said frowning, "Don't be such a sourpuss!" said a Smurfette with brown hair and a purple dress. "Oh, Hi my name's Greedette." The girl named Greedette said smiling "Hello." Hefty said "Hmm i think i have seen her somewhere!" Hefty though to himself.
 
Posted by Sportette (Member # 4102) on 05-15-2012 03:24 PM:
 
Cool
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-16-2012 08:43 AM:
 
Chapter Nine

"When will Mother return?" Trendette asked Bloomette "I think she'll be here soon. Very soon." Bloomette said. "She'll be here any moment now." Medical said "Who's Mother smurfette?" Hefty said, "Oh, she's the wisest in the village. She was away for awhile." Clever said winking at Hefty, "Cool." Tracker said. "Want me to name all the smurfs here?" Mendette said. "Sure." Papa said smiling. "Okay. There's, Gourmette,Trendette,Hypnotize,Trendy,Mother, Clever,Expert,Medical,Doctor,Genie, Ginger,Peppermint,Breezy,Enchanter, and Blushette." Mendette said "Wow! you have good memory!" Tailor said, "Aw thanks Tailor." Mendette replied. "Here comes Mother!" Hypnotize Smurf said while running over. The smurfs saw a smurfette with a purple dress and whitish/Greyish hair. She looked about 500 years old, she had a sweet smile on face when she saw the smurfs. "Why, Hello." Mother Smurfette said "Hello." The smurfs said. "I see you have met my little smurfs and smurfettes." Mother said. "Yeah, we came across the wall and then we found Mendette and Clever." Tuffy explained. "Hmm, i see." Mother said in a calm tone.

"I love your village. " Papa smurf said as he shook hands with Mother, "So, is your name Papa smurf?" A smurf with dark blue pants with stars on them said. "Yes." Papa said. "Cool, my names Enchanter!" Enchanter said.
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-16-2012 08:45 AM:
 
Here's a picture of Mother.

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Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-16-2012 09:56 AM:
 
[Sassette Smurfling]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-16-2012 09:57 AM:
 
That's cool Greedette. [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-16-2012 09:59 AM:
 
Thanks.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-16-2012 11:34 AM:
 
No Prob. [Wink]
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-16-2012 11:37 AM:
 
this is smurftastic Greedette and i absosmurfly love your artwork!
 
Posted by Greedette (Member # 4086) on 05-16-2012 11:47 AM:
 
Aw thanks Nurturer
 
Posted by Greedette smurf (Member # 4086) on 05-17-2012 08:09 AM:
 
Chapter Ten

"Hello, Enchanter." Papa said smiling. "Its almost lunch." Mother said, "Okay." Papa said, "Gourmette can make us lunch." she said.

"Are you smurfs hungry?" Mother said, "I am!!!" Greedy said, "Okay!" Gourmette said while running to her kitchen. A few minutes later Gourmette was existing her kitchen with platters of hot food. "Yum!" All the smurfs and smurfette's said when they had there food was delivered. "Yummy! Thanks Gourmette." Medical Smurfette said, "Aw merci." Gourmette said smiling. "She said "Aw thanks"." Expert smurfling said, "Wow! I'm impressed!! " Clever said to his son , " I learned French,Chinese,Greek, and Latin last summer." Expert said. "Wow!" Greedy said. "Bye, I'm going with Tuffy and Hefty to see the village!" Expert said running off.

"Hey Expert." Tuffy said, "Hey Tuffy." Expert replied, "Okay, right past those bushes is are village." Hefty said pointing to a clump of bushes. Expert jumped over the bushes and saw lots smurfs! "Wow! this awesome!" Expert said. "Hey look theirs other smurflings!" Expert said running over to Nat,Slouchy,Snappy, and Sassette. "Hello, who are you?" Expert said, "I'm Sassette!" the young smurfette with red hair said, "I'm Slouchy. And this is Nat and Snappy." the smurfling in a red shirt said, "My name is Expert! " Expert said smiling, "Cool." The other smurflings said, "You remind me of my friend Peppermint." Expert said to sassette. "Cool [Sassette Smurfling] " Sassette said smiling.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-17-2012 08:35 AM:
 
Ooh! Expert will enjoy hanging out with the other smurflings. I wonder if after he is introduced to all of the smurflings in that village, if he'll bring the other smurflings from the new smurf village they found.

So far this story is very smurfy! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurf (Member # 4086) on 05-17-2012 10:11 AM:
 
Aw thanks [Smurfette]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-17-2012 10:17 AM:
 
No Problem. [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-20-2012 10:13 AM:
 
Sorry i have not been writing more. [Frown] i have been really busy! I'll try to write more later.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-20-2012 03:00 PM:
 
Okay. [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-20-2012 04:01 PM:
 
Chapter Eleven

The smurflings heard footsteps so they turned around and saw all the smurfs in the other village. "Hey Expert are these smurfs friends?" Snappy asked, "Yeah.Want me to to tell you guys all my friends names?" Expert said. "Smurfaroo! Would we ever!" Sassette said smiling, "Okay, There's Gourmette,Hypnotize,Fiercette,Ginger,Breezy,
Enchanter,Mother,Bloomette,Earthette, Peppermint, Blushette, Clever,Trendy,Trendette, Cranky, and Brunette." Expert said, "Wow! They sound nice." Slouchy said, "Yeah they sound smurfy!" Nat said, "Thanks! My best friend is Ginger." Expert said, "Bouncing bullfrogs! Can we meet her!" Sassette squealed. "Sure! She's over there." Expert said. Then all the smurflings met Ginger,Breezy,Peppermint, and Blushette. "Ginger! i love your outfit!" Sassette said,
"Awww thanks!" Ginger said.

"Where's Fiercette?" Brunette said looking around, "She's over there." Hypnotize Smurf said pointing. "Okay." Brunette said running off. "Hey! Fiercette!" Brunette said "Uh, hi." Fiercette said, "I was wondering if you were going to the big party tonight!" Brunette said happily, "I might go. And i don't have any fancy clothes i could wear to a party!" Fiercette said looking down at her grey jumpsuit. "Oh. I'm sure i could lend you a dress or something." Brunette said smiling. "Okay." Fiercette mumbled
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-20-2012 06:13 PM:
 
Very cool! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-20-2012 07:03 PM:
 
Here's Fiercette!

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Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-21-2012 07:46 AM:
 
i like Fiercette already :-D
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-21-2012 08:34 AM:
 
Awww Thanks! [Smile]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-21-2012 09:08 AM:
 
That picture is smurfy Greedette! But I think my favorite character will still be Expert, since he's a fellow know-it-all. (Which we have a lot of in my family)
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-21-2012 09:25 AM:
 
Chapter Twelve

"Uh!" Brunette exclaimed when she looked out window, "Whats wrong?" Hefty asked, "Its to rainy to have the party!" Brunette said frowning, "Its okay." Hefty said soothingly "Thanks Hefty." Brunette said, " No problem!" Hefty said winking at Brunette.

"Oh great! Its raining! Now i can't go for my walk." Fiercette said to herself. "Hey! Fiercette!" Tuffy said entering her room, "Haven't you learned to knock?" Fiercette said to Tuffy, "Sorry." Tuffy said, "Okay what do you want?" Fiercette said "I was wondering if you want to go play truth or dare." Tuffy asked "Sorry, no thanks." Fiercette said "Okay." Tuffy said while putting his raincoat on.

"Ah i hate the rain!" Snappy said stomping his foot, "Calm down there's lots of games you can play while its raining outside!" Teacher said "Like what?" Nat asked "Well we could play charades!" Teacher said, "Yay!" Snappy said, "Smurfaroo!" Sassette said, "Okay i'll go first!" Ginger said. Ginger started putting on a frown and crossing her arms. "Grouchy smurf?" Slouchy guessed "Correct!" Ginger said.
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-21-2012 11:24 AM:
 
Here's a picture of Fiercette and one of her friends Tuffy.

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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-21-2012 12:25 PM:
 
Cute! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-21-2012 12:27 PM:
 
Thanks Jokie! [Smurfette]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-21-2012 12:40 PM:
 
No Problemo! [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-21-2012 04:40 PM:
 
Chapter Thirteen

"Where are you going Fiercette?" Hefty asked Fiercette, "I'm going on a walk. It just stopped raining." she said, "Okay, have fun." Hefty said. "Uh.. thanks????" Fiercette said walking out the door. "I wonder why she's always cranky?" Hefty thought to himself. Then hefty ran out his house to see if any smurf needed assistance. "Hey Handy need any help?" Hefty asked his friend, "Sure Hefty. Can you bring that board over there please." Handy told Hefty, "Okay!" Hefty said.

As Fiercette was walking though the forest she did not notice Gargamel was following! "Ahh!" Fiercette said, for she did not expect someone was following her. Gargamel; picked her up. "Let me go!" Fiercette screamed, "I'll let you go right into my stew pot!" Gargamel laughed.

"Ooh i love that game!" Ginger said, "Me too!" The smurflings agreed, "I'm glad you liked the game! I need to go." Teacher said, "Okay see yeah!" Snappy said. "I like her." Sassette said, "Yeah." the other smurflings said. "Have you guys met Fiercette?" Ginger asked, "No." The others said, "She's kinda cranky." Ginger said, "Is she nice?" Slouchy asked, "Yes! She's pretty and kind but she's very strong and tough!" Ginger said. "Ooh cool!" Nat said.
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-22-2012 08:45 AM:
 
i'll bet Fiercette could take on Gargamel all by herself :-D
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-22-2012 08:50 AM:
 
Yeah! Gargy won't be able to get away with putting Fiercette under the fire! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-22-2012 09:17 AM:
 
I just drew Fiercette,Brunette,Enchanter and Trendette.

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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-22-2012 01:28 PM:
 
Ooh Greedette! That is really pretty! [Big Grin]

I was wondering if you could draw Expert next? Or maybe Clever! [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-23-2012 11:55 AM:
 
(I am going to try to make these chapters longer)

Chapter Fourteen


"Hmm. I would have preferred more than one smurf, but you'll have to do." Gargamel said,
"Uh!" Fiercette said in frustration.

Right now Gargamel was boiling the water, while Fiercette was trapped in a cage.
"How can i get out?" Fiercette thought to herself. Fiercette just sat there, she was freezing!

"Time for dinner Azriel!" Gargamel said with a evil smile. Gargamel opened the cage to put her in the boiling water, but then she kicked him in the nose and jumped out the window! "Get her Azriel!" Gargamel shouted.

Fiercette ran for in seemed like miles! "Few! I'm tired!" She said. Fiercette was looking behind herself every so often to make sure Gargamel wasn't coming. Fiercette got up and tried to remember where the smurfs village was. "Was it left or right?" Fiercette said confusedly. Then she heard footsteps! Her heart was beating! "Is it Gargamel!" she thought. She turned around and saw Tuffy and Handy. "Hey Fiercette!" Tuffy called, "I'm freezing! Thanks for finding me!!" Fiercette said, "We can talk later lets get you home." Handy said. "Okay." Fiercette said.


"I like your dolls name." Blushette said to Sassette, "Thanks!" Sassette said.
"My dolls name is Lacy!." Peppermint said, "Cool!" Blushette said! "Maybe we could play that Smurfy Loo is the Teacher and Lacy and Ruby could be the students." Sassette said.
"Okay, that's an great idea!" Peppermint said,
"Aww thanks!" Sassette said,
"Okay students time for school!" Sassette said making Smurfy Loo look like she was talking. "Okay." Peppermint said while moving Lacy.
"Can we do math first?" Blushette said while making Ruby look like she was talking.

"Good! You found Fiercette!" Mother Smurf said. "Gargamel caught me but i escaped!" Fiercette said, "How did you escape?" Brunette said,
"I kicked him." Fiercette said, "Wow! Cool." Tuffy said, "Uh thanks." Fiercette said, "Fiercette you must me tired, you should get some rest." Mother said. "Okay." Fiercette said while running to her house. Fiercette jumped on her bed. She was so tired she just fell asleep!

"Time for bed no more reading!" Mother said to the smurflings, "Okay." Breezy said. After Mother left Expert picked up his book and read with an flashlight. "What are you reading?" Peppermint asked, "Harry Smurfer and the goblet of fire!" Expert said, "Ooh cool!" Peppermint said, "Yeah, i love that book!" Slouchy said, "Yep." Expert said. Then Mother came in. "I thought i said no reading."
"Sorry!" Expert said looking guilty. "Goodnight Mother smurfette!" Nat said. "Good night!" Sassette said.
"I guess i'll stop reading." Expert said. "Yeah." the other smurflings said.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-23-2012 12:12 PM:
 
Lol! Expert seems more and more like me by the chapter! [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-23-2012 01:21 PM:
 
Lol! [Big Grin]

Oh and here's Clever and Expert (Requested by Jokie Smurf)

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Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 05-23-2012 01:30 PM:
 
Ooooh, awesome, and I just love the pictures, also Greedette, could you please draw me your avatar, but instead of brown hair, Smurfette blonde?
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-23-2012 06:13 PM:
 
Okay Smurfette
 
Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 05-23-2012 10:58 PM:
 
Oooh, this will be smurfy! Thanks Greedette, and I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-24-2012 07:30 AM:
 
Aww thanks smurfette!

Oh and here's the picture [Wink]

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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 05-24-2012 09:01 AM:
 
Gosh Greedette! That is so smurftastic! Smurfette will LOVE it! [Smile] [Happy Smurf]
 
Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 05-24-2012 02:26 PM:
 
Thanks very very much Greedette!!!!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-24-2012 06:14 PM:
 
Your welcome!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-24-2012 07:29 PM:
 
Chapter Fifteen

"Hi, Smurfette!" Bloomette said, "Hello." Smurfette replied, "Would you like to see my garden?" Bloomette asked kindly. "Sure, Bloomette." Smurfette said. Then the two smurfettes walked over to Bloomette's house. "Wow! your garden is magnificent!" Smurfette cooed, "Thanks." Bloomette said.

Bloomette had Carnation's,Calla Lilies, roses,Sunflowers, and Amaryllis's. The flowers were at full bloom. The flowers were the colors of the rainbow.

"Your flowers are lovely!" Smurfette said smiling. "Your so sweet!" Bloomette said.

"Mother, can we please go on a walk alone!" Breezy begged, "Yeah." Peppermint said. "Fine. But be careful!" Mother said. "Yay!" All the smurflings cheered.

"Ooh, its hot!" Nat Smurfling said, "Yeah!" Blushette said. "Hey guys! maybe we could sneak into Lord Balthazar's house." Breezy said. "Hmm. Sounds dangerous!" Slouchy said, "Come one! We would be the first smurflings to do it!" Breezy said, "I don't like it. But okay lets go." Expert said nervously. "There's his castle!" Blushette said while staring up at the scary castle. "Okay lets go though one of those windows up there." Snappy said, "But.. there so high!" Expert said, "We could get one smurfling up there and then we would toss him a rope." Peppermint suggested, "Okay." the others said. Breezy picked up Blushette and threw her to the window. "Ah!!!!!!" Blushette screamed. "Okay here's the rope." Expert said. Blushette tied the rope to a chair she saw. Then the smurflings climbed one at a time up the rope.

"Are those smurfs?" Balthazar said. He got up and ran towards the smurfs. "Ah! i told you this was a bad idea!" one of the smurfs said. "You'll never get away!" Balthazar said with an evil smile. Then a smurf tripped him. "Ouch!" Balthazar said. "He he see yeah!" the smurfs said while climbing back down. "Oh! i hate those smurfs!" Balthazar said stomping his foot.
 
Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 05-25-2012 03:06 AM:
 
*gasp* This is Amazing Greedette!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-25-2012 06:52 AM:
 
Thanks!
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 05-25-2012 08:46 AM:
 
hahaha the smurfs tripped mean rotten old Balthazar! :-D love it!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 05-25-2012 09:41 AM:
 
Thanks Nurturer Smurf
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-04-2012 10:21 AM:
 
Chapter Sixteen

"Hi Tuffy!" Fiercette said as though she really liked me. "Uh.. Hey Fiercette," I said, "I did not know you were coming." I added on. "Oh! I was just coming to say goodbye." she said looking like she was too burst in tears. "Goodbye?!" I said!
"Yeah, you know how I always wanted to be a hunter." She said, "Uh yeah?" I said. "Well I got invited to a camp were they will take me on adventures." Fiercette said. "I could go." I said, "Oh! No! You can't. Its girls only." She said while wiping off one tear that was streaming down her face. "Oh. When will we see each other?" I asked wonderingly, "I get a break next week." She said. I could not help but stare at her misty blue eyes. "Okay, um.. See you then???" I said. "Okay." She said. Fiercette got up hugged me then ran out the door.
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"Smurflings you are punished for a month!"
I said,
"But, but!" Breezy pleaded, "No buts! You should have known better my little smurflings." I said in a harsh tone.
"I-i-I'm Sorry Papa!" Expert said while crying.

"Go to your bunkhouse."
I said to the smurflings.
"Yes Pappy."
Two young girls by the name of Sassette and Peppermint said.

When they got to the bunkhouse they walked in
and plopped themselves in there beds and talked about there adventure.
"We should have known better."
Slouchy said,
"Yes." Blushette said,
"I should've told you guys not to go."
Expert said.
"Its alright."
The other smurflings said.

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"Hi, Bittersweet!" I said to my friend,
"Ooh hey Fiercette." She replied, "Its almost time for dinner." I said, "Okay." Bittersweet said. "Here comes Counselor Strictette!" I whispered, "Yeah." She replied. "Hello girls, are you going to dinner?" Counselor Strictette asked. "Yes." We both said, "Okay." Counselor Strictette said.
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-04-2012 01:50 PM:
 
I just drew what Fiercette looked like at camp.
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Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 06-04-2012 02:53 PM:
 
How very sweet!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-04-2012 05:44 PM:
 
Thanks
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 06-04-2012 08:33 PM:
 
a camp to become a hunter??? that was a great idea Greedette :-D having to be apart will make the time they get to spend together all the sweeter anyway :-D
 
Posted by Nurturer Smurf (Member # 4050) on 06-04-2012 08:35 PM:
 
Smurfette i love your avatar and your signature :-D
 
Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 06-04-2012 09:20 PM:
 
Lol, thank you!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-05-2012 08:10 AM:
 
Thanks Nurturer!
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-05-2012 10:34 AM:
 
That's a smurfy picture Greedette! I bet Fiercette will be the best hunter!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-05-2012 01:33 PM:
 
I think Fiercette will be the best hunter too! But Bittersweet is close behind her! [Wink]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-05-2012 01:47 PM:
 
Yeah.
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-07-2012 08:47 AM:
 
Chapter Seventeen

"Okay! Girls! listen up!!" Strictette yelled. "Yes?" All the smurfettes said. "Today is the first day we are going on a hunt." Strictette said.
"Uh excuse me?" My friend Bittersweet said.
"Yes, Bittersweet?" Strictette said, "What are we going to be hunting?" Bittersweet asked, "Well, we do not know. But there are always animals in the forest we can hunt." Strictette said.
"Yes, Strictette." I said.
"Okay, I will let you all choose a partner."
"Fiercette can you be my partner?" Bittersweet asked, "Of coarse!" I said.
"Have you all chosen a partner???" Strictette said. "Yes." Everybody said. "Then let us all go to the forest." Strictette said.

In the forest the groups all went in different directions.
**
It had been a few hours and
and Bittersweet and I had been in forest but we had not found anything to hunt!
***
"Hey! Fiercette did you hear that?" Bittersweet said, "Hear what?" I said, "I think a heard evil laughter!" Bittersweet said. "Lets go check it out!" I said. We both walked closer to sound.

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"Ah-ah-ahchoo!" I sneezed.
"It looks like you need to have a doctor's appointment Sickly!" Handy said, "I'll go to Medical Smurfette's office." I said. "Okay." Handy said while starting to work on the dam again.

"Hello Sickly! What brings you here?" Medical Smurfette said.
"My throat hurts." I said.
"Okay. Lets do a quick checkup." Medical said smiling. "Can you please follow me." Medical smurfette said while leading me into a room.

"Open wide please." She said.
I opened my mouth.
"Thank you! Now you can close your mouth." She said,

"What is the next test?" I asked. "I will check your heartbeat." She answered. She got her stethoscope out to check my heartbeat.
"Okay I'm done. Wait here. I need to go record my results." She said while walking out of the room.


A few minutes later she came back.
"Your results show that you only have a slight cold." She said, "Okay." I said. "Have a good day!
" she said to me.
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-07-2012 10:03 AM:
 
Here's a Picture Of Medical Smurfette and Doctor Smurfette.

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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-07-2012 10:21 AM:
 
Those are nice Greedette! [Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-07-2012 05:44 PM:
 
Thanks [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-07-2012 06:14 PM:
 
NP [Wink]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-09-2012 08:19 AM:
 
Chapter Eighteen

"Look!" Bittersweet whispered, "Oh! my smurf!" I said quietly. I saw an dragon! it looked as though it was asleep. I studied it more closely.
"Should we fight it?" I asked. "It would be dangerous! But i think we should!" Bittersweet said. I looked at the dragons fangs again and a shiver went though my spine. "Are you sure? [Eek!] " I said, "Yes! [Roll Eyes] " she whispered. We crawled out of are hiding spot and tip toed a little closer to the dragon. I got out my spear and Bittersweet took out her sword. "I'll distract it while you go stab it from behind." Bittersweet said.
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Bittersweet walked over and poked the dragon with her sword. The dragon's eyes flickered open. [Mad] The eyes were bright red and it looked angry! The dragon growled. I grabbed my spear and stabbed the dragon's back. It seemed surprised. It growled then fell to the ground.
"Great job!" Bittersweet said, "You were awesome!" I said. "Lets go back to camp." I said, "No, you go get Strictette i'll wait here with the dragon." Bittersweet said, "Okay." I said then i ran off.
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"Tuffy!" Brunette said. I frowned.
"What is it?" I said. Brunette blushed, "Um the hunting camp that Fiercette joined is visiting soon." Brunette said. "Okay, i'll get ready." I said. "Uh okay." She said then ran out of my house.
"Yippee!" I was so excited!
I haven't seen Fiercette in forever!
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"You killed a dragon!" Strictette said, "Yes." I said, "Dragons are dangerous and very,very hard to kill! If you are telling the truth, you and Bittersweet are turning out to be exquisite hunters." Strictette said looking impressed. "Can you take me too the dragon?" She asked. "Of coarse!" I said.
I showed her where the dragon was.
"Bittersweet,Fiercette! You both are extraordinary hunters!" Strictette said, "Thank you." Bittersweet and I both said. "We don't have much time. We need to go visit Fiercette's friend's village." Strictette said already heading towards camp.
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-09-2012 08:29 AM:
 
Ooh! They took on a dragon that fast? They really are extraordinary hunters!
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-09-2012 10:57 AM:
 
[Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-09-2012 02:11 PM:
 
Here's the dragon they fought. Hmm it doesn't look like its dead! I guess it was just knocked out? [Eek!]


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Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-09-2012 02:13 PM:
 
Hey! What happened to the dragon picture I sent you?! You remember, this one:

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Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-09-2012 02:24 PM:
 
I changed it [Smile]
 
Posted by Jokie Smurf (Member # 4119) on 06-09-2012 03:06 PM:
 
Well, I think yours is cute and mine is fierce.
 
Posted by Smurfette (Member # 4140) on 06-09-2012 03:08 PM:
 
[Smile]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-28-2012 12:02 PM:
 
[Smile] [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-28-2012 12:05 PM:
 
Chapter Nineteen

"Bittersweet, hurry up!" Fiercette said. "Um.. I'll catch up later." I said. "Okay, but be quick." Fiercette. After Fiercette was gone I ran over to the dragon. "I know your not dead. I wonder if I can train you." I thought. I walked over and placed my hand on the dragons chest. I heard the heart beating so it must be alive! I nudged it. It lifted its head. "I'm not going to hurt you!" I said calmly. The dragon looked confused. It seemed to be thinking "This is new for me... Most snacks runaway". "You need a name! How about Cayenne-pepper. Pepper for short!" I said. Pepper seemed to be thinking. Then it nodded its head. "Cool!" I said. Then I climbed on her back. "Take me too The Smurf village!" I said. Pepper shot upward and started flying.

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"Hi Tuffy." Fiercette said. "Fiercette!" I said. "Whats been up?" I asked, "I learned how to use a spear, how to shoot with a gun, and I killed a dragon... Not much really." Fiercette said with a big grin. "YOU KILLED A DRAGON!" Hefty said looking surprised. "Girls should not kill dragons!" Hefty said. "Wanna bet!" Fiercette said looking like she was about to attack.
"What in the smurf??????" I said while staring up. "What is it-" Fiercette while looking up. "Um... I thought I killed that dragon??" Fiercette said looking confused. The dragon landed. "Hi guys!" Bittersweet said. "How-when-why???" Fiercette said. "Who's that?" Papa said. "I'm Bittersweet. And this is Cayenne Pepper!" Bittersweet said like its normal to have a dragon. "Wow!" Brainy said. I didn't know he was saying wow about Bittersweet or Cayenne Pepper. Brainy walked over too Bittersweet. "Hello, my name is Brainy Smurf." Brainy said. "Um... Ok?" Bittersweet said while walking away. Brainy looked heartbroken. "I thought that dragon was dead." Fiercette said. "Well I just wanted to check it out and I found out she was sweet. So I trained it." Bittersweet replied.

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Brainy sighed then walked in his house. "She was beautiful!" I thought to myself. I heard the door open. It was the wind. I walked over the window and saw the hunters playing smurf-ball with the other smurfs. "I wonder what the hunters names are...." I thought. "Hmm Would you like to know their names?" A girls voice said from behind me. "W-who are you?" I said looking startled. The smurfette smiled "My name Is Fortunette my nick-name's Gypsy Smurfette I can read-minds, and tell the future." Gypsy said. Gypsy Smurfette was beautiful her eyes seemed to change colors. She had jewel necklaces and bracelets. "Um sure what are their names?" I asked. "I don't which is which but I know all the names. Bittersweet,Fiercette, Hunter Smurf,Huntette, Strictette,Bravery Smurf,Strengthette and Winner Smurf." Gypsy said. "Wow!" I said, "I see you like Bittersweet?" Gypsy said, "Don't read-minds! Its creepy!" I said. "Hmm But its my job." Gypsy said. "Who are you married too?" I asked,
"Ah. You will find out." Gypsy said. "Wait-" I said. Gypsy vanished. "That was weird...." I said.


THIS IS THE END OF THE BOOK!!!!!!!!!I WILL START WRITING A NEW ONE CALLED "A QUEST TO SAVE A HUNTER."
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-28-2012 01:40 PM:
 
[Smile]
 
Posted by Stormy Smurf (Member # 4050) on 06-28-2012 02:51 PM:
 
ooohh i LOVE Pepper! :-D
 
Posted by Greedette smurfette (Member # 4086) on 06-28-2012 03:26 PM:
 
Thanks!
 


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