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» Smurf Forum » I made a short illustrated smurf story. (Page 9)
Author Topic: I made a short illustrated smurf story.
teenyette13
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Icon 1 posted 03-31-2015 03:19 AM      Profile for teenyette13       Edit/Delete Post 
Smurf in hand, your story was so sweet, so heartfelt, so beautiful, i cried three times! This tale of these smurfs will to survive, their care and compassion for each other, it touched me in ways ive never felt before! With how you started, the heartbreaking tale of little runt and the male smurf, i was hooked from the start. And your illustrations of those poor babies being senselessly and brutally beat, i felt my maternal instincts kicking in from just seeing that, considering the fact im not even of reproductive age, and were not the same speicies! Never have i seen such brilliance, such a dense plot line, the hate i felt for that brutal monster! Its unlike anything ive ever seen! You should try to publish this as a short story!

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Posts: 226 | From: Florida, USA | Registered: Mar 2015
Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 9 posted 09-05-2019 08:56 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
I'm genuinely concerned. To everyone involved. Looking back on this nearly 11 years later... what do you think about this story now?
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Crisptix
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:17 AM      Profile for Crisptix       Edit/Delete Post 
I heard about this story years before I decided to join Bluebuddies. But I joined this place anyway simply because I like the smurfs.

I think this was a terrible story by the way. The fetish elements are blatant and get worse as the story progresses. Gratuitous and Graphic details about torturing baby smurfs, how can anyone find this acceptable?

The term "torture porn" exists for a reason. And this is text book porn. Your rules of conduct even state that sexual and abusive content is not allowed on this site yet this story has stood here for years un-challenged. That is despicable.

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:25 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
Agreed. How the hell did ANYONE find this "cute"?
The only person who called OP out was beat down by everyone for one picture.

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Posts: 11 | From: Space Station 13 | Registered: Sep 2019
babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:31 AM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
Only logging in just to leave this comment but I’ll be honest I was a dumb 12/13 year old that didn’t really know any better or anything about how bad this story was.

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Crisptix
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:32 AM      Profile for Crisptix       Edit/Delete Post 
Yeah a picture that was actually official art by Peyo (or at least his company) to promote Unicef (Emergency disaster relief for children) with shock value. But there was nothing sexual about that Unicef picture.

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:33 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
quote:
Originally posted by babysmurfrocks:
Only logging in just to leave this comment but I’ll be honest I was a dumb 12/13 year old that didn’t really know any better or anything about how bad this story was.


I understand. Y'know, people could see this as wholesome if they only read the first parts, before the OP either had a mental break between writing the next ones or had this plan all along.

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babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:36 AM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
Honestly I likely just glossed over those later parts without much thought back then cause it was at least something to read. But yeah looking now is big yikes

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:38 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
Glad to know you now realize just how messed up this story was.

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babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 10:41 AM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
Indeed. I’m really no longer into Smurfs but I just wanted to comment

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 11:03 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
I mean, will we ever learn who the real creator was?

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Crisptix
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 11:08 AM      Profile for Crisptix       Edit/Delete Post 
Most likely not and I kinda don't care. Dude is probably long gone and forgotten this place. And good riddance.

The last time the OP posted anything was 2009.

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 11:11 AM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
Yeah, good riddance. I do hope he was stopped, or got therapy or something before he actually hurt a baby.

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Max Payne, I envy your name.

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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 12:27 PM      Profile for Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette       Edit/Delete Post 
Yeah I wasn't really too into this one... I'm still stuck on how to continue mine

(if you want to read it, it's the first link in my signature below... Have questions? Go to the second link in my signature. Thank you)

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I may not always have the answer, but when I do, I stick with it!
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Posts: 1190 | From: Soul Searching... Somewhere in Florida, | Registered: Aug 2014
HuckleberrySmurf
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 01:23 PM      Profile for HuckleberrySmurf  HuckleberrySmurf's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
I'm guessing those who didn't see anything wrong with this story were either young or English isn't their first language, so perhaps they didn't understand how bad it really is. It's still so weird to me how many people were okay with this and thought this was in any way acceptable.. I couldn't get through more than just a few parts and I still had to skip some.. it's so creepy and off-putting. Somehow the whole thing, even before the torture, feels disturbing.
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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 01:40 PM      Profile for Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette       Edit/Delete Post 
To me, it reads like the case files documented an agent for some kind of a "Smurf Salvation Army" or "Department of Smurflings and Families" who melted down and adopted on of their child clients type of thing... Reminds me a little too much about the news articles about child abusers and terrorists... I mean, it's got ups and downs, but... The downs are a little bit more prominent...

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babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 01:45 PM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
Honestly back then I think I just liked the concept of having to take care of a baby smurf in general (obviously without the messed up torture and abuse). I mean you could probably tell from my old usernamesake lol.

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Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 02:08 PM      Profile for Ariel author of The Lost Smurfette       Edit/Delete Post 
There were a lot of seemingly heartfelt segments, I must admit (ie. the two Smurflings playing in a sock... That was pretty smurfing cute)... But then you see quite a bit of of the whole "humans abusing Smurfs and selling them into slavery" thing...

That's why I rarely looked at this...

Also there's the thing about the "humans are too big and clumsy to parent a baby Smurf" scenarios... Did those have to be so traumatic-sounding? Yeah, I understand the dryer incident... But I'm sure a few other predicaments could have been resolved using a tiny playpen and a more watchful eye... (I know it's fictional, but I can't help getting a little passionate about the safety of the teeny little babies)

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I may not always have the answer, but when I do, I stick with it!
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Submit art for the story:
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Crisptix
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 02:54 PM      Profile for Crisptix       Edit/Delete Post 
The creator knew what he was doing...or at least knew he could trick people. He could abuse the smurflings as long as he framed the events as accidents.

But the way he phrased many things, like his obsession with their "tender" tails, noses, and worse their exposed bottoms, is more than enough to give away how much he was into harming them.

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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 03:03 PM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
He knew a lot of things, but couldn't stop himself from being featured in a DeadwingDork video. Sad, really.

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Help
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 04:38 PM      Profile for Help       Edit/Delete Post 
You all need help. If you do not see the overt sexual overtones and the clear sadism in this story, you're naive and oblivious. This is truly disgusting and you are all insane. Smurf in Hand is basically describing child torture and trying to put it in a wholesome context, setting up all these childlike, cartoonish scenarios that always seem to end with a baby "Smurf" being badly hurt. The way he uses language - all the synonyms for "small", "cute", "helpless" and "innocent", and his gross fondness for the word "tender" to describe the Smurfs' flesh - makes my skin itch. This is disgusting, and so is everyone else who would describe this as a wholesome and loving story. Get help.

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you all need help

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babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 04:48 PM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
I don’t disagree with your statement as yes this story is very disturbing and disgusting as I view it again as an adult, but honestly what you’re saying is falling on deaf ears as most of these people who found nothing wrong with this story probably haven’t checked this forum in years and are unlikely to come back. Hopefully all of them, including the author have found help by now it’s been almost 10 years.



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Alden Bluetenberger
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 05:10 PM      Profile for Alden Bluetenberger       Edit/Delete Post 
you watched deadwing's video?

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babysmurfrocks
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 05:33 PM      Profile for babysmurfrocks  babysmurfrocks's Figurine Checklist      Edit/Delete Post 
Yup I saw it a couple hours ago

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Crisptix
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Icon 1 posted 09-05-2019 05:44 PM      Profile for Crisptix       Edit/Delete Post 
Lol I'm sure a couple of people who supported and defended this thread are still active. I'm sure they are as I've seen them and talked to them. But I won't say who unless they want to say something.

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