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Sportette
Bakette
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Icon 3 posted 09-29-2012 09:55 AM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
Okay well chapter 1:


The skyis a dull gray no sun no life no fun. Thesmurf village Ida mess everyone locked up underground. Murderer terrerizes everyone just by a glare. Everyone has a guardian angel usually an ancestor. Twins have one together their mother who murderer killed in just a swift motion.
Watching above over her now grown up children plotting to run away and defeat him. Hefty is also long gone he went crazy after sportette was killed murderer put him in a facility that he could never get out of. He almost killed himself then murderer, brainy,reader,and even smurfette. Mentally disoriented.
Two months after violet and positives father was killed they ran away. Through the forest past gargamels old hovel now just one left in the dust. They reached their destination for the time on their way to sacrewris (pronounced sac-raw-is) mountain for the poacat. To return their family and bring balance back to the village.
"this is as far as we can go any further and we'll get caught in a heavy rainfall" violet said unpacking with her usual frown. Positive always tried thinking on the good side.
"well we won't get wet here, ya I have nothing positive to say right now." she said kicking the dust.
"ya it's hard right now but it will get better we can get mom and dad back" violet said. There is a brief silence then violet says "i heard that our moms name was sportette and that she was the strongest in the village that she defeated most problems she faced and she killed murderers cousin and we knew dad so I don't have to tell about him"
Depressing time the set up a fire. Cook some food. Then they go to bed waiting to move on in the morning sleeping under the stars.


Okay all done don't know when next chapter will be posted bye bye for now [Big Grin]

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
Sportette
Bakette
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Icon 1 posted 09-29-2012 07:17 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
How was it

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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Icon 1 posted 09-29-2012 07:20 PM      Profile for Archive Smurf       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
Sounds like its going to be epic with some also emotional moments, amazing! [Big Grin]
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Sportette
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Icon 1 posted 09-29-2012 07:34 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
Thanks it's like action with emotional parts

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Sportette
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Icon 1 posted 09-30-2012 10:12 AM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
 - positive and violet

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
Sportette
Bakette
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Icon 1 posted 10-01-2012 06:30 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
2:


Violet solemnly took down the tent when she woke up. Postive woke up and helped. The moved on when they couldn't go on anymore they were in the human village. Chloe was now dead so they knew no one but a little girl who was a sorceress named Sierra. She was also gargies little sister and she doesn't age almost like the smurfs. She was really 105 but looked 10.

Positive was the one who knew the way to find her. You had to run through all the traffic then go down 17 houses on Stampede street. They made it and knocked on the door, she answered.

"Nice to see you again," she says letting them in. "What do you need?" She says sitting down.

"Food, we're starving!" Positive says. She sits on the floor,"Cold floor,cold floor!" She says standing up again.

"Sure," Sierra says and gets some crackers then comes back with the crackers. They eat them the ask one last favor.

"Do you have a spell to get us to sacrewis mountain?" Violet asks.

"Actually I do, but it might not work right you might go to several other places before the mountain." She says and stands up.

"Let's do this thing!" Positive says making both stand.

"Okay, ahem, sacrewis athium catrep gune!" She says as lightning strikes and the twins disappear. They are in darkness but, where are they really?



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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
Sportette
Bakette
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Icon 1 posted 10-01-2012 06:32 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
I'll have a picture of Sierra up by tomarrow

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
Sportette
Bakette
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Icon 1 posted 10-03-2012 05:06 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
Or tomorrow 😃😜😇😺🔹🔶🔹㈟ 2;🔷🔹🔶🔹🔸🔷

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
Sportette
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Icon 1 posted 10-03-2012 05:27 PM      Profile for Sportette  Sportette's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote  Post A Reply
2;

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Posts: 2007 | From: Buffalo,NY | Registered: Nov 2011
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